Ripped Apart... (Maaneet) part 18 updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

"Hey Bhagwanji, kya hoga mere Veerji ka, yahan main inke honeymoon ke plans bana rahi hu aur yeh family outing pe atke hai" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 And the way she screams at her father, "sab aap ki wajah se" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 Luv Anu!!

Poor Maan...ek hi din mein apni trainee se complex. It's great how you showed the bond Geet managed to create with the rest of the staff in mere 2 weeks...finally, ab the MSK will also get to meet the one and only Geet!!!

Great update 👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: XXXYYYZZZ
gr8 part............. loved it.........

Thanks dear... glad you liked it 😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: heermeher
can you please continue fastttttttttttttttttttttt please dont take break we want to see how the presentation goes plsssssssssssssssssssssssssss

I m working on the next part dear... as soon as i'm done will post it and assure you tht i'll try to make it soon 😛

Do keep commenting... thnx

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: esha143
That's a really nice part Sonia....very interesting....so finally Maan n Geet are face to face....now let's wait n see what's going to happen....and how they come close.....Anu will be really happy as her efforts are starting to pay off....

Thanks esha 😛

yes finally😉 ... Anu's prayers are being heard😆... I hope you like whts coming ahead too...

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: aditiwalia56
That's a really nice part Sonia....very interesting....so finally Maan n Geet are face to face................................................🥳

Thanks aditi... yes they are 😆

glad tht you likin the flow of the story😳

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: 123pritha
great update
but u kept us hanging

plzz update soon

Aww I'm so sorry Pritha... trust me i did try to continue but then it was going too long so have to stop it... But i will try my best to post the next part soon 😃

Thanks.. glad you liked it

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: sweet coco
OMG!! This was so good thanks for the PM!! Loved it to death!! Geet was amazing....awww!! Maan feeling a little jealous of how ppl are treating her!! It's getting so good!! I'm excited about teh next part...you're a fab writer!!!

Hey coco... Thanks a ton... I'm truly honestly humbled😳

So happy that you enjoyed reading the part... yes Maan was a little ermm... jealous after all Geet was encroaching upon his home territory 😉 😆

Do keep commenting.

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: -shamima-
Awe geet has spread her magic in 2 weeks and awe anu when maan was leaving she tried he best but his back now and his determined to see her so fikaar not anu and awe she's scared of the dark but I'm sure that's maan who grabbed and put his hand on her mouth at the end and oh yeh I wonder why geets dad said that they can't go back HP what happened anyways great update and continue soon 😊

Exactly Maan is a bit taken aback with Geet's bonding... what he couldn't do in years, Geet did it in weeks😆... What he doesn't realize is that he's the one who's going to be most affected 😉... isn't it? 😆

Hmm yes... Mohinder doesn't want to go back to HP... you'll get to know why in upcoming parts😛... Hope you like it

Thanks a ton dear😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara
awesome update..pls continue soon..!!!

can't wait for maneet first meet :-)

Thanks Dhara... will try and continue soon 😃

Meeting due in next part for sure... I hope i won't dissapoint you

Sonia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: sai22789
awesome part..
d story turned very very interesting..
do continue soon..
looking forward to next update..
thank u so very much 4 pm...
tc

Thanks Sai... I'm glad that you are liking the story 😳

Will try and update soon... Hope you like it... do keep commenting😃

Sonia