FF-manet***ESOTERIC LOVE*** thread ~4~ - Page 18

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

keyama... update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pls jaldi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Originally posted by: untamedtigress

hey keyama lovely update as usual,plz u gotta update like 5,6 parts awrite as a compensation for the past whole week,dint update on dis tat much we craving so bad plz plz plz 5,6 hott hotttt hottie updates ok

waitingggggggg😛😆

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

awesome!...

geet still not talking to maan!...

why maan can't understand geet's feelings and how much he has hurt her wen he ditched her???

continue soon!

what's cooking in the hot brain of his?😉

update soon please..

you get better day by day! good! keep it up dear!

***EXOTERIC LOVE***

part 67

Geet walks in to the kitchen. Extremely hungry... Chef wasn't there... But everything was cooked... Geet peeped in each bowl... Looking for something she fancied... Maan slowly creeps behind her... Geet could feel someones presence. She instantly thought about maan... As he is the only one who usually does this. She froze.... But maan couldn't be here... He never skips his dam work!

Geet was black belt in karate... Better then maan! Well maan never really tried with her... Just because she was a girl... Geet gets ready to kick... And soon as the two hand tries to holds her.... She twists his hand round..... And with one of her leg she trips him... Bang on the floor. Then with another feet she kicks hard on his private part in matter of a second.
Maan laid on the floor in pain.
Geet looks at him... Instead of shock she burst out in laugh.
Maan- I hate you.... He barely could speak... His hand between his leg in a crouch position.
Geet- that's what happens when you behave like a thief in your own house.
Maan- I was trying to give you a surprise.
Geet makes him lay on his back while she sits on his stomach. Her leg on his either side.
She takes a spoon from the side and starts eating her ice-cream. Looking at maan... Who was still in pain.
She puts the ice-cream on the side...
Geet- where is it hurting?
Maan- where do you think? He asks angrily!
Geet looks round! - I don't know!
Maan- Dadima was right!
Geet- in what?
Maan- quit your karate lesson.
Geet- umm... I know a move that can kill a person in matter of few second! Shall I try it on you? She asks sarcastically.
Maan- what will happen to you then? A widow this early age.
Geet- I don't mind! I will move on easily... First time is always hard! 2nd time easy! As I know what to expect!
Maan closes his eyes... Knew exactly what she was talking about.
He twists her round... Geet on the floor and him resting on her.
Maan- I an not leaving you this easily.
Geet ignores...
Ice cream on her lips was tempting him... He starts licking her lips... Then softly nibbling... He missed this so much for a week! just couldn't stop feeling her soft smooth lips in his. it was heaven.

After long time they break apart.... Geet gasped for air... While maan just couldn't stop.

Both gets up... The kitchen luckily not messed up... Geet stairs at his half naked body...
Geet- were something!
Maan- no!
Geet- i don't like all those female worker stair at you.
Maan- I gave them all a day off!
Geet- ku?

Maan smirks and picks her up on his arm and makes there way to the bedroom.
Both drops on the bed.
Maan- I love you! (i love you from maan means sorry... all those time at there young age when they both used to say i love you it always used to mean sorry... should have told you lot earlier)
Geet- I am not accepting your sorry. And anyway that's used to apply when we were young.
Maan- I want to be young again.
Geet- that's not possible!
Maan- I want are relationship back the way it was.
Geet- that's not possible.
Maan- why?
Geet- you don't love me.
Maan- who said that?
Geet- you are the one!
Maan- I ....
Maan didn't say another word!
Maan- we are going somewhere.
Geet- where?
Maan gets up picking her up... Takes a bag from the side...
Geet- what is it?
Maan- for you.
Geet- umm...
Maan- you have to were it!
Geet- umm...

Geet takes the bag and walks in to the wash room
It was a White sari with bikini type blouse... Geets favorite color! Along with a Safire set!!! It was beautiful...
She gets ready And walks out. Maan wasn't there but there was a note... I am outside...

Geet walks out.... Maan couldn't remove his gaze. She looked sexy.... The sari pallu was see through. Her every curve was visible. Only thing was covers up on her top half was her Brest... With bikini blouse. Her hair was on the one side. Her back was completely visible. Only a thin string that was holding her blouse.
Geet shields as maan couldn't remove his gaze... Like he could eat her in that moment of time.
He smirks and opens the door for Geet. She sits in.... maan driving.
Geet- where are we going?
Maan- it's a surprise!

They drives for hour or two.
Eventually coming somewhere. It was khuranaa private land... As he enters geet sees the sign.

Maan- it might scare you a bit!
Geet confused.
Maan- just walk...
Geet looks at him curiously.

next- slap or love???

few people wanted to see geet more angry' :D do tell me more angry or lovy doby scn??? remember maan still haven't cried enough🤣

loved all the comments babe' and i have huge pending list again. pls add me to ur pm list bcs i am about to delet all my pending list. just add me and i will accept you.

xx easir.

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and sox i didn't PM anyone. i didn't get time at all. so will pm you end of the day today

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wow i was really waiting for an update form you.& loved it...

but felt it was too short , the surprise element is still not revealed.

and yes i want geet to be more angry, maan just doesn't seem to realise her feelings, or need to be assured of love.

also soon after thier marriage, geets parents were talking about the return of maan's dad . what about that now?

Originally posted by: taanni

wow i was really waiting for an update form you.& loved it...

but felt it was too short , the surprise element is still not revealed.

and yes i want geet to be more angry, maan just doesn't seem to realise her feelings, or need to be assured of love.

also soon after thier marriage, geets parents were talking about the return of maan's dad . what about that now?