Maaneet SS:~Mujhse Shaadi Karogi?~UPD: pg 49 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
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PROMO!!

"Are we lost?" she said scared.
"I really hate to break it to ya but yes we are" he said still angry.
She slapped his arm
"OH MY GOD!!" she said panicking as she heard a noise.....
She jumped onto him as his anger quickly vanished and he picked her up.
"Mujhe dar lag raha hai" she said not sure it was because of him or the fact they were LOST!
Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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oo la la rocking promo bf!!!😉 can't wait
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
nice promo......can't wait know....plz update asap...
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwesome ff
maan is gr88888 luv him
update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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yaar promo is so cool
plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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plzzzzz update dear........ im soooooooooooooooooooooooooo curious to read the next part.... plz plz plz plz update sooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here guys back with an update!!!!
sorry i might not update until the weekend!
so heres a long one!!😉

Part 3:

"Hey Angel!" he said casually barging into line beside her.

She glared at him.

"Ufff ho thodi variety looks main mil sakti hai kya?" he said nudging her shoulder.

"Dekho don't create a scene here, aur peeche hato!!! Aur khabar daar jo tum bus pe mere saath aake baithe!" she said warningly.

He smirked and then tugged his collar.

"Dekho Angel, main line main aise hi thodi na khada hua hoon, tumhaare saath baithna hai" he said amused.

"Bada mazaa aa raha haina, picnic pea aye hue hain!" she said scarcastically.

"Abhi se tum mujhe kitnne acche se samajhne lagi ho'.EXACTLY we are going for a picnic aur mazaa toh bohat aa raha hai!" he said teasing her.

"UGH!!!!" she said turning away.

"Come let's go to the back of the bus" he said dragging her along with him.

"Chodo sab dekh rahe hain"

"Akele main pakdoon?"

"SHUT UP!!!!"

He chuckled as he sat beside her pushing her into the window seat.

"Geet? Tu yahan?" Mahi said folding her arms across her chest.

She looked at her helpless.

"Oye hero uthoo mujhe Geet ke saath baithna hai" she said demanding.

"Sorry magar she's mine" he said smirking at Tarun.

"Aap mere saath baith jayiyay" Tarun said a bit scared.

"Lagtaa hai tum sab lardkon ke dimaag bilkul un-used hain! Jab nahi lardki ko baithna toh force mat karoo!!" Mahi said annoyed and angry.

"Guys take your seats" the teacher said.

Maan quickly pushed Mahi over to sit beside a smiling Tarun.

"Ek aur dafa daant dikhai na toh acha nahi hoga" Mahi said glaring at Tarun.

He quickly closed his mouth as Maan laughed.

Geet couldn't help but laugh at the two.

Maan looked at her and she quickly stopped laughing and turned away.

"Stop it" he said.

"WHAT?" she said confused'

"Stop being so stubborn"

"Im being stubborn look at Mr. ROCKHEAD beside me!!!" she said angry.

"Scene mat create karo" he said mocking her.

"Maan please just keep your mouth shut I don't wanna talk to you!" she said turning away.

She sat texting away'

"Guys this is where the bus stops and you guys have only 20 minutes" this time the male teacher said.

Geet quickly jumped out of her seat.

Maan who had waited for 10 minutes got worried'he went to the entrance of the bus as soon as he was about to jump outside to see'she climbed up the stairs.

"Ufff you don't even let me go outside in peace" she said pushing him with her shoulder as she went pass him in a rush and quickly went and sat beside Mahi.

Mahi started to laugh uncontrollably at Geet's smugness.

"Ha!!!" Geet said proudly.

"Iss dafa toh tum bach chuki ho magar next time'." He said winking.

"Idiot kahin ka!!!" Geet said aloud to Mahi who was fixing her hair.

Sonia and Tanisha came running inside their bus''

"Tum log yahan?" Geet said hugging her.

"Haan yaar that bus was soo boring so I pleaded the teacher to let us come here" Sonia said.

"Puh-lease'I am the one who batted my eyelashes infront of that khadoos teacher Mr. Mehir" Tanisha said proudly.

Maan and Tarun listen to their conversations.

"Guys don't worry I'm here now" Rohan said coming in spreading his arms slightly to his sides to show his existence.

