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m-g19

@m-g19

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#571

oow god zephyyyyyyyyy ya kha par roke daya💔💔,oh no how can ve wt , dats not so wrt.plllllllllz cont soon ,v cant wt now,hmm chocolate lp balm han☺️😉plz let poor arman taste thate fast☺️☺️☺️. lv meena.

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Riddhi

@Riddss

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Posted: 14 years ago

#572

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon
waiting for new update

love
Riddss

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Aakriti Sood

@Hazel-eye

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#573

WOW...

Amazing d chocolate one was awesome...so touching

n dis was really gud when he tell his Basket Trust me.. you should never use mobile phones while climbing pipes.. It could lead to fatal accidents..

I Seriously Loved it!!! <3

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shonadesire

@shonadesire

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#574

Hey zappy
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww awesome installment😊😛
loved it totally
i loved how u put armaan n riddhima feeling n emotions
seriously they suffered so much pain
i think pain is play important role to feel happiness if in everybody life only happiness hai i think they can't understand real happiness😊😛
i really loved ur writing skill
wowww typical ARMAAN MALIK climbing pipe once again😉
awwww OMG choclate lip balm will come soon thats great😉😉

dn't be sorry we understand ur situation
complete it soon

Edited by shilpI007 - 14 years ago

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ARKJ_4EVER

@ARKJ_4EVER

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#575

awesome part!!! complete soon cuz it seems to be really interesting their time in Riddhima's room😉...

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samiyah

@Samiyah258

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#576

Awww the pipe scene was soo adorable :) Very cute partt
Loved your update
Can't wait to read the rest!!

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crimson_10

@crimson_10

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#577

Simply loved this incomplete update of yours. You really have a way with words Zappy. I never realize when I am done reading your updates. Everything flows so smoothly that I am left speechless. Awesome!

Hope we get to see the full update soon.

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ssh57

@ssh57

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#578

A very interesting update.

But 'knowing' her and 'knowing about' her was different..

I just loved this line. And I reiterrate you have a way with words. You weave magic.

love, Shardha

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z.e.p.h.y.r

@z.e.p.h.y.r

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: ssh57
A very interesting update.

But 'knowing' her and 'knowing about' her was different..

I just loved this line. And I reiterrate you have a way with words. You weave magic.

love, Shardha

Thanks Shardha.. its really something to have you say that.. it feels nice! 😊😊

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sjain

@sjain

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#580

HURRAAYYYYY...update..update...
I luved it ..mmmmmmmmuuuuuaaaaaah...
zefyyy...plesss for next installment ..don't make me wait for longgg...
I LOVVV choco balm....❤️

Edited by sjain - 14 years ago