Mayur FF- Love will find a way Uptd Part 34 Pg 146 - Page 21

great.................i hope ki yeh dono line pe ajaye...................thnx for the pm............update soon

Originally posted by: x.Heena.x

Heyyy...i really love this concept..and u write very very well!! The only thing is that i find that the story isnt moving fwd...after 6 updates mayur have spoken only once...is it poss to move the mayur story fwd...well more interaction between them...please dont get me wrong...i think its an excellent ff...and u write amazingly and i look fwd to ur updates...but jus a small point!

awesome update Payal!

lovely..🤗..they are still jumbled with their thoughts..😆😆

superb work payal 👏

Payallll....😃😃

Great update dear...me loving the way Shilpa is handling Mayank...hehe...he seems to have no choice at all😆😆 Im wondering if you will show Nupur looking for her prince charming...hehe😆😆 i just cant wait to see how they end up getting engaged and then married..waiting for nok jhoks and pyaar😳😳....jaldi update karo plzzzzzzzzz😃😃

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

nice update Payal.

amazing...........lovely.

love shilpa-mayank convo............shilpa aunty roxxxx...................she's d best mom in the world.

waiting for mayur marriage.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

Thanks Suja😃

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

awesome update Payal!

loved it to the core

waiting for the next part

plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

Thanks favouriteofall🤗

Originally posted by: -Mehak

lovely..🤗..they are still jumbled with their thoughts..😆😆

Thank u jee Mehak🤗 ya they are😆

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

superb work payal 👏

really wanna know aage kya hoga 😍

thnx for de pm🤗

Thanks Jiya🤗