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Pratibha mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

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(Yasir Shah)

Name- arjun verma
friends call him AV
New character

Role - Negative character

He hate subh but his family is one of the friends of subh family.he always create problem in subh life . subh company n AV company is partner. everyone give improtance to subh ,he is jelous from subh.

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Pratibha mehta

@Riasa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Next part (mandir scene)

hey guys plzz do reply😃😃
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Dona mandir pohochte hai

neha- wooooooo kitna purana mandir hai.😃
suhana- mandir is Dear khandar😆
neha- suhana plzzz yeh mandir hai aur tu isse khandar bula rahi hai, dekh agar tu aisa khegi tho khabhi mein tumahara saath nhi aaugi.
suhana- ok chill ,ab khabhi nhi khahugi fine.
neha- f9, abb andar chale.
suhana - yaaa.

(Big mandit ) maha guru very old prist of mandir suhana aur neha ke pass aane lagta hai.

neha- parnaam baba.
maha guru- jeeti raho
suhana-dhiire se kheti hai neha yeh khon hai
maha guru sunlete hai aur khehete hai beti mein yaha ka maha guru hu

suhana- maha guru?????😕

maha guru- big prist.

suhana - oooo😆

neha-suhana bas kar.

suhana- mein kya kiya hai ,aap hi boliye maha guru

neha- kya kiya hai ,y are u laughing

suhana- vo bolka maha guru se kheheti hai mein appko mg bula sakti hu beczzz apka yeh naam not soo happening.

neha-😡suhana mar vayegi kya

dono fight karne lagte hai ki tabhi mg bolte hai bacho mujhe phyaar se jo naam do mein useme khush hu. suhana beta tum mujhe mg bula sakti ho.

suhana- 😃 with big smile

neha- ok mein bhi appko mg bulahugi.

mg- acha bhacho batao kya kam se tum dono aaye

suhana- mein tho time pass karne😃

neha- yaa i know. baba mom ne khaha tha ki ghar mein havan karvana hai aur specially aapse.

mg- thik hai.

neha - acha baba aab hum chalte hai

mg- itni jaldi

neha - ha baba bohot kam hai aur mein aaj baby sitting mera matlab hai bache ki dekh bhal bhi kar rahi hu.

mg-acha .

suhana- tu kisi baby siting kar rahi hai .

neha- teri aur kiski.

suhana- kya khaha tujhe tho mein bad mein dekh lugi.

neha-ok ok sory

neha- thik hai bab aab hum chale hai

suhana - bye mg

mg- ha bye.

dono car mein bethe hai tbhi neha ko yad aata hai ki usne to pucha hi nhi ki kab vo havan karege.

suhana- don't worry mein abhi jakar puch leti hu.

suhana mg ke pass pohochti hai.

suhana- mg apne tho bataya hi nhi ki kab havan karna hai.

mg- acha yaad dilaaya, thik hai mein subh mohorat dekh kar mein Ritu ( neha mom) ko bata duga.

suhana- thik hai bye mg.

mg- ruko beta kuch batana tha tume tumahari aane vali jindgi ke bare mein.

suhana- kya????

mg- bohot jald tume tumahara jeev saathi milne wala hai, isse majak mat samjhna ,

keval ye nhi aur bhi iss aane vali 30 tarik takt umahari shaadi ho jaye gi.

suhana- it mean next week.

mg - haa

suhana-plzzz mg neha ki baat mein app bhi aagaye mein aapko chellenge deti hu ki meeri shaadi nhi hogi next week.
so mg mein chalti hu aur havan mein milte hai bye.

mg- ladki pagal hai par phyaari hai, par isse nhi pata ki keval yeh mor hi, nhi aur bhi mor jindhi lene wali hai, yeh tho suruat hai. sach jane ke baad pata nhi yeh phoolo se najuk apne aap ko kaise sambhal payegi. mein prathna karta hu ki sab kuch jaldi thik ho jaye aur sachayi bhahar naa aye tho acha hai.

to be continue...........
suhana ke jindgi mein aane vale mor ko jane ke liye just read my next part guys😃😆

Precap - suhana talking to subh n calling subh kanchara.

