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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashleydevlin

Hi guyz,

cant update today, i have rewritten the next part many timebut i still dont like it , and i am really tired,so might end up with some big blooper,so plz wait til tomorrow, i will write after coming back from uni.
i will enter dance and everything, inshallah
bye

Awwww one more day of Intezaar !!!😲😲😲
Chalo koi nahin.....we will wait.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ashleydevlin

Hi guyz,

cant update today, i have rewritten the next part many timebut i still dont like it , and i am really tired,so might end up with some big blooper,so plz wait til tomorrow, i will write after coming back from uni.
i will enter dance and everything, inshallah
bye


heyyy,,,we r waitng eagerly,,better be a long one,,,,,,,,,,,n plzzzzzzz update sooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just came back from vacation and read all the parts ....love how the way the story is going....waiting to see when Maan will realize his love for geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
really loved tht maan got lost in geet's beauty and the mahiiiiiiii wow perfect timing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Where r u ash? Waitin since long, u knw na, friday saturday n sunday means ash days Hi! Hi! Hi!. So plz update soon no need to worry abt d bloopers, when we can jhelofy it in d telly GHSP so wat if it occurs in a ff ! Bt i knw u wont put blundrs like in telly like choose bet geet or baby i was laughin at it, i mean, did he had choice? i doubt! So no tension n update asap
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Part 14

Maan could feel her continuous gaze on him. He felt it while he turned and started moving toward the exit.


Rohit who was silently watching the silent eye locks between maan and that girl, was really surprised when maan started to leave the party without saying anything. Finally, for the first time his friend had shown interest in a girl and even this time he was leaving.


He followed Maan resolutely and managed to stop him.


Rohit,''where are you going,party is not finished.''


Maan,''i am tired, so I am going back to your house.''


Rohit,''ok, but just stay till midnight, after the countdown you can go, I promise I won't stop you. Come on Maan just 40 minutes left.''


Maan was about to say no when there was some disturbance on the dance floor, 2 guys were fighting over something. There friends separated them and along with the hotel management took them away. As they passed maan saw that one guy looked really drunk. It wasn't even new year and people were already getting drunk. He couldn't leave geet alone in this crowd and just what was she doing in this party? Didn't she have any sense to avoid such parties. But he still didn't look toward her for some unknown reason.


He didn't look so he missed the hug taking place between arman and geet.


Geet was looking at where maan was going worried that he was leaving the party when the fight started between Armaan's friend and another guy. When she looked fight was over and armaan and his friends had stopped the fight. They were taking them with the help of management when armaan jogged off to geet and quickly hugged a very surprised geeet and said,''i have to go now, I am really sorry about this, I promise I will make it up'' and then, he was gone givig geet no chance to say anything. What did he mean and why he huuged her? She quickly looked at Maan but he was talking with his friend. Thank god he didn't notice her. His temper was very quick any way but armaan?...


Pari,''wow that was so shocking, did you see how vijay punch that guy, simply wow.''


Geet,''hmm.''


pari,''oh you must be feeling bad that armaan left but he had to go. The hotel management might file a complaint against those 2 .But don't worry, I am here I won't let you get bored.''


Geet,''i don't care if Armaan is here or not, he is just a friend.''


Pari,''geet you don't have to hide it from me...come, lets enjoy ourselves.''


she grabbed geet's hand and started moving. Geet belatedly realized that they were heading toward Maan's group. She tried to stop but pari was holding her hand and not stopping and it would create another scene if geet forcefully freed herself.


Maan had his back toward them but rohit saw the girl in white saree coming toward them. Hmm, unexpected,he hadn't thougt that this girl was this bold but may be maan needed someone bolder.

They stopped near them. Rohit put his most sincere smile on his face and smiled at them. The girl in white dress(which he noticed was good looking and had good figure) smiled back at him and extended her hand. ''hi, I am pari and this is my friend geet.''


Maan became absolutely still for a moment and then, tuned toward them more fully.


Rohit,''hi, I am rohit and this is my friend Maan.''


Pari,''Maan, Maan singh khaurana, right. Oh, then you must already know geet.''


Rohit looked at maan surprised. Maan looked at geet and said nothing. Geet waited for him to say something.


Pari looking between them.''meera introduced us.''


Maan still said nothing.


