Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated - Page 28

Originally posted by: namita25

Sonia...a great piece of work as usual.....👏
you are really a prolific writer and I love way you pen down...
All that I can say is:
I do not know what you do
but you do it well
and I am under your spell😳
I can see Maan feeling the thorns of jealousy......
loved Anu-Maan convo.....😳
He has realised that he has fallen for geet and there is no looking back...would love to see him wooing Geet......

Hey Hun 🤗

Honestly i'm speechless... thank you so much😳

Its great to know that I have managed to capture your interest by far and really keeping my fingers crossed that i keep upto your expectations😃

Love to read your comments sweetie... thanks once again😳

Sonia

Originally posted by: -shamima-

Awe loving it and you penned down maans emotions perfectly the way he was missing geet and how he was getting frustrated not seeing the lilies in the vase or her face in her cabin working and the jealousy when seeing her with sahil was cute and haha anu teasing maan with the bracelet was so sweet and how he was being possesive over it and liked the part where he went to the lakes to find an answer for these emotions his feelin and I think he found it and hmm geets mum and dad are hidding something about HP anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊

Hey Shamima 🤗

Thanks a ton... really humbled😳 Its great to know that you are enjoying the portrayal of Maan's character and his feelings... at least 'm able to put across what i was intending to😆

All through I was trying to give a glimpse of Maan's intense emotions and reactions... hmm so amidst all you caught the HP secret... u r certainly smelling the rat honey😆

Sonia

it's a quite interesting ff and it's getting better and better...... i would love it if you can pm me when you update

brilliantly written! his struggle with his feelings was excellently written! Loved his jealousy and disc scenes! The ending and his realization was nice!! Super excited for the next part! thanks for updating and please do update soon!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: swetha10

nice one.. continue soon

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

it's a quite interesting ff and it's getting better and better...... i would love it if you can pm me when you update

Thanks dear... glad to know you are enjoyin it😳

Originally posted by: sweet coco

brilliantly written! his struggle with his feelings was excellently written! Loved his jealousy and disc scenes! The ending and his realization was nice!! Super excited for the next part! thanks for updating and please do update soon!!!!!!!!

loved all updates
thanks for pm
sorry for commenting late
continue soon.

Originally posted by: cutee987

loved all updates
thanks for pm
sorry for commenting late
continue soon.

Thanks cutee😃

Its perfectly fine ya... no worries at all... i'm glad that you enjoyed the updates😳
Do keep commenting... will update soon

Sonia

Sweety u didnt update😭 pls karoo na