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Pratibha mehta

@Riasa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Next part do reply Plzzzz

Subh In USA

Atul ,prithvi,raj n Dadi paresan hai ab kya hoga, atul ka phone subh ke pass hai aur suhana usse phone karne wali hai . vo subh suhana ko ek karna chahte hai ,they are thinking will be sucess in there mission.

Atul- Dai abb kya hoga???

Dadi - bhagwan jane abb kya hoga ya hone wala hai.

Raj- how boring Dadi aggar kaise hi hum sochte rahe to khabhi bhi subh shuhana ek nhi ho paye ge. we have to something guys.

prithvi -u are rite raj we have to do something .

atul- tum log sif khehete hi rahoge kya kuch karo ge bhi.

raj- atul beta tujhe mein baad mein bata hu.

pritvi - abb kya kare.

raj- suhana ke phone aane ka wait.

atul- what???? par usse kya hoga

raj- dekh jab tak dono baat nhi karege tho ,baat aage kaise badhe gi.

prithvi- u know na shuhana nature n subh the akaru, iam sure boom blast hone wala hai.

Raj- wali tho mein chahta hu.

atul- tu lov story bana chahta hai ya barbad karna.

raj- dekh lov ke mamle mein iam expert u know raj the lov guru.

prithvi - ok lov guru ji.bolo abb kya kare.

raj- boom blast hone ka intezaar.

atul- ok dude.

Dadi- bhacho hamara mission kya hai/??

Atul- Subh shuhana ko ek kana.

prithvi- yaa we are doing to do this.

raj- ,will do it n jeet humari hogi.

atul- nhi jeet phyaar ki hogi.

tabhi raj sia ko phone karta hai yeh puchne ke liye ki shuhana ne abb tak atul ko phone kiya ki nhi.

conversation between sia n raj-

raj- hello sia

sia- ooo raj ,

raj- sia sunn kya shuhana ne atul ko phone kiya kya.

sia- what??? tu ne mujh se yeh puchne ke liye kiya hai
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raj- yaa😃

sia- tu yeh atul se bhi tho puch sakta hai na, idiot

raj- yaa but atul ka phone out off range hai ( tabhi atul kheheta hai yaar tune sandwich kaha rakh diya.)

sia- iam not wrong tho yeh atul ki aawaaz hai it mean kuch tho gadbar hai

raj - no gadbad yaar tere kaan baj rahe hoge

phir atul jaise hi kuch khene wala hota hi hai tho prithvi usse marne lagta hai aur usske mouth ko cellotap se tape kar deta hai.

sia- phir se atul ne bola.

raj- tu DR. ke pass ja,mein khahana tere kaam baj rahe hai.

sia- ok,

raj- meine tujh se kuch pucha tha na

sia- yaa yaa yaa mujhe nhi pata

raj- tujhe nhi pata gog tune mera time waste kar diya

sia- how rude,idiot😡

raj -- oooo jhasiki rani tujhe nhi pata ki suhana ne atul ko phone kiya ki nhi par yeh tho pata hoga na ki vo kiske saath hai. iam not wrong tho khahi vo neha ke saath tho nhi n BTW iam not rude Dear.

sia- ok . aagar tuhe pata hai tho puch kiyun raha hai ,idiot

raj- tu mujhe bar bar idiot kiyun kerahi hai.

sia- sorry yaar. sab uss idiot samrat ke karan , usse ek bar bhi fursat nhi ki mujhse baat kar le. all men are just....

raj-- ok ok dekh abhi mere pass tera dukhra sunne liye time nhi call u later bye.

sia- byi.

