You made me feel so many emotions as I was reading this. I felt shocked, nervous, angry, frustrated, happy, awed. You made me cry and you made me laugh. That is the sign of a true story teller. If they can get their readers to feel what the characters are feeling and relate to them. Truly beautiful story about the love between Maan and Geet and the love they have for their daughter. I loved the incorporation of all these different characters that became a part of Geet and Maan's life. Your tied all the characters together wonderfully.
Although I do wish that you had incorporated a bit more information with what happened to Geet and Maan's parents.
Again what a beautiful and heart felt story. I'm really glad I came across it. Lovely writing! 😃