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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

awesome update loved it

thx lot for the pm

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

awwww..... part 6.. sho cute!!!!!😳
luvd Mayu-priya convos
yay... MN frnds...😃
but...i' m really scared 4 d future!
hope..everything wil b 5n!😃

& wowie... spaghetti & cream soup!...i'm feelin hungry now!!!😛

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Mulan.

@mulan.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

uff!!! kinza yar everytime you wrote i think this is the best part!!!!!!!!! too good!!!!!
wow!!!!! m speechless!!!!!!!
u wrote it soo well!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
and the ending!!!!!!!! fabulous!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

mano na maano
dono k hathon main
yadoon ki kuch zanjeerain hain...

wow!!!!!! beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

superb update Mehak

loved mayank n priya's convo 😳

this ff is realy interesting

m waiting for the next part

plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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459718

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

No No No, i can see it already Nupur is kinda falling for him the dimple thing..... which i don't like a bit. I kinda hurts me to see her fall for the man who destroyed her dreams, but i know its your story and i'll wait to read ahead. I loved M & P scene together, they seemed to gel well without any hesitation. And I'm glad Mayank knows Priya is Nupurs daughter.

They are friends....the ladder to love right up next!

Supber Update, Im so attached to this story so i'm sorry if i come out to be rude sometimes about Mayank.

Sajjal

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

awesome part!!
loved mayank and priya's convo..
waiting to read next part..
cont soon :)

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

So cute part

Thanks for Pm

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Mehak it was an awesome update👏

finally an update where Mayank-Nupr-Priya all were a bit relaxed n happy😆

though Mayank had tears.....but his mistake was such that has to/should bear it..........

Thanks for sharing😃

and about Spagetti n Cream Soup..............Keep it up😆👍🏼

Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#209

OMG Mehak.. I have never ever been so scared of further updates... i dont know what is going to happen when the truth is revealed...

Nevertheless, beautiful update..

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Zehnaseeb

@Zehnaseeb

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#210

fab update as usual 👏 My prediction was right again I'm psychic 😆. Nupur will definitely fall for him don't know how she'll react once she finds out the truth. Feeling sad for her 😭.
Thanks for the pm keep up the great work🤗

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