Raj-- god neha ke saath hai

atul prithvi ko jor se laat marta hai.

prithvi- oooo (pjir tape nikal deta hai)

atul- tujhe tho mein

raj- aabe tujhe kitni bhookh lagti hai

atul -sorry yaar.

raj- no ,aggar vo shuhana ka saath hai tho usse bhagana hoga ,varna vo subh ko phone nhi kar payegi, u know na her stupid astology n prediction

atul - i know

prithvi -abhi bhagata hu neha ko

Next scene in India-

Shuhana- neha ,iam bore what to do now.

neha- shopping chale

shuhana- yaaak shopping , i hate it.

tabhi prithvi neha ko phon karta hai aur kheheta hai yaar tu khaha hai

neha mein - suhana ke saath

prithvi- bhahar mein

neha- haa

prithvi- OMG tujhe pata nhi kiya

neha- kya plzz tell me

prithvi- u are vergo na

neha- yaa , luky na

prithvi- no lukcy only unluky
neha -y

prithvi-- tujhe pata nhi ki vergo rashi valo ek pua din ghar se bhahar nhi niklna hai . nhi tho any thing can gappen.

neha- what ,abb mein kya karu.iam with shuhana aur i will not leave her alone chahe jo kuch hojaye.

(prithvi- aree yaar yeh tho maan hi nhi rahi hai prithvi dhire se bolta hai)

neha- kya khaha tune

Prithvi - kuch bhi tho nhi, tu ghar nhi jaye gi to mat jaa , aagar kya hua jo tere saath hai usse bhi tu big problem mein dal degi.

neha- ooo god nhi mein suhana ko pro mein nhi daalu gi iam going yaar byi.

prithvi - kaam ho gaya.

shuhana- kya hua neha

neha- mujhe jana hoga byi byi

suhana - sunn na , pagal

suhana- abb mein kiya karu yeh bhi chali gayi, mujhe aisa kuyn lag raha hai ki mein kuch boul rahi hu. oooh god mujhe atul ko phone kar na tha, ok tho call kare time pass karlu gi.

to be continue

Precap - suhana saying subh Nakchara

To watch out what will happen next plzz do come here .

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Pratibha mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Subh suhana scence #1

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Suhana atul ko phone karti hai ,lekin atul ka phone subh ke pass hai

shuhana- hello

subh- hello

suhana- tum kon ho

subh- BTW tumne mujhe call kiya hai.

suhana- no meine tume nhi apne friend ko phone kiya hai.

subh - soo iam not your friendyeh

suhana- i know , aur khabhi hoga bhi nhi.

subh - y u are wasting my time????

suhana- iam wasting your time u are wasting my time. chalo apne boss ko jaldi se phone do, pata nhi kisss kiss ko kaam pe rakh lete hai

subh- boss ko. hello jobhi ho tum dekho ....

suhana- tum dekho aggar tumne meri baat nhi maani tho tum apni nokari se haaath dho betho ge.

subh- ajeeb pagal ladki hai

suhana- tumne mujhe pagal khaha, tume ladki se baat karne ki thori si bhi manners nhi hai. Nakchara khahika

subh- tumne mujhe Nakchara khaha ....

suhana- tume sunayi nhi deta kiya

subh- uuuu.....

suhana- suhana , call me suhana madam ok

subh- ok miss suhana madam, aap pagal khane yeh kab chuutiuhana

suhana- kya khaha, mein pagal khane se aayi hu

subh- ooo soo u accepte ki tum pagal khane se aayi ho good

suhana- mein pagan khane se nhi tum pagal khane se aaye ho

subh- dekho.....

suhana- tum dekho ladki samjh ke tum mujhe kuch bhi nji bol sakte ho.

subh- ladki samjhe ke hi kuch nhi bol raha hu. miss ..... vo tumne mujhe kya khaha nakchra tho tum jungli billi

suhana- what?????

