MG FF:Prejudice Pt11 pg59 4 sept!( IMP.NOTE pg 63) - Page 22

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update sweety........😊
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update dear......👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
thnku guyz for ur lovely comments... i'll update today in evening!!!!
Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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i hope nothing (wrong) is going to happen to geet
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hey nice update... but i thought u said part 7 was going to be big update😛.... pls cont soon.. its monday already.... waiting for ur updates...
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oh sad 2 see geet soooooo sad n maan like an idiot is njoying d party
bt awesome update plzzzzz add me 2 ur pm list
Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
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Message for my sweet readers

I m sorry guyz for not updating on Monday.
will update ASAP .
Thanks a lot for ur wonderful comments. i m so happy reading ur commnts. and some of u r also suggesting me things.. thnx alot guyz. i'll surely include ur given points in coming updates.
Guyz i'll update hope fully in the evening. I m working on it only. Hopefully it will be a big part.
And i m also sorry for not been able to reply to ur comments bt will reply as soon as i'll update.
so guyz keep reading and keep commenting!

-priya🤗
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Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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Hey guyz I m just so srry for the late update even late from the proposed date!

Actually nthing better was coming to my mind! And u know it always happens that half of the things come only while I am typing for the updates' so u know'hehehe'..

So without any further ado' here the next update!..

Part 8

In the hall party was in its full form.. Every body was enjoying-some were dancing some were drinking and some were having serious talk over business, some were fixing deals. It was then when Maan noticed that Geet was missing.

Dadi was busy in talking with shivi wen Maan inquired abt Geet from her.

Maan: Dadi ma aapne Geet ko dekha kya? Kafi der se dikh rahi rahi hai. Aapne kahin bheja hai kya?

Dadi: nahi to hum kaha bhejenge.. abhi toh yehi thi. Maan aap bahar dekhiya hum ur shivani yaha ander dekhte hai. Yaha to vo kisi ko janti bhi nahi hai.. kaha jaa sakti hai achanak!

Maan: theek hai Dadi ma aap fikar mat kariye mai dekhta hoon..

Saying that Maan stormed out of the hall. The music didn't soothed him further when he came to know that Geet was missing from there. He became really worried!

He didn't know what to do. Where to find his Geet. He just silently asked god for her safety. He was blaming him self for whatever was happening.

He was moving towards the garden when Dadi's call stopped him.

Maan: ji dadi ma..kya.. vo ander nahi hai'

Nahi mai bahar hi hoon.. yaha dekhta hoon. Aap fikar mat kariye.(he hang up)

Maan(to him self): ye sab meri vaah se hua hai. Geet tum kaha ho? Please vapas aajao.

Mai hi uska dhyan nahi rakh paya. Mai hi usse yaha party mein lekar aaya tha aur maine hi usse akela chor diya. How could I do something like that.

Agar aaj usse kuch ho gaya toh mai apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paunga!

Maan came to garden area. There was nothing but silence all around. But this was not the normal one but it looked lie the deadly storm was approaching. Just then he heard some dragging sound like something is being dragged. He ran towards the sound of direction. He felt an unknown kind of fear. Fear of loosing Geet, as he approached the place from where sound was coming!

He saw at not very far place a man was dragging something. It was very dark so he couldn't make out what the person was really doing neither he could see the thing which he was dragging. But it didn't look right. They were far but then not out of sight. Maan just continued to move near!

On other hand Geet was struggling hard to get over that rogue! He was continuously dragging her to a secluded place. She first tried to hit him hard but that only excited him, then she pushed him with all her might and tried to run away but all in vain! He clutched her and slapped brutally across her face due to which blood oozed out of corner of her lips and then he just hit hard on her head which made her unconscious!

Geet was not fully in sense but she knew what was going on. She was well aware of the fact that she was being dragged to some place. But she couldn't do much coz of her head injury.

The rogue brought her to the area which was surrounded by trees, and pushed her mercilessly to the ground over the dry leaves which where scattered all over and then he bent forward to throw him self on her when someone punched him hard across his face which caused the blood to ooze out of his mouth and then again he punched him on stomach which made him throw blood out of his mouth and there he fell on ground but managed to escape!

