Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 30

i got somewhat story line i think maan;s mom is somewhere the reason of she leaving maan. May be maan comes to know why she left him and went away hope he convince her but i guess they will some other place where is will be working with good name in the industry and then maan comes to know about her whereabouts.

awesome update....

OMG!!! This was so good! Thanks a bunch for updating!! It's so good!! Love the flashback and Maan's determination to tell her his feelings...dieing for the confession!! Present is kind of depressing but good thing he's not engaged!! I wanna know why they aren't together...the suspense is killing me!!! Do update soon!!! loved this!!!! Fantastic writing...so gripping and beautifully written!!!

Originally posted by: rsroopali

awesomeeeeee
hope maan realized wt geet wanted 2 tell
bt in present feel sad tht geet misunderstood tht sam n maan r engaged

Thanks Roopali😃
Glad u r enjoyin the story... don't worry they'll be together😳
Do keep commenting

Sonia

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

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awesome update!!!

sapna sandle...🤣

aur kuch nahi mila geet ko...sach me jhalli hai...lolz

bt m very sad that geet is going away from maan...😭

pls update soon...!!😊

Hey Dhara... so glad had a nice laugh reading it... Its after all our dear Geet na😆
Thanks for commenting... aww don't be sad... its temporary😳... hope u keep enjoying the story😃

Sonia

Originally posted by: sai22789

awesome update
abt the flashback...
u portrayed maan's feelings very well...his fear..his love 4 geet..superb..!!!
n geet finding herself in trouble due to her talkative nature was too good..hilarious...!!!
coming to the present part..
it was very sad..geet going away 4m maan...
loved the moment when maan turned back with a start n geet swiftly hid herself behind gates..
gave us a bit of hope..
plz do continue soon
thanks 4 pm...

Hey Sai... thanks a ton

I'm glad our dear Geet managed to entertain you😆... Yeah since Maan's character is intense i wanted to portray his feelings to the core... but was really scared tht i may go overboard😕😆... glad tht u enjoyed it... Do keep commenting😃

Originally posted by: maanujaanu

awesum update

luved it yaar

can't wait for d nxt prt now

Thanks jaanu dearie😃

So glad u r enjoying it... will try and update soon... do keep commenting😳

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

it's so sweet.....

Thanks dear... hope u enjoy the further parts equally😃

Originally posted by: geet105

lol. sapna's sandals. 😆

well written. and is Geet going back to hoshiarpur?

Hey Geet... thanks dear and my apologies are coming to u in a short while😊

And as per Geet going to HP... umm?? No she isn't😆... Do keep commenting😳