subh-- ooo jungli billi ko naam pasand nhi aaya

suhana- mein jungli billi tho tum nakchre

subh- ulta chor kotual ko daate

suhana- kya khaha kotual...ko,,

subh- tum aawaaz se tho indian hi lagti ho ,aur tume isska matlab nhi malum.

suhana- nhi malum tho ,vo mein hindi class mein khabhi dhiyaan nhi diya BTW mein tumahari jaise nhi tu Desh drohi.

subh- tumne mujhe desh dorhi khaha.

suhana- yaa drohi , kiyun ki tum apne desh ko chor kar kissi aur desh ki tarki mein saath de rahe ho, tumahare jaise loge ke karan hi indian develope nhi hai.

subh- u...

suhana- kuyn sach sunn kar bura laga itna hi dam hai tho face to face mera samna karo ,

subh - mein tumse milne kiye nhi aa sakta , mujhe apna time waste nhi karna

suhana- ohhh tho bechana Nakchara darr gaya, don't woory akksar lag mujh se darr jate hai

subh- darr aur tujse miss jungli billi .

suhana -yaa, mera pura din barbad kar diya aur jisse baat karna tha
vo tho gayab hai janab.

subh- ooo hello tumse baat karke mere bhi din acha nhi jaye hai.

suhana- meine tho apne dost ko phone lagaya tha tume phone kaise lag gaya.OMG kahi tumne mere dost ka phone tho nhi churaya

subh- what , tume mein chor najar aata hu

suhana- mujhe tum kaise nazaar aao ge hum dono unforuntely phone pe hai.

subh- ok tho , i think tum itni intellegent tho ho na

suhana- yaa but not in studies.

subh- kiyun koi tume padhane waala teacher nhi mila , i know kissi gungli billi ko padha kissi ke bas ki baath nhi.

suhana- kya , meine tume truthfully sach bataya aur tum mujhe...

subh- ok sorry ,

suhana- vo tho hona hi chahiye.

subh- ooo jara sa sorry bola aur tum mere sirr par chad gayi

suhana- ok ok sorry tho tum USA mein kya karte ho, koi jab vob ki tlash mein ho...

subh - for your kind information mein dusro ko job deta hu.

suhana-oo yaaa aur feko .lagta hai tumahara naam mujhe Mr. Nackchra se Mr. feku rkhna padega.

subh- tum se baat karna bekar hai.

tabhi India mein barish hone lagti hai

suhana- barish .mazza aagya

subh- barish mein mazza what a joke.

suhana - tume barish nhi pasand,ek bar tum yaha aaoo tab mein tume barish ka maaza samjho ge , nhi samjho ge tho mein samjha dugi. mein tume puri India tho nhi par mera sehar yani naini tal pura dekha dugi u will lov it.

subh - tum naini tal se ho mein bhi

suhana- what ??? par mujhe nhi pata tha ki nsin mein koi Nakchra bhi hai

subh- aur mujhe bhi nhi pata tha ki vaha koi jungli billi bhi hai.

Phir dono suddenly hassne lagte hai.

subh- bohot aajeeb baat hai aab tak hum lar rahe the aur abb ache se baat kar rahe hai like ...

suhana - friends...

subh- yaaa, so friends

suhana- tum itne bhi bure nhi ho , ok Friends for ever

subh- friends forever , tho tum mujhe abb nakchra tho nhi bulao gina

suhana- obiously bulau gi ,

subh - tum nhi badlo gi

suhana- nhi aur tume kaise pata ki mein aisi hu

subh- aisi kaisi????