"Move please" Sonia said turning around when Rohan's arm hit her.

"Yeh to tum ho!!" Rohan said turning around to see Tanisha.

She widened her eyes.

"You guys know each other?" Geet said purposely ignoring Maan.

He stared at her smirking mischievously.

She felt his stare on her face and she gave her hair a puff to slightly block his view.

He chuckled at this.

"Yeah she's in my Physics class'wohi shy wali khoobsurat lardki" Rohan said casually'

As they all smirked'

"Tujhay kya hua has kyun raha hai?" Raj said walking up behind them.

"Tum bhi yahan ho?" Tanisha said happily.

Raj looked scared.

"Ab tum dono bhi!" Mahi said surprised'

"Guys sit down!!! And iske baad no one will switch buses" the teacher said.

They all sat down.

Tanisha pulled a quaking Raj beside her.

"Darro mat" she said giggling.

"Kyun bechaare ko sata rahi hai?" Mahi said sarcastically encouraging her.

Sonia, Geet and Mahi were squished on one seat.

"Someone can come here?" Tarun said looking right at Mahi.

Maan blinked softly at Geet who sighed and turned around again.

Rohan who looked at a shy Sonia smirked.

"Yahan bhi jagaa hai" he said aloud.

"Yaar please tu jaake wahan baith jaa na" Geet said to Mahi pointing at a scared Sonia.

Mahi got up groaning and pushed Tarun to the window seat and rested her tiny body on the seat along with her bag.

Maan gave Tarun a thumbs up.

"Now if all of you have decided to make couples please mera aur Rohan ka bhi official kar do" Maan said slightly rising from his seat.

"Mera koi couple nahi h-hhai" Raj said slightly scared of Tanisha.

"Kya kaha" Tanisha said moving closer to Raj.

He leaned back scared out of his wits! Tanisha laughed while looking at herself in her phone.

Maan nudged Rohan and he quickly pulled Sonia to his seat as Maan got up and ran to sit beside Geet.

"Perfect huh dekho sab meri wajha se saath hain. I'm a matchmaker!! Hum saath saath hain" he said sweetly looking at Geet.

She turned to the side and smiled slightly.

"Tumne meri baat pe smile kiya?" he said whispering in her ear.

"No!" she said.

"Guys now that we are here, you all have to find these trees and these flowers. I want descriptions and everything" the teacher said again.

"And guys you will work in partners because the assignment is long and the gardens are really big" Mr. Mehir said.

The students looked at who they wanted to be with partners with.

The teachers chuckled.

"No, sorry to disappoint you but you will work in pairs of a boy and girl" the female teacher said giggling at the students.

They made pairs and it was obvious who was with whom.

"And I suppose you know your botany?" Tanisha asked Raj seductively.

"Haa-aan" he said scared of her tone.

The teacher gave the papers out and they all left in separate directions.

"Come on Angel" Maan said grabbing her hands running off.

"Chodo mera haath" she said pulling away and started to text again.

"Tum yeh kisko text karti rehti ho?" he said curious.

"I am engaged so obviously I text my fiance" she said not looking up.

He froze.

"Kya hua? Challo" she said ignoring his reaction.

"YOU ARE ENGAGED!!!!!!" he said fuming.

She was a bit scared and remembered what Sonia said about him doing something with her.

"Haan" she said nervous at his expression and tone. He never was mad infront of her that was a fact but now he looked very angry.

He took her and pinned her to a tree.

"Kaun hai woh?!" he said gritting his teeth.

"Main nahi bata rahi"

"Don't play games, just tell me Geet" he said as she noticed that he called her Geet for the first time.

"He's my childhood friend" she said looking away.

"How long have you been engaged?" he said almost about to cry.

"You know what why should I tell you!? Tum hote kaun ho haan? And maine kaha tha leave me alone, mujhe tumme koi interest nahi phir?!!!" she said pushing him and walking away.

He saw her walk away he slowly went behind her and watched her write stuff down on the paper.

They got to work and all they talked about was trees and flowers and photosynthesis.

He was soo angry right now but he kept telling himself that he needed to win her over other than let some loser do so'

Geet was just irritated, she had to lie about the engagement thing but it was worth it. All she knew about Maan was that he was crazy for her. Crazy in what sense she didn't know.

