!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
very nice update. kashish is so innocent, loved the way sujal was explaining her everything. kashish is already relying on him whn she is in trouble and love the way sujal handle everything. continue soon.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Awesome update !
Loved it !
Sujal is soo smart , and Kashish very innocent !
Waiting for next !
Update soon !
Thnx for pm !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
lovely part.......................
kashish is so innocent and naive and still shes dreaming to become an actress...................
and sujal is so caring and lovely.......................
cont very soon dear......................
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

PART 5

Sujal had been busy the whole day. He did remind himself several times that he had to call kashish par time hi nahi mil paa raha tha.

At last, he calls her during the lunch time.

k-hello.

s-Hey, its Sujal !

k-i know. [she smiles] I am amazed that you remembered to call.

s-main kuch nahi bhulta.

k-oh

s-aur batao, kya kar rahi ho?

k-bass, line mein khadi hoon subah se.

s-line mein? Kyun?

k-wait kar rahi hoon naa audition ka.

s- so kahan hai ye audition?

k-TM studios.

s-oh, that's near my office. How much you have to wait more?

k-zyada nahi, bass number aa hi gaya mera.

s-ok, all the best for it.

k-nahi nahi, abhi ek ladki ke baad hai.

s-ok, waise why don't you come over to my office after your auditions.

k-kyun?

s-kya kyun? Aise hi. Tumhe card dia tha naa, usmein address hai.

k-achcha achcha, mera number aa gaya. ok bye.

s-bye, best of luck.

k-thank you, thank you.

She disconnects the phone.

++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Sujal was engrossed in his work when his intercom beeps.

Its his receptionist's voice from the other side.

r-sir, aap se koi Miss Sinha milne aai hai

his mind is too occupied in work, he doesn't want unwanted people pestering him.

s-kaun Miss Sinha? Main kisi Miss Sinha ko nahi jaanta.

He was about to hang up the phine when he hears kashish's voice prompting to his receptionist.

'kashish, kashish bolo naa'

s-kashishhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!! oh man I....ask her to come inside my cabin.

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Kashish walks into his cabin dresses in a short kurti and a long skirt.

k-hi ! [she smiles]

s-hi ! [sujal gets off from his chair and greets her with a smile] come sit.

She sits.

s-i am so sorry for my behavior, main...

k-nahi nahi, how would you know ki main Kashish Sinha hoon.

He smiles.

k-waise aap...[she corrects herself]...tum Sujal Garewal ho mujhe pata hai.

s-yeah, kind off everybody knows that.

She nods

k-but being famous is good thing.

s-not much for me, I am much of a loner.

k-oh

s-you say, kaisa raha audition.

She makes a face.

k-ghatiya !

s-kyun? Tumhari acting pasand nahi aayi?

k-mere kapse pasand nahi aaye,'kya ghagra choli pehenke aa gai ho' [she imitates the people]

s-tha kya? Movie?

k-nahi, music video.

s-oh I see. Don't get disheartened I am sure you will get more opportunities.

k-hmm [she was actually sulking]

he knew she was sad, but he found her sulking really cute.

s-kashish, stop sulking, its ok-ayyyy !

k-naaaaa [she is half crying like a cranky kid and stumps her feet on the floor like a baby]

he smiles looking at her.

He walks to her and kneels on the floor & looks at her.

s-listen, agar tumhe wo bekaar sa video mil jata to kya hota?

k-ek scope to milta

s-milke kya hota? Tumhe agge bollywood mein item girl ka tag mil jaata. Tumhe actress banna hai naa, achchi actress, naa ki koi item girl.

She nods her head, as uske dimaag mein baat ja arahi hai.

k-hmm

s-to bass

k-thik hai thik hai, lecture mat do. Main jaa rahi hoon.

s-kahan jaa rahi ho?

k-ghar aur kahan.

s-aise hi?

k-matlab?

s-kuch nahi, achcha suno.

k-kya?

s-next audition kab hai?

k-kya pata, jab mil jaye tabhi. I hope kuch to achcha kaam mil jaye. Kyun pucha?

s-aise hi. Main phone karunga.

k-ok. Bye bye

s-bye

she walks out of his cabin.

But then again comes back in after a second.

k-arre jo kehne aayi thi, wo hi kehna bhul gai.

s-kya?

k-thank you. Kal ke lie

s-oh

k-[she again starts laughing] kal uss Vaibhav ki shakal dekhni thi, phusssssss

k zor zor se hass rahi hai.

She can't control her laughter.

After few minutes she stops.

k-waise sorry haan..[she is again laughing, while speaking]...wo...mujhe zara zyada hi hasne ki aadat hai..aur...main agar ek baar hasnaa shuru kar doon to..bass...[she again starts laughing]

sujal is also grinning seeing her laugh so innocently.

She again tries to speak in between her laughter.

k-sorry huh..main chalti hoon..bye...

she goes out haste haste.

Sujal also feels nice seeing her laughing, her bubbliness has filled the ambience with joy.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
very laughing part......
well this parts hav nothing much but watver u included is gud..i mn u shw their day to day life n hw their bond n relationaship grows slowly n sweetly,,well itna busy hone pe hi he fially made it to call k n ask for audition n d way he invites her at his office is again very gemtlemen kind of a thg.well cn imagin d embrassent whc s was having fater knowing dt k hi ms.sinha hai...n uske baat thir little n light convo is sweet..so s dhire dhire start to open up in frnt of k..aur k ka sulking fac must be very cute n tempting especially for s...well the way s make her understand abt the rightess thg which is ehind this whole audition successful nai hona...well he is absolutely rgt ki k agar is gatiya se vd main ajati to will almost ruin her career which is not even in the starting line..well gatiya isliye bcoz the audi people doe not appreciate aur pin point her acting skills but thy criticise abt her dress aur simpl ,sober yet not so out dated thoug fashionable clothes..
well k was also rgt ki ki kuch na hone se kuch hon behter ..bcoz she is hard wrkking n struggler na..so uska upset hona bhi thoda sa jyaz hai but s knws hw to make her happy n laughed..
well k is so sweet to cum after his invite n after audi jus to meet him but not foget to thank him for the help which he provided her..the day before..
well its really a amazing scene where k laughing lik a smll girl..mere saath bhi yehi hai..ek baar shuru to pphir koi bhi jagah ho saari sophistication bhool kr sirf haste rehna ..wo bhi zor zor s..hahaha...well said k ..hope pe duniy kayam hai..well so s want to grow dis bond more..tabhi to he said na ki he will call karunga wo bhi aise hi..
grt going dear..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
Hi dear....nice part!! But Sujal had to call Sujal?? Haha....nothing to offend...first line me edit kar dena...dear!!

Now coming to the part....I love the SK bonding actually....the way he remembers to call her...and she sulks in front of him...and he makes her understand...its all really cute!!

Well yeah....being famous isnt always as pleasant as it seems to be...hope Kashish will realize that....and lets see...if Sujal does sumthing or wat....hehe. Continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
hi
the up is really good
so sujal is busy in his schedule but he in that also he calls kashish
how sweet
kashish is really struggling for her career
plz cont soon soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
very sweet and cute part. loved it.
thanx fr the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
awesome part
sujal and kashish's bonding was beautifully potrayed, im glad sujal remembered to call kashish and kashish is so cute i liked the way u described her charachter.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
awesome...................
sujal remembered to call..........................very good and kashish sulking and sujal comforting her that too kneeling down..................the bond is lovely..........................cont soon dear.................

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