Maan then saw Geet who was lying on the ground unconscious. He went near and bent forwards and took her in his arms. He hugged her like she was his almost lost treasure. He patted her cheeks, called her many times but she gave no response.

He was really feeling weak looking at Geet lifeless, unconscious!

He didn't no what to do and what not to. He was a kind of frightened thinking what would happen if he would have not make out and rescued her. What if he ever lost her? These thoughts were making him weak and also angry on himself!

After some time when Geet came to consciousness he held her more tightly and she just was too frightened to look or speak anything so she just hugged him back more tightly as the tears wetted her cheeks.

She knew he was her Maan. She just wanted to feel him today. She was feeling secured in his strong arms, like no fear is gonna touch her now.

Maan took her in his arms, lifted her and proceeded towards the car. He made her sit on the passenger seat and made his way to driver's seat and then called dadi ma to tell her about his whereabouts.

Maan: dadi ma vo geet mere saath hai.. ji bilkul theek hai.. ji bass thora sa darr gai hai mai usse ghar lekar ja raha hoon'''.. ji' aap fikar mat kariye mai sambhal lunga. Ji.. mai aapke liye car bhijwa doonga!. Ji bye..(he hang up)

Geet was lost in the things happened minutes ago. She was deadly frightened; when she noticed that they are not going to her house' but are going somewhere else. She looked at Maan questionably.

Maan too looked at her and understood what Geet wanted to know. He just smiled and put his hand over Geet's and said," geet mujhpe bharosa hai na?"

Geet looked at him and nodded in affirmation and then continued to look out of the window. While driving Maan stole glances at Geet. He was really worried abt her.

After some time the car halted. Geet looked outside then at Maan confusingly. Maan smiled and came out of the car and then opened door for Geet and helped her to come out.

He then brought her to outhouse where he lived, switched on the lights and made her sit on couch comfortably and then sat next to her and closely looked at her face which was stained with dry tears, bruises and blood in the corner of her lips. He then hugged her without saying anything. But this time very gently without hurting her.

The hug only showed his love and care. He then broke the hug and went inside to the room. While geet wondered what Maan was up to? But soon her confusion got over when Maan after few min. came out with the first aid box.

He sat on the couch beside her as before and started cleaning her wounds. He very carefully and gently cleaned all the wounds which were there on her hands and face and also on the legs near the toes.

(Geet's monologue)

This was the worst night of my life till now. So much happened in just one evening. At party first of all Maan left me alone.; then that Shivani came .. no no' shivi..(made an angry face), and above all Maan was talking to that shivi..of his. Then he gave words to his so called desire '."he did not marry becoz she was not with him.." argh!! Ohh god knows how much I hate this shivi.. ! and then that rogue at the bar counter tried to flirt with me and so she went to garden maha pissed. But then also babaji did not felt my sorrow. And sent that bas***d there who tried to molest me! (her eyes filled wih rage)

But after all this when I came to consciousness and found my self in the arms of the man I like the most and more over who will be my life I felt that moment so serine. Like nothing happened. And nothing will happen till Maan is with her. Though I don't know abt his feeling toward me but for me he is a very vital part of my life.

And now instead of dropping me home he has brought me here to his home. But I have no complaint toward anything he does. And beyond it I m loving it here. After all this is the place where I'll be living after marriage(the thought it self turned her cheeks pink).

He is so close to me now. And cleaning my wounds so tenderly. I don't know what I m feeling more; the burning sensation of medicine which he is applying or the pleasure of him being this close!

Watching him so close to me, I m several times tempted to touch his worried face. I can't believe he is so close to me. Though i have heard so many things read so many articles regarding Maan Singh Khurana but never thought he was the same person who is now sitting infront of me.. the single heir to crores of business empire.. cleaning my wounds so tenserly with so much care. People wait months to meet him for a single min appointment and he is here attending me! Am I so important for him? Or is this just he would hav done for anyone? does he like me? Does he wants me to marry? Or the words which he spoke regarding shivi were true?!! Do he really wants to marry shivi?(tears welled up in her eyes. Tears of immense pain)

(Geet's monologue ends)

Meanwhile Maan aftr cleaning her wounds went back to the room and then went to kitchen. And in an about twenty min. he came back with soup,sandwich and some fruits and kept them on table.

