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Posted: 14 years ago
waitinggggggggggggg my brain will nt work until u update d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
roopali,
same with me also.
i am keep on refreshing this page. plzzzzzzzzz update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
this update is esp'ly for HEERMEHER and also Vrsharma, rsroopali
Part 22

He felt that his heart would burst with her pain, her sorrow;

he cursed himself for ignoring the initial bad vibes he was getting,
if only he would have reacted a little fast she would not have to go through all this,
if only he would have been here few minutes earlier she would have been safe and sound,
he hugged her tight, and lifted her when he felt she may faint
then he saw blood oozing from her head,
he lost his temper, he held her closely not letting her go,
and turned to Raj who was held by Satish,
he held his hair and dragged him as he had dragged her Geet and hit his head on the tree,
then kicked him and broke his elbow similar to the one where Geet was bleeding,
she sensed murder in his motives and called him, Maan don't please Maan let the law punish him Maan and she fainted.

He picked her up and looked at Shiv, who directed him towards the emergency, meanwhile police came and arrested Raj and his gang, Maan asked them to take the gang his lawyer will file in the charges.

Geet was in ridiculous shape, due to dragging her hair were a mess;
due to continuous slapping her cheeks have swollen and her head was bleeding profusely,
she was beyond recognition.
She was admitted immediately, cleaned and bandaged, she was still unconscious.

Kapoor's and Khurana's back home were wondering what happened and were continuously calling Maan and Prem,

once out of this mess Prem called and informed them;
they came running by,
Savitri Devi asked who Geet is, Maan told her she is the same girl sponsored by KC and their future Architect.
He then asked Gauri to call Sam and inform her that Geet will be not coming for next few days as she met with an accident.

Maan called Shiv and talked to him about Raj's case;

he also asked for his permission to reopen Anjali's case;
Shiv was taken aback by the fact that he knew about his sister;

M: I told Geet to ask you about this, but she said she will talk when the time is right

S: Geet told you about Anjali
M: no, I told her
S: how come you know all this?
M: I have been tracing him since he returned.
S: why?
M; may be for Geet's safety, I never liked this guy, and asked her to stay clear of him
S: there's a flaw in this case, no witnesses are ready to accept the fact and Anjali is in coma
M: we have worked every thing out, my lawyers have made a fool proof case, and plus we have traced Angela and few more victims
S: you have, how?
M: how does not matter, now matters
S: but his father is a minister
M: only for few years and I am MSK no one messes with me
S: ok I am ready
M: one more thing
S: yes
M: are you genuinely interested in Gauri?
S: (blushes) yes
M: will you marry her?
S: only if her parents allow
M: they will
S: and Gauri, I have not told her that I '. You understand
M: yes, she too likes you
He called his lawyer and they discussed the case once they were done they went back to Geet's room.
Everyone was there, Maan approached Ram
M: Papa this is Dr. Shiv
R: hello Shiv
S: hello sir
M: he wants to marry Gauri
R: what?
M: he's a nice guy, I had checked his background, he will keep my
sister happy
R: how do you know so much?
M: she's my sister as Anvesha is, I am her big brother
R: ok I will like to meet his parents but before that I will like to know what Gauri thinks about him
M: he responds to his feelings
R: she said so
M: no, Geet said so, and I know she never throws such pranks
R: Geet, but she never told us
M: because she herself never realized it, I had to pastor her to
know Gauri's feelings and she admitted
R: then it's ok from me
M; one more thing Prem
R: Prem also with someone
M: no, he just praises that girl
R: which girl, Geet told you
M: no, she does not know, I just by chance came to know about
it, in Mumbai I saw him drooling over her and then I further checked I came to know that both love each other but have never admitted in front on each other
R: who is she?
M: Heer, Sameera's cousin, Sameera is KC in charge here
R: you are truly their big brother
Hugs him tight and goes to tell all this to Gayatri
Prem who is listening to all this comes and hugs Maan: where have you been all this time bro?
M: in your hearts
Both are almost in tears
Gayatri asked the 3 Maan, Prem and Gauri to go home and change as they were a sight to see, she also send Anvesha and DM with them.
In the evening Maan returned to the hospital and asked Gayatri to go and take rest he will be by Geet's side
Gay: Maan how do you know Geet?
M: means
Gay: I mean
M: oh Maa, she's our future director and plus she lives with you,
and I know everything about you all.
Gay: I just realized, thanks for everything, for Gauri and Prem
M: Maa they are my siblings, don't shun me out of my family by thanking me, I ma your son, remember
Gay: I never forgot
M: and never ever say thanks to me, now go and rest and ask Anvesha to cook something nice, she is a very good cook, and she also wants to spend some time with her mother
Gay: sure
After Gayatri left Maan sat by Geet's side, there was swelling all over her face and her head was heavily bandaged.
She came to consciousness the moment Maan touched her hand,
she tried hard to open her eyes but failed there was swelling even in her eyes.
M: I am here no need to open your eyes, they will pain
G: she tried to speak but her lips have split due to slapping.
M: why is there any need to speak you just have to think to
communicate
I want to see you
You can once you are alright
I am looking rubbish
You can never look rubbish you are the most beautiful creature
I never imagined our meeting on these terms
This is what is destiny
But we could have met on better grounds
And missed being hugged by you, I never thought that when we will meet you will instantly hug me
And you liked it
Loved it
Am speechless
Now take rest and I am here by your side always
Thank you for coming in my life
Thank you for coming in my mind
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part 23 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/38724618
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wow its beautiful
n thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx for updating otherwise i would have gone mad refreshing d page
n hope geet recovers sooooooonnnnnnnnnn n maan n geet both realise their luv feelings for each other
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Posted: 14 years ago
geet ke face per swelling thats bad

thanks for posting it today
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Posted: 14 years ago
hai dont do this, let them see each other and let them have their hug in peace, hai i feel like crying about geet was mishandled, great msk gave a nice bashing to the guy, you should have written more, he didnt let geet and msk have anice hug

anyway that was a nice update, thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome😉😉😉
convo bet maaneet was really awesome i loved it👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
I want to see you
You can once you are alright
I am looking rubbish
You can never look rubbish you are the most beautiful creature
I never imagined our meeting on these terms
This is what is destiny
But we could have met on better grounds
And missed being hugged by you, I never thought that when we will meet you will instantly hug me
And you liked it
Loved it
Am speechless
Now take rest and I am here by your side always
Thank you for coming in my life
Thank you for coming in my mind
i felt these lines some thing like indirect confession abt their feelings
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Posted: 14 years ago
kya baat hai...MSK is very fast...
sabki love life ki trouble solve kar di....
within hrs sab settle kar diya...explain kar diya....impressive...
ab apni love life bhi track par le aao...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved maan's convo wid shiv,ram n gayatri...
n of course his telepathy wid geet was just superb...
thnx 4 d pm..

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