"It's been a while" she said looking up to the orange sky.

"We are done lets go back" he said walking in the opposite direction.

After 20 minutes the night sky coated over in a deep royal blue colour.

She looked up and then at the trees everywhere'

"They say at night ghosts cast over trees" she said terrified.

He looked at her now angry.

"Tum chahti thi ke main kuch na boloon then don't trigger me to talk" he hissed.

"Stop with the whole drama okay!!!"

"You're the one telling me fake ghost stories, do I look like a ten year old?" he said arguing back.

"No! you look like a over groan baby!!!" she said turning away in anger.

"Haha, your funny" he said rolling his eyes.

"Tum apna ghussa mujhe pe mat nikalo!! It's not my fault I am engaged" she said annoyed.

"I don't care if your engaged, you're still my Angel" he said leaning up close to her face.

She leaned back.

"Yeh kya kar rahe ho?!" she said scared.

"Chill, I'm not gunna kiss you!!" he said backing up.

"You're too much aura b tumhaare friends bhi meri friends ke peeche pardh gaye hain!! WAH WAH!! Tum lardke aise hi hote ho!" she said as she almost tripped.

He grabbed her hand and aggressively jerked her to his side straightening her.

She fixed her hair.

"Listen ab tumhe pata hai main engaged hoon toh mujhse door raho!" she said pointing a finger towards him.

"You wish Angel! I know you like me too but you're just stubborn"

"I DO NOT LIKE YOU!!"

"Chilao mat warna tumhe koi jaanvar utha ke le jaaye ga" he said shouting.

She quickly put a finger on her lips and moved closer to him.

"And engagement toot bhi sakti hai" he said teasingly

"Bhi sakti hai, magar nahi toote gi" she said haughtily.

"Apni ring dikhana" he said demandingly.

She hesitated and he pulled her hand forward.

He saw a ring but it was a small pink diamond it didn't look like an engagement ring but it could pass as one.

She gulped.

What if he figured it out?

They both walked in silence'.

"Kya yeh sach keh rahi hai is she engaged? Maan until you meet her fiance you can't say anything'.." he thought frowning.

"Kahin use shak toh nahi ho gaya. SHIT!!! I'm here with him aur yahan pe itna andhera hai''" she thought slowly moving towards him.

"Are we lost?" she said scared.

"I really hate to break it to ya but we are" he said still angry.

She slapped him arm.

"Oh my GOD!!" she said panicking as she heard a noise'''

She jumped onto him his anger quickly vanishing and he picked her up.

"Mujhe darr lag raha hai" she said not sure it was because of him of or the fact that they were LOST!!

"Angel" he said softy.

She looked up at him.

"Kya hai, nazar nahi aa raha ke ek lardki ko dar lag raha hai, jaldi bolo mere paas time nahi hai" she said annoyed.

"Oye hoye nakhre dekho!! Madam main keh raha tha, why don't you TEXT one of your friends" he said spitting the word text out.

"Oh my gosh!! Your right I can do that" she said pulling her phone out of her purse.

"Soo girly eh?" he said looking at her purse and the makeup inside it.

"Koi masla hai tumhe? Acha agar girlie lardkiyaan nahi pasand toh jaao lardkon ke peeche bhaago" she said taunting.

"Tum itni jaldi ghussa ho jaati ho, jaana" he said looking up at the tree tops.

"Jaana? I am not a cloned species okay? Kabhi jaana toh kabhi Angel!!"

"Wow smart eh? But there is no cloned species of you are the one and the only" he said smirking.

She looked at him smirking.

"Are you serious?" she said amused at his whole love speech.

He looked at her nodding a yes.

"Text kiya kya, pehle toh tumhaare haath bohat fast chal rahe the" he said taunting over the whole fiance texting.

"Eh tum zaida bolo mat okay!" she said frustrated.

"Meri hi baahon main ho aur mujhpe hi chilla rahi ho, waise thank God you're not that heavy" he said overwhelmed that she was in his arms.

She was soo freaked out she put her head on his right shoulder.

"Thank God you're somewhat useful, as a headrest. When you decide a career, consider carrying people as one. You're good at it, and I don't know what we can name the job?" she said sarcastically.