Suhana- sooo India kab aarhe ho

subh- i don't know jab tak mujhe deal nhi milti

suhana- kon si deal, yani u are a bussinessman cool

subh- yaa mein bussinesman hu mere hotel ke liye deal bohot important hai

suhana- ooo tho tumahara dhaaaba hai.

subh- dhaaba nhi hai aur meri dost hokar aisa bol rahi ho

suhana- gussa kuyn ho rahe ho mein majaak kar rahi hi.

subh-- tho mein bhimajaak kar raha tha.

suhana- tum deal ke liye paresan ho na.

subh- tume kaise pata.

suhana- mein bohot smart hu. n don't worry tumko hi yeh deal milega

subh- tume kaise pata

suhana - mein bohot lucky hu ,abb mein tumahari dost ho tho tum bhi lucky ho gaye ho

subh- ha ha ha ok miss lucky dekhte hai tum kitni lucky ho

suhana - dekh lo ,ooo god mein tho tumahara naam puchna hi buol
gayi

subh- subh

suhana- hey humare naam same sounding hai subh suhana, suhana subh.

subh- yaa tum bilcul bachi ki ho

suhana- i know san kehete hai tum kab baari hogi.

subh- BTW tum isse phone kar rahi thi

suhana- atul ko..vo mera

subh- atul

suhana- tum jante ho

subh- he is my best friend

suhana- same pinch, thanx u bolo

subh- ok thanx u ,par kuyn

suhana - beczz atul mera bhi best friend hai.

subh- strange hum dost ban gaye

suhana - vo tho hai ,par itna bhi nhi ,kissi se dosti karne ke liye kissi ko puri trha jan na jaruri nhi.

subh- wrong jab janno ge nhi tho dosti kaise hogi ,

suhana- dekho Mr Nakchre dosti ke mamle mein mein expert hu

subh- Miss jungli billi khabhi dusro ki bhi sun lo

suhana- aggar mein sahi hu tho mein dusro ki kuyn suno

subh- tum khabhi fight kiye bina nhi baat kar sakti ho

suhana - tume mujhe jhgralu khaha

subh- yaa

suhana- good bye ,aab tum india aaoge tabhi mein tumse baat karugi aur mein tume phone nhi karne wali tum mujhe kato

subh- hello no. tho baata do

tabhi suhana phone kaat deti hai.

subh- jungli billi

suhana- nakchra.

Precap
subh telling about suhana to raj n raj is making him to think more about suhana n same way suhana is telling about subh to raj n raj is doing same.....

to be continue........

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Pratibha mehta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Next part

Raj call subh

raj- hello

subh- yaa bole raj

raj- kya hua

subh- meri meeting kaal hai aaj nhi jo tum puch rahe ho kya hua

raj- oo ha i just forgot

subh- tum kab se kuch ....

raj- dekh buul gaya ismein kya hai.

subh -ok gussa kiyun ho raha hai.

raj- ok fine bata kisi ka phone aaya kiya

subh - kisaka

raj maan mein bolta hai lagta hai ki suhana ne phone nhi kiya

subh- kya hua

raj- kuch nahi.

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Pratibha mehta

@Riasa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Next part plzzzz do Reply

subh- kuch tho bol

Raj- tujhe barish pasand hai

subh- what????? tera demag tho kharab nahi ho gaya.

raj- sorry vo meine galti se bol diya

subh- lagta tujhe bhi barish ka booth chadh gaya hai

raj- mujhe bhi. oye aur khon hai

subh- vo meri ek dost

raj- meri dost,...... god issne tho apne liye aur ...

subh- kya

raj- kuch nahi

subh- aaj tujhe kaya hua hai

raj- nothing yaar tu apni uss dost ke bare bata, kab mila ,khon hai,kya naam hai

subh--wait ........ tu tho aise puch raha hai ki tu mera dost nahi girlfriend hai.

raj-- ooo

subh- mein vo aaj mila ... phone pe vo mahmare atul ki dost hai

raj--- yahooo ,tho vo suhana hai

subh- tujhe kaise pata

raj- i know her

subh-ok

(raj- jayada joor se bol diya stupid me)

raj- vo teri dost bhi bana gayi

subh- ha mana thori jagli billi hai par dill ki...

