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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

first of all mehak a very very very happy new year to u dear and coming to FF i loved the idea plz dnt forget to pm me heheheheh just joking plz mehak cont soon and thx alot for giving us a beautiful new year gift

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Radha

@rads14

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#12

OMG..u hav shown mayank in a completely different role!
waiting to know wht happens next!
cont soon :)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

mehak
i have no word to describe this update
i was crying while reading this update
i feel so bad for this girl(i think the girl is nups)
u know what- it was one of the reality of our society
i really hate such ppl and i hate so called TOP Architect of USA Mr. Mayank Sharma
yuck-------- i just hate him...............................

mehak tumne mere mayank ko ye kya bana diya
its really very tough 4 me to imagine mayank in this way

anyway its a brilliant start
totally different
i really loved it
looking forward for ur next update

Wishing u VERY VERY HAPPY NEW YEAR to U and ur Family n Firends.
May ALLAH bless u all

Edited by fariaa70 - 14 years ago

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Mansi bhatia

@-Mansi-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Ummm...the concept is a lil horrifying Mehak. Seriously. But do write..and explore the concepts.

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valliyah

@valliyah

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

First a Biggggg Hugggg n warm welcome Back🤗.....................Happy New Year n thanks for this wonderful new year gift😃.......................!!!
Coming to ur magic land yessss its actually DARK n as usual ur title completely justifies ur concept......................n Mayu in soooo different avtaar beyond imagination.............where do u get these ideas from🤔..................everytime ek naya magic n feel short of words to appreciate u...............just outstanding concept n Mayu still in guilt concious proves he is not that baddy that was mere an impulsive act of his to maintain a high profile with so called high society chaps..............plssss give daily doses as usual😆......................thanks once agn...........thnx for pm...............!!!

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mayur_eternal

@mayur_eternal

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Mehek...i dnt knw hw to cmnt on this FF..it left me speechless...
Hw can a person be so cruel?His complex got better of his humanity..😲..
I hate such men..disgusting they are....😡

I'm nt takng Mayur's name in it...

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Prachi

@preitygal99

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Hey Mehak,

New FF with such a different concept.

It was avery good start

Continue soon

-Prachi

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Congrates U started a new FF .

When I start reading it I scared .How any one do this

how any one even think in this way So disgusting

Mayank did Such a shame less thing I just cant believe it

Desperate to read more

Thanks for Pm and cont soon

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

hey mehak.....welcum bck!😃😆😆😆😆

congrats for ur new ff😃

a very happy new year to u!😳🤗

take care sweety........god bless😊😛😊

ok..so really.......as u had told me......seriously its......its different.........

i seriously dont know wat to comment.........i mean i hate these men.......who just for d sake of their reputation destroy a galz whole life......i mean....how can sumbody........dont they feel disgusting themselves commitin a sin like this......anyways......

i knw hez guilty n hez a nice guy.....but...then.......i donno........a sence of respect for mayank is lost.....m waitin for d nxt part......

this is reality...dont knw how many gals hav face this cruel thing ........not only cruel....its disgustin......

u knw.......i thot he wudnt ......he wudnt.......but.......omg wat wud nupur must hav gone thru.....

first tym me hatin d name mayank.....😕😆🤢🤢

he shud b punished seriously.....🤢

anyways........

n this showz how realistic is ur writing.......awesome mehak.......seriously ...ur too gud jaana.....👏👏👏👏👏............i love d way u write..........i get fully engrossed in d story......W*Hr its romance or a piece on d harsh reality like this.....

m sure u'll do justice to this ff too........

do cont soon..........wanna c how this story shapes up in d future.....

(PS=ok me commenting so much😆😆😆😆but cudnt help..wen i read ur writin piece i feel like commenting so much......lol😆😆😆)

thnx for d pm dear....😊

PPS=ur name is kinza??or its ur middle name??😲😕😲😃😆

Edited by nikitasharma. - 14 years ago