!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Great part
Kashish aur Sujal ki date kafi hatke thi...for both of them. For Kashish because this is the first time that she has been out on a date. And for Sujal because he has enjoyed to spend time with some one who is innocent and honest.
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 4

Sujal stops his car near her apartment.

k-Thanks for the lift.

K gets down, sujal also gets down.

s-so, this is your home. [looking at the building]

k-emm.i live here..actually papa ke boss ka ghar hai ye. Wo log sab Canada mein rehte hain..wo kya hai naa [she whispers as if telling a secret] wo bohot kanjus hain.

s-oh

k-actually, yahan ek care taker rehta tha, mjhe ghar de dia rehne ko to usko nikaal dia. Usko salary nahi deni padti naa ab, aur main hoon to ghar mein kuch unka saamaan bhi pada hai, furniture etc, unki bhi dekh-bhaal ho jaati hai.

S nods.

s-hmm, I see.

k-emm..emm..aaiye naa ghar mein.

s-no I am fine

k-nahi, aap itna durra aye mere lie, chai coffee kuch to pike jaiye.

s-coffee? [he raises his eyebrow] so you are inviting me to your place for a coffee?

k-haan, to? [she confused seeing his expressions as she cannot understand the hidden meaning of what she had just said]

s-to ye ki [he looks down at her aur use aise baat kar raha hai jaise bachche ko samjha raha ho] ki, mujhe to keh dia, aage se kisi aur se ye matt kehna.

k-kyun? Maine kya galat kaha? Chai-paani ke lie to puchungi hi naa.

s-arre, aise kisi ko ghar pe bulana coffe ke lie yahan means inviting the person.

k-haan, I invited you.

s-emm..it means that the girl is interested in..emm..physical intimacy ..you know..[he feels a bit awkward saying this to her]

k-ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!! achca hua bata dia. Kitni gadhi hoon main.

Sujal chuckles.

s-koi baat nahi, chalo main chalta hoon.

k-[she smiles] ok bye

he goes a few steps then turns as he remembers something, then again walks to her.

s-ek cheez to bhul hi gaya, tumhara number?

k-emm..haan...98********

s-he saves, this is mine [he gives a her a card]

k-ok thanks

he again starts to go, but looks over his shoulder at her.

s-waise

she looks at him

k-haan?

s-aise kisi ko number bhi mat diya karo, soch samajhkar diya karo.

K nods obediently. He smiles and just waves her a good bye & goes.

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The small date turned out to be good he thinks as he drives, the girl was nice. He does not regret the decision he made impulsively.

But still he is in two minds whether to call her again or not.

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Kashish thinks as she rests her head on her pillow that the man she met was so much unlike the way sheena had described.

He had something that was so very different from others, but she cannot pin point the exact thing.

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Its almost been a week after the small date.

Work pressure in his office was increasing so, he was in the office till late.

He was busy working on his laptop when his phone rings.

'kashish' is displayed on his phone's screen.

He wonders why is she calling, that too so late.

He picks up the phone.

s-hello

k-helloo ! [her voice depicts that she is unsure and nervous] I am so sorry maine aapko aise disturb kia.

s-its ok. Hua kya? Is everything alright?

k-nahi naa [she starts speaking in whispers] wo kya hua naa ki mujhe chandni ke saath aana tha ghar, ek modeling assignment tha uske baad, naajaane chandni jaldi mein kahan chali gai, to iss Vaibhav ne mujhe kaha ki main chod deta hoon ghar, to main maan gai.

s-Vaibhav?

k-wo bhi wahan pe model tha.

s-oh ok. To? Everythin is fine now naa. You are home naa.

k-nahi, ghar to aa gai..par...ye piche piche aa gaya mere andaar ab..kehta hai..'I have just dropped in for a cup of coffee'..emm...you know naa wo...'coffee'..baitha hua hai jaa hi nahi raha..oh God , main kitni stupid hoon maine aapko phone kar dia...par mujhe samajh hi nahi to...

s-shhhh ! use phone do!

k-phone?

s-haan, just give the phone to him

k-ok

she walks to the other room where vaibhav was sitting.

k-vaibhav. Baat karo.

Vaibhav looks up in confusion & takes the phone from k.

v-hello?

s-hello, vaibhav. I just wanted to thank you that you took the trouble of giving a lift to Kashish.

v-sorry, who's this?

s-Sujal.

v-main kisi sujal ko nahi jaanta.

s-Sujal ko nahi jaante to, SG industries ko to jaante hi hoge naa.

v-haan to

s-to ye ki, SG industries ka jo SG hai, wo Sujal Garewal hai, aur wo main hoon. [uss bande ki to wahin pe hi band bajj gai] Soooooo....coming to the point, kashish and I are very good friends, very good so, she was telling me ki kaise you helped her today, so I just thought that I should thank you.

v-ooooooooooooh !!!!!!! sir, thank you ki kya zarurat hai. Ye to mera farz tha

s-yeah, bikul.

v-haan ji, sir

s-hmm, waise tumhe nahi lagta, kaafi raat ho chuki hai, tumhe kashish ke ghar se chale jaana chahie.

v-yes sir, sure sir, ok sir

jaldi jaldi khada ho jaata hai.

s-waise listen

v-yes sir.

s-phone kashish ka hai, use deke jao

v-yes yes sir, yes sir.

Bhaag ke kashish ko phone deta hai, aur wahan se rafoo chakkar ho jata hai

K was laughing uss ladke ki buri haalat dekh ke.

