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Part 10

KC

Maan (on phone) : Do what I say.

Person : But Sir'

Maan : no but, I want you to do that. I'll pay you a good sum.

Person : OK Sir.

Maan : OK.

He hangs the phone and smiled.

Maan : Now Geet you will soon come to me and be mine forever. Just wait for few days.

Evening

Geet was about to enter her hostel but her warden stopped her. Geet looked at her warden with fearfully. She know that her hostel warden hates her as she is an orphan and she is poor. She pays hostel fees by working part-time in a coffee shop.

Warden : Kaha jaa rahi ho Geet?

Geet : room

Warden : Konsi room?

Geet : Ji meri room.

Warden : ohh.. But sorry to say Geet. You can't stay here anymore.

Geet : Kya? Maam plz don't say like that. I don't have any place to go.

Warden : I don't care. You didn't pay your fees, so I gave your room to new girl Akshya.

Geet : Ma'am I will pay the fee tomorrow but please let me stay here.

Warden : Sorry Geet but for you I can't violate policy's of this place. I gave you 10 days to pay but you didn't pay. So here is your bag and belongings. I have asked Kantha Bhai to pack all your belongings. Now leave.

Geet : Ma'am its 8:30. How will I go out at this time and find a place? My friends Pinky, Nandini and others are out of station and I have no place to go. Please let me stay for tonight. I promise I'll find a place tomorrow.

Warden : I don't care. Well, I will suggest you a place. Why don't you go to your new friend's house? She is rich right? I'm sure she let you in.

Geet : New friend?

Warden : haan. That khurana girl.

Geet : Arohi? But how can I go to her? She have done many help to me and I don't want to be a burden on her.

Warden : Well that's your choice whether to stay out whole night or stay with your friend. Now leave this place now.

Warden gave her 2 big bags and asked her to go out. She with went out with tears. When Warden made sure Geet went out, she picked her mobile and dialed.

Warden : Khurana Saab, Nalini here. Your work is done.

Maan : Did you tell her to go to Arohi?

Warden : Yes Saab.

Maan : What about her other friends?

Warden : Except Arohi Ma'am, all her friends are out of station and friends in hostel went to their home as they have 7 days holidays.

Maan : Good. Your cash will be in your account.

Warden : Ji Saab.

Maan cut his phone and had a smile on his face thinking about Geet living in his house.

Maan : Sorry Mishti, but for making you come to me, I had to do this. I love you very much and I want to give you all happiness of life. I can't wait anymore to make you mine. Daadi wants me to get marry but how can I marry someone when I love you. I know Daadi and Chutki like you and they will be happy if I marry you. I have waited many years for this.

Flashback

Maan was waiting for her outside Mandir. He knows she'll come daily to mandir and all her routines. He even stalks her to school, Mandir and candy shop. He loves to watch her licking candy. Maan told his friends about Geet the night he saw her. Yash and others were teasing him for falling for a child but Sam noticed his seriousness and possessiveness. He sounded like a man possessed when he talk of Geet. Sam asked Maan how Geet looked like and he said he will sent her photos but asked not to show that pictures to others as he don't want anyone enjoying beauty of his Mishty. Maan was waiting for Geet in temple to take her new pictures. But he got a call from Sam and was talking to her. And he took an envelope from his bag. It was her photos and he smiled seeing her beautiful pictures.

Maan : she is really beautiful Sam. i feel like taking her away from this place.

Sam : Maan... r u k? (Tensed)

Maan :hmm...i'm fine. I mean more that fine. k. Sam, i will catch u later. I got to go.

Sam : where r u going ? (Tensed)

Maan : its 6. she'll come to mandir daily at this time. can't miss that sweety. so bye. Aur haan... i've mailed her pics. Just check it and say how my Mishti look. OK. bye.

He hung the phone.

Sam : ohh...god. I never seen his this part. He talks like an insane man. God...please save the girl. (She was really tensed)

Maan put his phone in his pocket and saw Geet descending steps with a smile on her face. Her hair was wet and untied. She looked like an angel descending from heaven. He took her photos without her knowledge. Tito and Channi were with her.

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=525609&id=146348425379367&fbid=160043124009897#!/photo.php?fbid=148250431855833&set=a.146456328701910.30352.146348425379367&type=1&permPage=1 (Geet ' pic taken by Maan)

Even though she was only 15, Maan didn't back out from his feelings. He thought that she is born for him. Sam was scared when he told about Geet. Geet was only 15 but Maan was adamant to take her with him. Sam somehow convinced not to scare her and also told him to wait until she turns 18. Maan was crazy about her and soon Yash too came to know about Maan's crazy love towards Geet who is only 15 years of age.

Present

Geet was scared and tensed. She was praying to her Babaji. Suddenly 2 men followed her and she ran away from them but they followed her. She bumped into a hard body and was about to fall but the hand caught her waist before she land on ground.