raj-- wait..... dill ki voaa pheli bar

subh- dekh vo meri achi dost hai aur kuch nahi

raj- dost se achi dost

subh- raj

raj- subh

subh- dekh mein ghar aake baat karta hu battery low hai.

raj-ok

home scene

dadima-kaya hua

raj -humne socha tha vo nahi hua

atul -dekh jalebi ki tarha sidhi sidhi baat mat kar

samrat-yaa

raj- subh sunaha friends

atul sofe se gir jata hai ye sunkar

samrat- dude majak mat kar

raj- iam not joking , aur atul ko utha

samrat- yaa

atul- mera tho sirr ghum raha hai

dadi- sahi mein lagta hai yeh dono ek dusre ke liye bane hai

atul -dadi ma don't be sure mujhe yeh tufaan se aane wali shaanti lagti hai.

raj- me too

samrat- me 3

dadi-jo bhi ho par hum inhe ek kare rahe ge abb thora aur aasan ho gaya hai.

raj- yaa abb sab thora aur ye dosti ko badhne dena hai

atul - dosti phyaar hai

raj- yaa.

to be continue.........

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Pratibha mehta

@Riasa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

hey i hope u will like my story

plzz do comment😛

Subh n shuhana are fighting on the phone

Subh apne office mein hai .......suddenly he is surprise to see sujal ( his Bro)

Subh- sujal tum yaha

sujal- yaa bro iam here

subh -god to see u ,phele kyun nahi aagaye....... lagta hai abhi bhi

only kadkiyo ke chakar mein ho kiya

sujal- bro mein ladkiyo pe piche nahi ladkiya mere piche aati hai... u know na

subh- yaa i know everything...........

sujal- bro apko kya pata ye lakiyo ke baare mein

jaise hi sujal yeh bolta hai usse shuhana ki yaad aajati hai n phir subh bolta hai

jayada nahi pata bas ek ladki hai jo sabse jura hai.... pagal hai puri ..

sujal- what- koi ladki haa

subh- tum jaisa soch rahe ho vesa kuch nahi

sujal- bro mein kuch nahi soch raha hun only ........i know she is your gf ha..

subh- No only friend

Raj entry

raj- hey sujal, gud to see u man, kab aaya tu

sujal- abh abhi

raj- aaj koi ladki nahi hai tere saath, lagta hai suraj west se nikla hai

sujal- aisa kuch nahi hai...... kuch time ke liye break le raha hun......u know na girls how crazzy they r about me

raj- yaa i know

subh- tum dono ki baat finish hogayi ho tho ghar chal...dadi bohut khush hogi tum ko dek kar

raj- subh tu ghar ja mein aur sujal aaj bahar jayege for some fun...jaha hum jaarahe hai vaha tum nahi jaaoge i know....

subh- okk u guys carry on

sujal- okk bro ...par dadi ma ko mat batana ...that iam here

i will give here surprise

subh- okk

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Raj- sujal ke bache tu yaha kiya kar raha hai

sujal- mere bhai ki shaadi plan kar raheho aur mein hai hu...... one n only lov guru

raj- okk mere lov guru

sujal- tho shuhana hai vo ladki....godd guys r u crazzy , shuhana n subh godd

raj- yup......par shuhana se better ladki koi nahi hai

sujal- i know tabhi tho bhai ek baar hi baat karke pagal ho gaye hai

tho aage ka plan kiya hai

raj- only subh ko Indian laaneka

sujal- tho aab yeh kaise hoga

raj- apne aapko lov guru keheta hai na tu hi soch

sujal- yaa vo tho hun mein...

raj- chal thora maaza karte hai

sujal- yaa tujhe tho isski bohut jarurat hai...kyun tho kaatne waala hai u r going to finish.... tune khushi ko abhi tak phone nahi kiya hai na....

raj- god inki lov story mein tho bhul hi gaya....

To be continue

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sana

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Its really awesome and happy new year

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