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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Oh his brain works...... Chalo its proves he is maan singh khurana

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ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

loved it ya 😉😉😉😉 maan missing geet 😆😆😆😆

continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 50
finally the great Maan Singh Khurana found out d whereabouts of his wife without d help of any detectives(including dadi)
A victorious smile spread thru his lips(don't be so proud of u maan.u's brain is even slower than geet's.no doubt,maneet r made 4 each other 😉 😉 )
M:par geet wahan kyon chali gayi?(lagta hai inka brain's battery phir se down hogaya 😃)
He continued 'accha hogaya,wo chali gayi n i can be in peace atleast 4 sometime(lets see beta)
maan came 2 his room after dinner n looked @ d couch & felt some emptiness in his heart(pehle inka dimag empty tha ab dil bhi)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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part 51
next day(sunday morning) @ KM
maan in d living room n was checking his emails.
M:(self thought)geet kab wapas aaogi?(scolded himself)maan,ye tum soch rahe hain?pagal hagai kya?
he overheard dadi saying 2 nakul tht geet will be back in d afternoon.(maan grinned 2 himself)
it was 3pm.geet not yet returned.maan was constantly checking @ d clock & door.after some time he heard geet's scooty sound.his heart went 'dhak dhak'(he don't know how many girls' heart went 'dhak dhak' because of him.par aaj maanka dilki haal kya hogaya? poor maan)

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guys,am i dragging it too much? pl.comment

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Part 52
geet came inside n hugged dadi n she didn't notice maan who was starring @ her
G:dadima,aap kaise hai? i missed u n sorry 4 coming late
dadi:me bilkul teek hai beta
(she wanted 2 leave maneet alone 4 sometime)
dadi:geet beta,ab aap aaram kejiye.i am going 2 lawn.hum phir milenge.
G:mujhe bhi aapke saath aana hai dadima
dadi:(selfthought)ye geet bina.mein kya karu is pagal ladki ki saath(dadi cursed her bad luck n started walking 2wards d door)
when geet was about 2 follow dadi, maan picked geet's hand n pulled her 2wards him.
she was shocked n looked @ him with confused eyes

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

wow lovely updates... hmm maan pulled geet.. sounds gud..

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Part 53
maan realised what he just did n released geet's hand from his hold
both felt embarassed
M:tum kal kahan chali gayi?(u'r memory is very poor beta.how many times would u ask d same)
G:meri ghar
M:why didn't u inform me?pata hai mein kitna pareshan....(he realised what he was talking n stopped in d middle)
M:wo mera matlab hai dadima kitna pareshan hogayi.dubara yesa mat karna(he left)
G:(self talk)dadima kyon pareshan hagayi?(this girl would never understand anything.poor maan)
M:(self talk)ye mujhe kya horaha hain?(i told u na his brain is slower than geet's. see he is prooving it)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Part 54
'OPERATION MANEET'(OM)
after observing d reaction of maan 2 geet's absense, dadi decided 2 execute her masterplans 2 unite maneet. she launched 'OPERATION MANEET' under which she had many missions (Dadi's Missions, hereafter lets call it as DM).

DM#1 - SEND MANEET 2 A ROMANTIC MOVIE
today night she is going 2 execute it(all d best dadi 👍🏼)

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swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

luv u dadi.. cant wait for it..

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puth

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

nice story tonyahk...

loved all the updates......loved your comments in braces......
can you please have a bit longer updates??
Also can you please add me to your pm list?
good work..👏