Geet : Arjun

Arjun : Geet what are you doing her at this late night? And why were you running?

Geet : woh..

She turned back and Arjun followed her gaze and saw 2 men looking at her. He understood now why she ran. He took her bag from her and snaked his hand around her waist and walked her to his car. He made her sit in his car and locked the car. Then he turned towards the men who followed Geet. They saw Arjun's deathly glare and ran away. He then sat on driver's seat and started to drive. He stopped his car outside the city which was calm and quiet. He turned towards her side and took her hands in his.

Arjun : Geet, tell me why are you here at night? You know it's dangerous at night for a girl to walk alone.

Geet : warden said I can't live there as I didn't pay hostel fee till now. She gave my room to a new girl.

Arjun : But how can she throw you out at night?

Geet : She said she don't care.

Arjun : Don't worry, I will make sure she pay for it. C'mon lets go.

Geet : No, Arjun. Please I don't want to create an issue. Please.

Arjun : Then why didn't you call me or Pinky?

Geet : Pinky and Nandini are not here, they are on tour. I don't want to disturb Arohi also.

Arjun : What about me? Why you didn't call me? Now don't say you don't want to disturb me so that's why you didn't call me.

Geet : '.

Arjun : Geet we are friends. How could you think like that?

Geet : Sorry Arjun.

Arjun : Its OK. Now its late. We'll stay in my apartment today and will search for a place tomorrow.

Geet : But'

Arjun :Don't you trust me Geet?

Geet : Yes.

Arjun : Then come with me.

They drove to his apartment. It was a luxurious rich class one. He opened the door for her and they both got in. He showed her room which had king-sized bed and other luxurious things in the room. But it looked like room of a girl. It was all pink with girlish touch in it.

Arjun : This is your room. Did you like it?

Geet : Yes, but it doesn't look like a guest room?

Arjun : Because it is not guest room. Guest room is at left .

Geet : OK. But whose room is this?

Arjun : It's your room Geet.

Geet : My room?

Arjun : Haan' Your room. Now go and change your dress.

When she was about to unpack her bag, he stopped her and led to a wardrobe. It was full of beautiful churidar, cocktail dress and night suits. There was also some other beautiful girls materials like bangles, bindi, etc. Geet looked Arjun with a surprise. Arjun understood it and smiled at her.

Arjun : I bought this for my sister, who left me years back. I haven't seen her once. She probably doesn't know she has a big brother. I too came to about very late. I wish to give her all the luxury and treat her like a princess. One day when she come, I want to give her this and want to say you are always in my heart Geetu.

Geet : Kya?

Arjun : My sister's name is also Geet. That day you asked me right whether I love you? Answer is yes, because you remind me of her. My Geetu, meri choti behen.

Geet saw his tears and wiped it. Arjun hugged her and she too hugged him back. They stood for many minutes like that. Then they broke their hug. Geet too understood that she reminded Arjun of his sister and was happy. She wanted to ask where his sister was but seeing his tears she just ignored asking questions.

Arjun : Geet can I call you Geetu?

Geet : Yes

Arjun : Thanks Geetu. I'll be always there for you as your elder brother. I promise you that I'll never let anyone hurt you. But will you do me one favor?

Geet : what should I do Arjun?

Arjun : Will you stay here with me as my sister? Please.

Geet : but?

Arjun : Please. Geetu please.

Geet : Yes.

Arjun : Thank you Geetu. Aur haan all these dresses are for you. And throw your old ones because all its colour has faded and its old.

Geet : But Arjun how can I take those? Its for your sister right?

Arjun : So you don't consider me as your brother? (Sadly)

Geet : Yes Arjun . I'm now no more an orphan. I'm happy that I got a big brother who loves me and care for me but these clothes in wardrobe are really expensive and I doubt will they fit my size?

Arjun : Yes these are of your size. Remember the day when you went with Pinky and Nandini for shopping and met me in mall?(Geet nodded her head)

Flashback

Arjun came to shop for buying shirt for him and saw Geet, Nandini and Pinky at men's section and was surprised. Nandini was selecting shirt for gifting to her boyfriend Aman. Geet and Pinky got bored and excused and went to Women's corner. Arjun followed them and saw Geet picking a Green suit and Pinky asked her to try. Geet went to trial room and changed into green suit and came out. It fitted perfect for her. Then she changed back to her dress. Pinky asked her to buy it. Geet looked at the price tag and saw it was very expensive and put it back saying some excuse to Pinky. Arjun saw this and understood why she put it back. Geet tried another two dresses and did the same. She didn't buy anything for her. Arjun bought them and same size many suits, tops, etc. He put them in his car and again went back to shop to buy his shirt. On the way he met them and went to caf with them.

Present

Arjun : I don't care about money Geetu. All I want is my sister's happiness. Please don't hesitate to ask me anything and consider me as your brother. Promise that you will be yourself with me and won't hesitate to ask for anything.

