Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

awesome update as usual
very well written
loved d story
do continue soon
thank u very much 4 pm

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mamon.moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#252

very nice update. again the wroting is so good. well finally maan is realizing he is falling for her, hope he will accept it. but for geet I guess it will take more time to realize it but anu is there to act as catalysis. continue soon................

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Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#253

loved it.................................. well finally maan is realizing he is falling for her, hope he will accept it..........😉............... but for geet I guess it will take more time to realize it................................😊

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#254

beautiful.loves your way of writing and you choose apt and right words to express the emotions. awesomw.

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: euphoric

Looking at the sky, he opened his arms as if asking to be granted the sole desire of his being now and then on an impulse, clasped his arms around himself as the need to hold her close in his arms overpowered him.

👏👏👏

confused Maan

innocent Geet

imagining Anu

will you let her come to his arms?

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princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#256

Hey sonia,

Thanks for the lovely update........

its getting engrossing by the day!

please continue soon....😊😊😊😊😊

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sakadafi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#257

Great update....really enjoyed Maan's confusion followed by his realization of his feelings!!

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Eva Shah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

really truly awesum

do continue soon

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#259

Sonia...a great piece of work as usual.....👏
you are really a prolific writer and I love way you pen down...
All that I can say is:
I do not know what you do
but you do it well
and I am under your spell😳
I can see Maan feeling the thorns of jealousy......
loved Anu-Maan convo.....😳
He has realised that he has fallen for geet and there is no looking back...would love to see him wooing Geet......

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Shamima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#260

Awe loving it and you penned down maans emotions perfectly the way he was missing geet and how he was getting frustrated not seeing the lilies in the vase or her face in her cabin working and the jealousy when seeing her with sahil was cute and haha anu teasing maan with the bracelet was so sweet and how he was being possesive over it and liked the part where he went to the lakes to find an answer for these emotions his feelin and I think he found it and hmm geets mum and dad are hidding something about HP anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