Rohit was really angry when maan still didn't said anything this was beyond rude . It was not girl's fault that Maan felt attracted toward her. He was no novice, he could feel the electricity simmering between them and knowing maan since his early days he also knew that he was really attractive toward this girl. But Maan and his rules...


He quickly raised his hand to geet,''hi geet, its really nice meeting you. I guess many people must have already told you but you are very beautiful.''


Geet looked at Maan who was glaring at Rohit. She shook hand with rohit.


Maan took a large gulp of his drink. He expression so hard as if carved out of stone.


At that time, shashank came over to join them back. He was tugging a white paper inside his coat pocket. He looked interestingly at new comers his gaze lingering on geet for a second.


Shashank,''hi, I am shashank and your beautiful names.''


Rohit,''pari and Geet.''


Pari,''so, you guys are all college friends?''


Rohit replied to her question while trying to catch shashank's eye. He slightly nodded toward Pari while laughing and pari's joke.


Geet was standing silently lost in thought while Maan seemed to be really angry and to what rohit referred to as ''Volcanic rage.''


Shashank smiled at Pari.''i must admit that I am a silent admirer, I was watching you dance with guy, you are a great dancer. Your movements are really graceful, can you do classical dance?''


Pari flattered,''no I haven't learn dancing, I am natural and no I can't do classical dance.''


Shashank,''pity, I would have loved to see you dance.''


Pari smiled.


Shashank,''so how about a dance with me.''


pari,''sure.''


They went off toward the dance floor. Rohit mentally rolled his eyes, shashank was so melodramatic.


Anyway, the coast was clear.


Rohit,''so, what about you geet, do you dance.''


Geet,''no, I don't, please excuse me.'' she quickly went to her old spot and started waiting for Pari. She wanted to go back to her room. Maan's behaviour was like salt on open wounds especially as they were surrounded by couples.


Rohit was pissed at this turn of event,'' Maan whats wrong with you, you could at least pretend to be civil.''


Maan,''what did I do?''


Rohit,''exactly you did nothing, you have been looking at her since you came to the party and when she came to stand beside you, you didn't even look at her once. Why?''


Maan,''why are you asking these questions? Have you seen me socializing with girls at any ther party?''


Rohit exasperated,''fine, if she is nothing to you then I don't give a damn either. Any way its not like she is going to be alone for long anyway.''


Maan turned toward the direction he had seen her earlier. She was standing with two guys who were obviously asking her for dance. She refused, then another another guy came and cycle repeated itself..


….................................................................................


Geet was getting anxious now, seeing her alone many guys were coming to ask for a dance and most of them were forming a loose circle around her asking again and again. Geet couldn't see maan in the gathering crowd. She suspected that many were drunk. At that moment music stopped and sudden silence made everyone look around. The announcer came up on stage and started to say something. Geet noticing that guys were looking at stage seize the moment to quickly escape. She started walking near the wall as they were shadowed. The announcer gestured toward the big plasma screen hung on the wall near stage, the countdown to new year was about to begin. !0, 9 8, the crowd roared each number, 6,5 ,4,3 ,2,1. the light went out hall was in complete darkness, geet stumbled and started to fall but two strong arms held her. Geet put her hands on the shoulder to prevent the fall. Her high heels made it almost to regain the balance. He held her tight almost picking her off the feet. Geet's heart was still beating with the adrenaline but she had recognized his touch. She put her head on his chest. Their were sounds coming from around her, but she had closed her eyes. She was where she wanted to be this new year, in the arm of man whom she loved more than herself.


Maan had been really angry when he had seen the guys gathering around her. Without any thought he had swooped down on the group but geet was not there. He had finally managed to find her going toward the exist, she had been walking near to the wall believing that she could hide in the shadows but her white dress was a beacon in dark for anyone who was looking in that direction.

A/n iam writing....
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Posted: 14 years ago

great part loved it .....thanks

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Part 15

Maan was holding geet in her arms. Up above them, the fireworks started visible through the doomd shaped glass ceiling. Everyone was looking up but maan was looking down at her face which was so serene. She had recognized him even in dark. He kept looking at her, almost greedy, the calm she exudated it, he yearned for it. Did she really love him so much that even after all he had put her through, she was still happy with him.


After some seconds or may be it was minutes, maan realized that some one was loudly clearing his throat behind them. the spell broke, her eyes flew open, maan lowered her to ground and turned, it was rohit he was grinning. Sorry to interrupt you guys, but he motioned toward some guys. They had cameras in their hands and were quickly taking pictures of couples.