She takes the phone, but she cant control her laughter.

k-hello..[she is still laughing]

s also smile hearing her laugh.

k-oh, thank you so much, uski haalath dekhne layak thi. Aisa kya kaha aapne?

s-jo bhi kaha, par tum mujhe aap-aap mat bolo, uncle types lagta hai.

k-ok ok, sorry. I don't know how much to thank you.

s-then don thank me.

k-i am sorry, main aage se kabhi bhi aise , kabhi bhi phone nahi karungi, aap kitni busy hote hoge mujhe andaaza hai.

s-Tum !

k-haan haan, tum.

s- first of all stop being formal ok, I am glad you shared it with me. Sach kahun, mujhe achcha laga, it just felt good.

K smiles.

s-sooo? Hows life?

k-lots of auditions, that's it.

s-don't worry, thoda struggle to karna padta hai.

k-how's your life?

s-lots of work.

k-awww ! poor you!

s-yeah ! so? Kal bhi audition?

k-haan wo...

S cuts her

s-hey sorry kashish, but abhi ek overseas client call ayega, I will talk to you tomorrow, ok?

k-yeah ok

s-i am really sorry, I will surely call you tomorrow. Its just that the call....

k-its ok I understand, ok bye, good night.

s-good night, bye.

They disconnect the phone.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
hi 😊
the up is really good😊😊😊😊
so sujal kashish ko uske ghar drop karta haai 😊😊😊😊😊😊aur kashish invites him for coffee par😊😊😊😊😊 usse kaise pata tha ke yahaan coffee ka matlab 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉kuch aur he hota haai 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆sach kahu toh yaar mujhe bhi aaj he pata chala that coffee pe invite karna matlab all that
baap re main toh aur kabhie kisi ko coffee ke liye nahin bolunge 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
but i liked the way sujal kashish ke convo hue😊
plz aase sweet sweet up dete rahene aur hume khush karte rahena 😉
plz cont soon and pm me
Edited by ronojoy_ria - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
nice part
well its so sweet of s ki k ko smjha raha hai itne pyar se ..ek ajnabi hoker bhi he thinks for her safety n security in future..she is so innocent aur aaam logo ki tarah hi soch ti hai but s is all aware abt this real world..the way he mk her understand abt coffiee thg is nice..oh so k ne ram kahani puri suna di abt her livin.
well to dono hi badeeee khush hai first meeting k baad kyun na ho are ek hi mulkat main itne caring n comfortable to dusri main kaha tak pachuenge.well s to kabhi free ho ni sakta aur ye bhi kitna sochta hai yaar...aur ye k pagal hai itna samjhaya s ne hint di s ne abt hw to behave in frnt of dis wrld phiirr bhi she led that vaibhav inside her home..well she is alos hhelpless na wit her vry sweet n innocent nature.par waise acha h ki k ne akla se kaam liya aur bina soche samje s ko phone kiya..kya baat bhi hi se aap ki jagah tum not bad.well the way innocently xplain him whl situation is cute n the way he explain the whle thg is vry vry gud n hillarious.bechara vaibhav kya soch aur kya mila..lift bhi fokat main gayi.hahaha
ab na here i want u to cont but u stop as usuall.ab k kaha ja rahi h yaar...aur s ke clients ko bhi abhi call karna tha.khair fingers crossed..k kuch aur pagalpan na kare ya phir kare;
well cute part
pls cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
i liked the innocence of kashish.....i want sujal to always take care of her.......hope they fall in love soon.......loved how sujal told off the guy......update soon and thanz for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww.....mujhe bara maza aya yaar!! Sujal kitne pyar se Kashish ko samjha raha tha....she is soo innocent and he is like a guardian to her...hehe. Inviting sum1....lolz.....that was really cute!! And am glad Sujal ne number le liya....and just when I was thinking "manga aur de diya?"....he says "aise number bhi nahi dete"...lolz. But then its Sujal....number dena to banta hai....hehe.

Now that Vaibhav portion....was hilarious!! "Sujal ko nahi jante....SG industries ko to jante ho....SG industries ka jo SG hai wo Sujal Garewal hai...and wo main hu"...☺️ 🤣...Badhiya dialogue tha yaar!!

Loved the progress to 'tum'...hehe. Now w8ing for the next part dear....continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing part 😊..kashish ka kya hoga .. So naive & innocent..sujal ko bahut mehnat karni padegi... Sujal so decent ..so sweet 😳 lovd how he explained the meaning of "coffee" 😉 😉 he was 2gud in vaibhav case i wish i cud c vaibhav's face it wud hav been priceless... SK convo was nice... So baat "tum" tak pahunch gayi...seems nice progress.. Lets see if mr. Sujal calls again ..hope he doesn't 4get... & do i c a unexpectd future SK meeting 😉 continue soon... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow, amazing part neelu. loved it. kashish is so innocent !!! loved their convo very much.
thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i loved this part sujal is soooooooooooooo cute gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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now that was a awsome update
so Sujal Kashish ko ghar chorne jaata hai to Sujal usse woha ki life styele ka kuch basics sikhata hai
jaise ki coffee ka hidden meaning, kisi anjaan aadmi ko phone no. naa dene ka importantance bata raaha hai.
Kasish sach main bholi aur gadhi dono hai, uske liye perfect match Sujal hi hai.
Sujal bhi kitna concerned hai Kashish ki security ko lekar
Sujal ke andar logo ko instant judge karne ka ek power hai, aakhir ho bhi kyun naa, afterall he is a successful buissenessman
Sujal ne jis tarah se phone main hi Vaibhav ka hawa nikal diya thats funny
arre sujal ka personality hi aisa hai, to uske samne gadha to bhagega hi, but yaha to samne hi nahin aana padha, phone par hi accha sabak sikha diya
Kasish Sujal ke upar depend karne laagi hai
yahi woman ka instinct hai usse pata chal jaata hai kis par trust karna chayiye, kis par nahin
interesting part
great going
plz continue soon

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