Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: sakadafi
"Hey Bhagwanji, kya hoga mere Veerji ka, yahan main inke honeymoon ke plans bana rahi hu aur yeh family outing pe atke hai" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 And the way she screams at her father, "sab aap ki wajah se" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Luv Anu!!

Poor Maan...ek hi din mein apni trainee se complex. It's great how you showed the bond Geet managed to create with the rest of the staff in mere 2 weeks...finally, ab the MSK will also get to meet the one and only Geet!!!

Great update 👏👏👏👏👏

I'm so glad that you throughly enjoyed reading it... I enjoyed writing those dilogues as well 😳 😆...

Ha ha... I know when he left the entire office centered him and when he's back somebody has taken over the limelight... yes yes... Poor Maan 😆... After all Geet is exclusive na 😉 😆

So glad you liked it... Thanks dear

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: shah10
awsome..love it...

Thanks shah10... hope you like the upcoming parts as well😃

Sonia

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mamon.moon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#153

superb part. thoroughly enjoyed it. u have written it so nicely. well I guess tht person is maan. cant wait for the next update. continue soon..........

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: mamon.moon
superb part. thoroughly enjoyed it. u have written it so nicely. well I guess tht person is maan. cant wait for the next update. continue soon..........

Thanks mamon.moon 😳

I'm so glad that you enjoy the way i write along the update... hope i keep upto ur expectations in future too... do keep commenting

Sonia

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#155

super update...👏
gal you mde my day with this terrific update...thanks a ton to you for that😳love anu....she is just mindblowing....😳
Hey Bhagwanji, kya hoga mere Veerji ka, yahan main inke honeymoon ke plans bana rahi hu aur yeh family outing pe atke hai"
I was in splits reading this line...she is just too much.....🤣🤣
so Maan has come back to his office now...n he sees the whole office going ga ga over Geet...who wouln't ...she is an angel naa......😳
the ending was howlarious.......🤣😳
can't wait for the next part....😳

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: namita25
super update...👏
gal you mde my day with this terrific update...thanks a ton to you for that😳love anu....she is just mindblowing....😳
Hey Bhagwanji, kya hoga mere Veerji ka, yahan main inke honeymoon ke plans bana rahi hu aur yeh family outing pe atke hai"
I was in splits reading this line...she is just too much.....🤣🤣
so Maan has come back to his office now...n he sees the whole office going ga ga over Geet...who wouln't ...she is an angel naa......😳
the ending was howlarious.......🤣😳
can't wait for the next part....😳

Hey Namita... Thanks a ton dearie

I'm so happy that you thoroughly enjoyed the update and you had a good read😛... ha ha yes Maan was in for a shock as he came back as everyone was just speaking about Geet😆 I'm working on next part.. hope it makes you happy the same way as this one did

Sonia

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: Shalve
wow.. awesome update....

Thanks Shalve... keep commenting😳

Sonia

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ammu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#158

yaar waaatan end u gave despratly waiting 4 the nxt update make is fasssstttt

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: ammu5
yaar waaatan end u gave despratly waiting 4 the nxt update make is fasssstttt

Thank you ammu😃

Glad you liked it... i m working on the next part, will post it soon... do keep commenting😳

Sonia

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euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey My Dearies...

Wishing you all a very very happy new year😛

May this year marks the beginning of all things good and prosperous in your lives, that keep getting better with every passing moment😃

Keep smiling and have a rocking Year ahead😳

Luv,
Sonia