MJHT FF We R A Family -The End- - Page 7

awesome update

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

awesome update

loved mayur n sajan scenes

cont soon n best of luck fr exms

Thank u soo much!!

wowww annie i just read the both parts and they r amazing nd i love the karvachoth idea

thx alot for the pm

Originally posted by: jes_jade

First of all....Congrats Annie for starting a new one...🥳

I really appreciate ur storyline...Awesome thinking!!👍🏼

Both the parts were superb!!👏👏
SAYANK's realization abt real life & Karwachaut scenes are well written!

Cont soon...😃

Thanks Alot!

hey annie, sorry for replying late...........it was toooooo late.

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

hey annie, sorry for replying late...........it was toooooo late.

but i complete ur 2 update.

first of all congrats for ur new seq FF👏............d starting was fab. i loved d way u described their realization of their responsibilities🤗. finally they realized..........it was awesome that mayank baged a job n they leaving d gang...........samrat also baged a job, it thot he baged a job of BB coach in mayanks college..........silly me 🤪🤣

it was very nice start n interesting update............m waiting for karvachauth n nupurs reaction after she gt d news.........n gangs reaction too.

bt m very angry on u...............how dare u not include me into ur pm list😡...........dont do this further............warna😈

continue soon.

pm me.

Thank U Soo Much Suja.
Will Add U To The PM List Surely!

So Guys,
Chapter Three:Break The Fast,
So @ BenIa Room First,
Dia Gets Ready,
In A Red Saree
Dia:Benji...Main Kaisi Lag Rahi Hoon?
Benji Comes Near Her,
Hugs Her From Backside,
Benji:Meri Mrs. Benjamin Swami...Aj Se Zyada Khubsurat Tum Pehle Kabhi Nahi Lagi...
Dia:Oho!!
Benji:Aur Nahi Toh Kya...
Dia:Yaar! Yeh Chand Kab Nikle Ga...Meri Toh Bhook Keh Maare Jaan Nikli Jaa Rahi Hai!
Benji:Arre...Tumhe Nahi Pata..Chand Toh Nikal Aya!
Dia:Kya!
She Runs Towards The Terrace
When Benji Holds Her Hand And Pulls Her Back
Benji:Arre..Chand Dekhna Hai?
Dia:Aur Nahi Toh Kya?
Benji:Mere Saath Ao...
He Takes Her Near The Mirror
Points Towards Dia,
Benji:Mera Chand Toh Wahan Hai!
Dia:Benji...
She Gets Shy And Leaves

Now Cut To Uday And CJ
CJ:Arre Yaar...Yeh Mera Pehla Karvachaut Hai...God! Badi Bhook Lag Rahi Hai...
Uday:Toh Chand Ka Intezaar Kar Rahi Ho?
CJ:Hmm...Aur Uss Time Ka Jab Tum Apne Haathon Se Mujhe Paani Pilao Ge Aur Khane Ka Pehla Niwala Khilao Ge...
Uday:Sach Mein?
CJ:Han..[She Blushes]
Uday:Awww...
He Hugs Her...
Now Cut To MayUr

Nupur Gets Ready And Wears A Red Saree Too...
She Is Just Getting Ready While Mayank Is Again In His Thoughts...
Mayank In His Mind:Aik Pal Keh Liye Yeh Bhi Maan Loon Keh Nupur Maan Jayegi ...Leikin Anjali Aur Pranam...Woh Dono Toh Kabhi Samrat Gunjan Preeti Benji Dia Neha Ansh Uday CJ Aur Raj Ko Chodne Ko Tyar Nahi Honge...
When Nupur Gets Ready,
Nupur:Mayank!! Main Kaisi Lag Rahi Hoon?
Mayank Comes Out Of His Thoughts
And Sees Nupur
She Was Looking Such A Mesmeric Beauty
Mayank:Nupur...
He Goes To Her
And Kisses On Her Shoulder Bone...
Mayank:Nupur...Tum Bohot Sunder Lag Rahi Ho...And Red Is So Ur Color...
Nupur:Red Mera Nahi Suhagano Ka Color Hai Mayank...Jab Aik Larki Lal Rang Ka Sindoor Laga Leti Hai Toh Uss Lal Rang Ko Apne Suhag Ki Nishani Bana Kar Rakhti Hai...
Mayank Hugs Her From Backside...
Mayank:Oye Hoye Mrs. Sharma Aj Toh Badi Pyar Bhari Baatein Karne Lagi...
Nupur:Ap Se Hi Seekha Hai Mere Mr. Sharma!
Mayank: I Love U Jaan!
Nupur:Love U Too!
Now Cut To SaJan

Samrat Sees Gunjan Getting Ready,
He Slowly Goes To Her,
Goes Much Near To Her...
And Then,
Kisses Her On Her Forehead!
Gunjan:Samrat Yeh Tum Kya?
Samrat:SSSHHHH...Aj Mera Khud Par Kaboo Nahi Hai Chashmish...Aj Mujhe Karne Doh Jo Mujhe Karna Hai...
Gunjan:Mujh Par Toh Pehle Hi Tumhara Haq Hai Samrat...Tumhe Haq Hai Aj Jo Karna Chahte Ho Kar Lo...
Samrat Comes Closer To Gunjan
They Are Both About To Kiss...
When A Voice From Downstairs Come,
"Chand Nikal Aya Hai"

Now Its On The 3rd Floors Terris,
Where 4 Of Them First Go And Do The Pooja Of The Moon,
And Now They Bring There Pooja Thalis And Everyone Comes And Stands In Front Of Their Husband...
Now First Mayank And Nupur,
Nupur First Does Mayank's Aarti,
Then Sees The Moon Through Her Chani And Then Mayank,
And Now She Bows To Take His Ashirwad
Where Mayank Stops Her.
Mayank Shakes His Head As If He Is Saying No,
Mayank Then Picks The Water And Feeds It To Nupur,
Then A Piece Of Chapati And Wrapped Inside Is Daal,
Nupur Eats It,
Then Mayank Hugs Her,
Now SaJan
Gunjan Does Samrat's Aarti,
Then Sees Samrat And The Moon Through A Chani,
And Now Gunjan Moves Down To Take His Ashirwaad,
Where Samrat Stops Her,
And Then Samrat Feeds Her The Water And Food...
And The Same Act Is Done By BenIa And Cj-Uday Too...
While Kids And Shilpa Aunty Watched This Happening And Smiled....



Ok Guys This Was All For This Chapter,
Hope U Liked It,
Now Will Update After 20th Jan,
Coz Of Back To Back Exams,
Till Then,
Bye,
Love You All,
Annie

Sho sweert