FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 3 05/03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#881

awesome one yaar loved it very much
bechara maan apni biwi se pit gaya
maan even had so much close friends as arjun n annie in college!! i was surprised.
and ofcourse the love making was awesome
thnx 4 d pm

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Limerance

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Posted: 14 years ago

#882

Sorry for the late comment in regard to time machine one. I wanted to wait until you completed it before posting but now I wish I had posted, oh well. I must say this entire time machine update was full of surprises for me. First off I was pleasantly surprised to see Maan giving a presentation, never expected that. Even more unexpected are his friends but I like them. After reading part two I understand why Maan was acting all funny and touchy in public with Geet, he'd had one too many shots. And then Geet's reaction of bashing him in front of his friends and fleeing the caf was just too much. I felt as if she kind of overreacted there. I mean I'm sure it was shocking to hear of her husband's pastimes but I think she could have handled it better. But I guess had it been different we wouldn't have gotten to read about Maan making out with his wife in the streets. Lol which leads me to my final point, the ending was wonderful very sensual and romantic. And of course these nights are numbered I just wonder for how long though. I hope she doesn't stay in SF too long! Thanks for the great update after such a long time I enjoyed it. 😃

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#883

Fabulous update! True, a new side of Maan unveiled, one more layer unearthed, bringing them more close and helping her in knowing him better. I liked when Maan ensured that carnally, even she wanted him as much as he did at that moment. Yeah, they are gonna be physically apart, but am glad that they would be mentally and emotionally bonded strongly by then and will help them to understand each other. They won't be distant in that sense.

Do continue soon.

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Hima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#884

Awesome update Thank you.
You showed so many more facets of Maan.
Even Geet and his pals got shocked along with us.
But great revelations.
AA track is done for now I guess.
So their nights together are numbered isn't it.
Hope there is no too much of lambi judaii.
Geet will go to SF I suppose.
On a lighter note lets see if we can meet up with her in the bay area.
Hope Maan joins along too.

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known

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Posted: 14 years ago

#885

welcome back

my dear real miss reading

NYT wow maan & arjun were

close friends in coll interesting

atleast he heard friends

oh maan geet knows him well

they real needed time alone

brilliant update

pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

thank yu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

thanks pm

Never Enough of You...

You could give me a kiss,
that would sizzle to the core;
yet I'd not be appeased
if you gave me a dozen more.

You could hold me close
to warm this heart of red
yet you'd find that my
desire had not fled.

You could visit me at night
and please me with your touch.
yet come the dawn,
I'd want you just as much.

You could try something old,
or something new and improved,
yet my hunger for you
could never be removed.

You could kiss me, hold me,
and vow your love so true,
but no matter what you do,
I'll never get enough of you.

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podapulleh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#886

I love it! Can't wait for the next part. PM me please.

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#887

All I can say is..WOW! This was a beautiful update...

A woman with a sense of humor and ability to laugh at herself..."Surely the angst and theatricals of her life belonged on some FF forum" that line had me cracking up....

A drunk and out of control Maan- again a first...a prude (ok she is a a teeny tiny bit) Geet who participated in PDA....another first...

The last part was just beautiful....I really dont want to say anything...I think you have captured their bond and connection so beautifully that writing anything more will be injustice to it.

I really enjoyed reading the update....one that I will cherish for quite some time to come :)

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JayaR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#888

hey hasini....
it was a beautiful update......

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ameerun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#889

love it pls update the next part soon............

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Isha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#890

Sorry for the late comment...Been Busy...

THAT WAS JUST AMAZING...FABULOUS i must say...

loved the entire thing...

and seeing this college side of Maan was just a treat to the eyes...and what shocked me was that his own friends were shocked to see Maan so open...no more such thing as PDA anymore

that means Geet has changed him..for the better....

the bond b/w his friends is so cute and perfect..it doesnt make him seem like a complete introvert...and Geet can easily mingle with them...

and Maan and the drunk/junkie joke...was AWESOME...for a second i was with Geet but i realized that it couldnt be Maan...

and a walk down memory lane is always awesome...

and going out somewhere to be alone...and checking if his house has good acoustics or no was out of this world...

and the cottage scene was AMAZING..loved it...

Do continue soon...love to read your writing...

Edited by PurplePetal - 14 years ago