"Acha, when you're old don't consider being a comedian you suck at it!!"

She pouted.

"The damn connection won't work!!!!!!!!!!" she said screaming.

"As much as I love you in my arms right now, please get off if you're gunna scream like that" he said.

She looked up at him putting her phone back in her purse which rested in her lap.

"I think you wanted to be alone with me, dekho kitna enjoy kar rahi ho. In my arms and your purse in your lap. You seem comfortable" he said taunting again.

"Tum na bohat bade DASH ho!" she said getting off.

"Dash?"

"Yeah it's a replacement for swear words" she said flicking her hair back.

"Replacement , Oh I see so my Angel is a naughty Angel who swears and stuff right?" he said smirking.

"You know what I'm gunna go and sit there" she huffed off.

He watched her walk over to a rock, leaning on it. She wore a white tunic with blue flowers and a grey cardigan, and of course, grey boots. And her hair fluttering to her sides'the moonlight shining on her streaks.

He walked over and leaned beside her.

"Dekho, tumhe agar thand lag rahi thi toh tumne yeh kyun pehna?" he said pointing to her outfit.

"Tumhe main maar daloon gi agar tumne mere outfit ke bare main kuch kaha" she hissed.

He moved taken a back.

"Listen, we keep fighting that's why we can't figure out what to do" she said pouting.

"Okay, I think we should stay here and wait for morning" he said wanting to spend more time with her.

"Acha try tha" she said looking at his huge smile.

He frowned.

"Go up the tree and maybe you'll get connection then" she said pulling his phone out of his pocket.

He looked at her getting up walking in circles trying to get connection.

He took the phones out of her hand and started to climb up the branches.

"Dehaan se!!!!" she shouted afraid.

"No use!!" he yelled out.

She pouted.

"Meri shakal mat dekho, tum gir jaao ge. Neeche aao!" she said yelling.

"Bhoot!!" he shouted'.

She started to scream like a maniac.

He jumped down and quickly jerked her forward.

"Agar aise chillao gi toh sach main bhoot aa jaaye ga" he said looking into her eyes.

She hit him on the shoulder.

"Aur badi fikar ho rahi thi tumhe meri" he said nudging her shoulder.

"Main bas yahan akeli nahi rehna chahti thi isliye!" she said not looking at him.

He pulled her closer.

And her eyes widened as he moved in''.

He brushed his lips off her cheek then kissed it there.

He did the same with the other one and then pulled her into a hug.

She stood there shocked.

He broke out of the hug making her cheeks tingle.

"Maine tumhe kaha tha na don't touch me!" she said sternly.

"Tumhaari agar sunta na toh hum aur bhi aage nikal chuke hote, tum toh bohat kuch kehti ho!"

"Dekha phir taunting shuru" she said sitting down on the ground.

He sat down beside her.

"Acha subhah humme who dhood lenge ya shayad aaj hi because they obviously have security" he said calmer now.

"Hmmm" she said as she leaned back against the rock.

He leaned in and kissed her forhead.

"I'm soo tired to even argue with you subhah batati hoon tumhe!!" she said yawning.

"Shit!! It's 10:00 pm" he said turning his phone on.

"Oh my god!!" she said as she rested her head on his shoulder.

He looked at her curious.

"This is only because there's no pillow!" she said closing her eyes.

He chuckled.

PRECAP:

"Stop kissing me!!!!" she said pulling away.

"You liked it!!" he said taunting.

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If you are confused with the couples here:
Maan and Geet (DUH)
Tanisha and Raj
Rohan and Sonia
Mahi and Tarun


Comment and tell me what you think of the story so far!!!

Edited by cutiepie9512345 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG loved it bf!!!! Hai this just keeps getting better and better!! OMG loved the whole bus scene!!! and man i just love Raj and Tanisha😆!!!! too funny!!! and Maan is just too naughty!!! hai this guy doing kisses ki baarish!!!🤣 beighairat kahi ka!!! love how they r lost!!! and haha geet faking her engagement!!! me just love this whole texting thing u have put in there😉 bf!!!😳
Edited by desigirl_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved da update
do continue
maan is too funny
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Posted: 14 years ago
great update pls cont soon

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