Rohit,''i guess the security will throw them away soon enough.'' at that moment, they saw two security guard entering the hall with a man who was pointing toward the photographers. Soon, they were shooed away.


Geet was standing very near maan unable to step away. Maan didn't step away either.


Rohit said to geet while looking at Maan,''so, that's why you didn't want to dance with me.''


Maan said nothing, everywhere around them couples started dancing again. Geet did not know what to say, so she remained quiet.


Maan looked at rohit who was waiting for their answer. Suddenly, he wanted rohit to know that she was just not some beautiful girl, he wanted him to know that she was his wife. It made no sense but he didn't want to question himself, time for that will com later.


He grabbed geet's hand and started moving toward the dance floor. Then, stopped and said to rohit,''remember the bet you made in college, well you lost it. He pulled geet on the dncing floor leaving a puzzled rohit behind.


Rohit thought about it,''which bet?''


he looked at maan who whirled geet in a circle and brought her near him again.


He said,'no way'' but he was grinning. He went to tell shashank.


Geet felt like she was in a dream, everything faded just maan remained. He felt solid in her hands while even sh e felt like she was liquid in his hands, he tuned and whirled her around as he chose. He turned her until her back pressed against him. His hands touched her bare stomach sending electricity coursing through her. Wherever his hand touched that part burned. He still pressed her more closer until she could feel his desire. They swayed with music. Maan inhaled her scent through her hairs.geet felt like her legs were going numb, she couldn't support her own wait, she was now standing on his support.


With one hand he moved her hairs aside baring the swan like neck to him, he was bout to bend when the heel of geet's shoe broke. For second time, maan stopped her from falling, he held her in his arms, her back prssed against him and then. Simply picked her up in his arm, not caring about anyone watching and strode out of hall.


He moved toward the elevator, geet didn't question him.

Maan,'press that button.'' geet pressed the top floor button. Geet avoided looking at him, the pull between them was so strong that geet felt that she might do something which will embarrass her.


The lift stopped and they got out he walked down the small hallway and asked geet to get the key out of his coat pocket. Geet did what he asked and they entered the pent house. Instead of putting her down, he carried her to room on left side and carried her inside. He put her down on her feet and then, turned and locket the door. Geet had just rid of her shoes when he turned and grabbed her by her waist and pushed hr against the door. Next moment, he was pressing himself closer to her. Geet felt like she was burning, his body was so warm in the cold room, she rubbed against him.


Maan pushed her hairs away from neck and grabbed them in his hand and then, kissed on her neck just

belw her neck and the, put small kisses all the way down. He licked and nibbled on some places leaving her skin tingling. Geet was breathing heavily. Maan moved away and then said,''open your pins.'' he gestured toward her pins. He went and sat on the bed, facing her. Geet stood there not able to move.


He away but his eyes they were kissing each part of her.''do it geet.''


geet closed her eyes and with trembling fingers, she opened the pins, holding her pallu secure, they fell from her shaking fingers. She stood there waiting but still he didn't come for her. Geet leaned against the door and opened her eyes, he was sitting there looking at her with hungry eyes, the fire in those eyes made her close her eyes again.


Maan called,''geet, come here.''


geet shakes her head in no.


she heard the sound of clothes rustling. She opened her eyes. He was taking off his coat, then, he opened his shirt ad took it off as well.


Geet knew her cheeks were flaming, although they were husband and wife, this was new. His eyes met her, captured her gaze and sent dark promises to her. Was she dreaming, what had happened to maan, he was so open about his desire. Were all married couple like this?


He threw the shirt down and walked toward her, he had already taken off his shoe.


Geet was leaning back against the door. He stopped couple of inches from her.


Geet,''maan..''he put his finger on her lips and whispered in her ears,''no questions and no answers today.'' his finger pressed gently over her lips and then touched her cheeks, his eyes followed. With his other hand, he grabbed her pallu and took it off. Geet closed her eyes, he bent and kissed her exposed cleavage tracing a path to...... later he picked her up and carried to bed her clothes lying on floor. Soon, he wore nothing either....he stretched at geet, his moth fusing with her while he was deep inside her and............................................................................


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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome as always....but i really feel maan needs to learn his lesson...
he should know what is yearning for....geet has gone through alot....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Both parts were awesome........... loved them

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