Maan: geet tumne shaam se kuch nahi khaya hai. Kuch kha lo.(kafi weak bhi lag rahi ho.

Geet(was touched by hios concern): aapne khaya?

Maan (just looked down and then said): Geet mai theek hoon. Aur mai baad mein kha loonga. Meri chinta mat karo. Tumahri tabiyat bhi theek nahi hai.

Geet(nodded for no): nahi aap bhi khayaiye mere saath.

Maan: Geet.. tum samajh kyo nahi rahi ho' tum meri fikar mat karo. Mai thek hoon. Tum bohot weak ho. To zidd mat karo and eat quitly. Jo mai keh raha hoon karo(saying this he brought spoon full soup near her mouth)

Geet took the sip while looking at Maan's care filled eyes. Then she took the spoon from his hand and brought another spoon full near Maan's mouth for him to have. And he delightfully took the sip.

(Maan's monologue)

What will b more delightful than having something from her hands. It was the first time we were feeding each other like this. And also the first time we were alone and that to at my place. I am loving it! Though I am feeling guilty abt wat happened at venue. I know it was my mistake. I should not have left alone. But now I have promised my self that I will not leave her anywhere.

She is very nice. So much happened with her but her eyes nor she ever complaint. She trusts e I have seen it in her eyes. And what I did, I just left her alone like that, without caring where she is; what she is doing. How could I be so careless so irresponsible?! She is my precious possession' may be I have not said yes for marriage but she is my friend above all.

(Maan's monologue ends)

They fed each other silently. Aftr mean Maan picked up all the utensils and heade towards kitchen. Though Geet tried to stop him and also tried to help but MSK is MSK!

After some time he came back to the lobby wen he found Geet clearing the table.

Maan: ye kya kr rahi ho? Itni chot lagi hui hai aur phhir bhi ye sab.. geet maine kaha tha na ke koi kaam nahi krn hai...mai kr lunga. Aur vaise bhi subah chandu aayega.

Geet: ji mai janti hoon. Mai kuch khaas nahi kr rahi hoon..( she said while cleaning the table)

Aur vaise bhi ab mai theek hoon. Aur mujhe dard bhi nahi ho raha hai.

Maan: tum meri koi baat nahi manogi aisi kasam khayi hai kya? (he said getting angry)

Geet : aap aisa kyo keh rahe hain. Mai sach mein theek hoon.

Maan in anger sat on the chair near by and started msging.

Geet was getting tensed. She wanted to go home; it was 11:00PM at Maan was msging.

She had never been so late she wanted to get home. Though she was with Maan... but it was wrong to stay so long with him then too when there was no relation between them. Not even of fianc.

She again sat in the couch and looked at Maan nervously.

Here Maan was really busy in msging.

Geet(she said stammering): Sir, vo kafi late ho gayi hai aap mujhe ghar drop kr dijiye..

Maan looked at the time and then at her. He stood up without saying anything, took car keys and moved towards door.

Geet very well knew that Maan was angry. She was not feeling good seeing him in that mood.

They went outside and Maan opened the car door and sat and then Geet too sat. Maan drove them to Geet's house. The car stopped. But none came out nor opened the door.

There was silence in the car.

Geet: aap mujhse naraz hain? Maine kya kiya hai?

But maan said nthing..

Geet : aap kuch bol kyo nahi rahe ho?(she started getting teary)

Still maan said nothing. Then afr some min. just said kal 9:30 pe aana office.

Listening to this geet opened the car door and went into the house sobbing..

Maan felt bad. He became angry coz becoz of him, and his attitude geet was crying. But then he drove back to mansion and promised himself that he will make geet happy by tomorrow at any cost and will also say sorry to her.

part 9

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Ok that's it'

Srry for abrupt ending..

Will cont. soon.

Guyz thanks a lot for your lovely comments.

I feel so happy reading them'..

Thnx a lot guyz for accepting my FF.

Love u all so much!!

Guyz pls press like button and leave ur precious commnts nd suggestions.

-priya😊

Edited by MaanEET_FAN - 14 years ago
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it was nice luvely update liked it vry much
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