Geet : Thanks Arju Ba..

Arjun : Arju Ba?

Geet : Matlab : Arjun Bhaiya.

Arjun hugged Geet and muttered thanks. Geet took necessary things from her bag and kept it in her shelf. Arjun dumped her old dress and other non-useful things inspite of her protest. They arranged her room and put all things properly. Geet wanted to cook but Arjun protested and ordered Chinese food for them. They ate while talking to each other and cleaned the table. Before going to his room, Arjun came near Geet and kissed her forehead and said "Goodnight Geetu". Her eyes were filled with tears getting love after a long time and she hugged him and said "Goodnight Arju Ba". Then went to their respective room.

Geet was happy because she got a brother and she can now say that she is no longer an orphan and give and get love which she missed all these years. She was happy to know that Arjun meant his words and he want her to live with him as his sister and shower her with love and concern. She thanked her Babaji for gifting her a sweet brother and slept peacefully after many years.

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=525609&id=146348425379367&fbid=160043124009897#!/photo.php?fbid=148431008504442&set=a.146456328701910.30352.146348425379367&type=1&permPage=1 (Geet sleeping peacefully)

Arjun was happy and also sad at same time. He was happy because Geet consider him as her brother but sad because he couldn't tell her the truth that he is really her brother, her own blood. He was scared to lose her. For her, he came to this college. The reason behind this was to protect her from his father Brij. Brij want to kill Geet for property and when he came to know this he was shocked. Shocked because Geet was his cousin sister who he had never seen and his father trying to kill her gave him another shock. So he left his and came to university to protect her. He first won her trust then he became her friend. Now happy that she consider him more than a friend, a big brother even though he is her brother.

KM

Maan was angry and tensed when his men told him that Geet went with a man in his car. Maan, to make Geet come to KM asked his men to follow her so that she has no choice other than to come to KM. But he also instructed them to keep a safe distance from her. But when they saw Arjun advancing towards them with a deathly glare, they ran away and forgot to note about the person and his car number.

Maan was really angry thinking about his Geet with another person and was thinking who he is to take Maan's Geet.

Arjun's Apartment (Morning)

Geet woke up early and made coffee for both of them. She went to Arjun's room and knocked his door. Getting no response she opened the door and weny inside and saw Arjun sleeping with open mouth. She giggled seeing this and sat beside him and shook him.

Geet : Arju Ba uttho naa

Arjun : mm sonae do Babes😳😆

Geet giggled seeing this and again called him. He was calling her babes, honey and sweety in his sleep which made her laugh. Hearing her laugh he got up and saw a laughing Geet sitting beside him.

Arjun : Hi Geet. Good morning (With Sheepish smile)

Geet : Good morning Arju Ba. Ye honey, sweety kaun hai?

Arjun : koi nahi Geet. Ye coffee meri liye hai naa?

Geet : haa ye lo. Naashta taiyar hai.

Arjun : tum jao meih abi aayi.

Geet : Haan.

Geet went out laughing. Arjun shook his head cursing himself. He was a playboy before joining Geet's college and had many girlfriends. But when he came to know about Geet, he took TC from his previous college and joined Geet's college. He stopped his old habits for his sister and made sure no boys disturbed his sister.

Geet was giggling when Arjun entered kitchen. He rolled his eyes and she suppressed her smile. But suddenly she started laughing and he too joined her. They had breakfast together and went out for a movie and came back late at night. An elderly woman saw them together and asked Arjun who she was.

Arjun : She is my sister Geet.

Lady : Ohh'

Lady looked at Geet from head to toe and found her classy. Because Arjun asked her to wear the new sundress he gave her. First, she was hesitant but then seeing Arjun making puppy face she agreed. Arjun took her to parlour and asked the beautician to give her new look. Beautician cut her hair but not too short. Then did her art on Geet's face, hands and legs. She looked more beautiful when she stepped out. Arjun hugged her and complimented her and took her out. Geet protest seeing Arjun spending money on her but he said that he is doing for his sister. She was really happy to see Arjun's love and care for her.

http://www.google.co.in/imgres?q=sundress&um=1&hl=en&sa=N&biw=1366&bih=568&tbm=isch&tbnid=WY35R_ZgNlVh_M:&imgrefurl=http://meganleiter.wordpress.com/category/favorite-things-friday/&docid=H8T-KEIf41NBoM&w=300&h=300&ei=wlN_TsKlNMTQrQf2poXuDw&zoom=1&iact=hc&vpx=332&vpy=187&dur=80&hovh=225&hovw=225&tx=123&ty=122&page=1&tbnh=172&tbnw=172&start=0&ndsp=15&ved=1t:429,r:1,s:0 (Geet's outfit)

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(Arjun)

Maan's anger was increasing day by day. Its been 4 days and no new of Geet. The investigating team was scared but was helpless.

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Edited by kinju100 - 13 years ago

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