MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 5

excel again🤣🤣🤣

omgggg the hallowed corridors of a-xel coll mai sab kuch hota hai🤣

okay back to normal😆
like seriously nupur gave birth to the child- she was in standard 10 na- hmm teen pregnancy- her parents supported her desicion😕

beautifully written kinza again- the touching bond btw mother & daughter- awwww the girl is silent & misses something big in her life
poor nupsie is so alone

a good writer is one i guess who makes us feel the emotions & u surely do kinza👏

u have created a good supense in story - how will mayur meet ...looking forward to it😳
though i would still love capital punishment for mayank in this ff😆

no thanks for pm😉
update regularly😃
love ya😛

i loved it.i am too excited to know what will happen when mn will come face to face.

loved this part
cant wait 4 next part
hope mayur will meet soon

Mehak!! By god..do you know ur simply AMAZING!! Such an amazing story-line..the first part scared me a bit..but this one was FAB! I liked the relation btw the mother-daughter..a bit sad..but realistic. I liked the contrast btw the lives of both of them..the breakfast part..hmm!!

the concept is just awesome, and u explained each n every thing very beautifully...

wow mehak....wg=hat mayank did was utterly disgusting but i see he hates himself for doing that....i guess he will meet nupur soon...eagerly waiting for ur next update😊

Originally posted by: Shivani1arti

excel again🤣🤣🤣

omgggg the hallowed corridors of a-xel coll mai sab kuch hota hai🤣

okay back to normal😆
like seriously nupur gave birth to the child- she was in standard 10 na- hmm teen pregnancy- her parents supported her desicion😕

wow mehak.... ur update sent me shivers... lovely.... beautiful..... thx for the pm... do pm me wen u update the next part.... :)