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Posted: 14 years ago
update will be up to night.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwwww
great start 👍🏼
do continue soon
awesomeeeeeeee part
first part tooo good man👏
cant wait for next part
update fast..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey hi thanks dear
waiting for update to night😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -sofiya-

wowwwwwwwwww

great start 👍🏼
do continue soon
awesomeeeeeeee part
first part tooo good man👏
cant wait for next part
update fast..........
thanks for the pm😊


Thanks for loving the start.
I"ll update tonight .
my pleasure dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago

added u dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wajiha-1

hey hi thanks dear
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hi
my pleasure dear.
within 30mins update will be up.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
update will be up within 30mins.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part2:-

After dinner, dar je told them to take rest as it's really very late .

Brij:- ok then looks at maan and indicates him to come with him.

Maan excused himself and get up from the table.

Later one by one every one goes to respective room.

Rajjy and geet placed water jug and glass to ranveer and dadi ma's room when rano told geet to placed this water jug with a book and glass to maan's room.

Geet refused and said rano to do it or send some servant.

Rajjy said if all servants are free then she will not tell her to go and do it,

Geet:- but y me?

Rajjy:- ok fine, don't go.I'll do it by my self.

Geet:- no thank u.

Geet said to herself y I'm doing this all , Y I'm stopping rajjy ?

Geet goes towards maan's room and saw room is empty, she felt good,

Geet p.o.v

Don't know but I feel he looks at me and his gaze too captivating and I don't want to look at those eyes, it's drowning me and a burning sensation in my heart. But my mind said look at him and sink at those chocolate eyes forever.

But soon she breaks her thought and scolds her self. She placed the jug on the side table and a book there. Then she hurriedly tries to leave the room but collide with maan and hold his t-shirt to save herself.

Maan hold her waist and looks at her face, her eyes closed and her faced feared about some thing.

Maan lost himself but help her to stand her own feet.

Geet open her eyes and says sorry and runs from there.

Maan looks at the door then close the door but still thinking about the incident happen just few mins ago.

He looks at the side table and found water jug and a book there.

Maan smiles and changed his dress and lay on the bed. He is very tired and dose off to sleep quickly.

Here , in geet's room rano scolded geet .She saw geet came out from maan's room. She told her not to go in his room .

Geet :-ok mama.

Rajjy came and said it's her mistake, actually she send geet there , she is sacred to go his room, she is scared about maan.

Rano:- don't do that. This small small mistake can create problem. Go and change dress and sleep now.

Rajjy also wished good night to her mom and geet.

Geet goes to her washroom and take a shower and crying there.

She cannot believe after some days she will marry to that man. But she wants to continue her study. No one think about her study .she wear her night dress and open a book. It's management book, she want to do MBA but now her dream will be shatter in a few days. She closes the book and looks at the cover of the book and placed a hand there. Then she lay on the bed and held the book close to her heart.She close her yes but tears falls from her eyes silently, after some time she dose off to sleep.

Next day morning, geet wake up early and pray to baba je for good day and every one's well being. She looks at her book and said I'll talk to maan, if want to marry me then I'll tell about my dream. I'll not let down my parents as well not let down my dream also. Then she goes to wash room and brush her teeth and then take shower quickly.

Here at the out side maan told brij he want to go some where. He will be back by after noon.

Brij :- but where u want to go?

Maan:- here I saw a beautiful land and I want to buy it and want to talk with the land owner.

Brij:- but who is land owner?

Maan:- well my agent told me about some mr Ratanlal Singh .

Brij:- oh that old man, he is very nice. Go and talk with him and hope it'll go well.

Maan:- let's go with me.

Brij:-well.I"m little busy today.I have to go with geet

Maan's eyes sparkled and said oh ok.But Granny said well if u all don't mind then maan will take geet with him, and wait for her. After all after some days both will be husband wife and they need to know each other little.and yes, if trust maan.

Dar jee looks at rano then said yes but before marriage.

Dadi:-ok if u has problem then it's ok.

Shekhar told dar jee we know maan and I'm doing business with him and brij is his college friend then …..Brij told me before he is very good person and it's very good time if both of them spend some time and know about each other. Geet is going not far with maan na.so.

Dar jee:-ok, geet beti, ready ho gaye aap toh maan ke sath chale jao,

Geet who was shocked and said ok.

Geet closed her eyes and murmur, baba jee this is right time and I'll tell him about my dream and wish.

Maan just nodded and in his mind he is very happy.

Maan to himself I don't know but I'm feeling very happy, she will go with me.

Maan:-ok,We will return soon.

Brij ,darjee, ranveer and granny happily nodded but rano looks un happy and granny saw it.

Granny:- rano beta, , don't worry,I know and I can understand ur fear but trust me.Maan is very good boy, he will not cross his limit .Even for his would be wife.

Rano sadly smile and said yea.

Here maan sit in his jeep and said aaiye.

Geet looks at him and said thanks.

Both sit and maan start the jeep.

Maan Said aap kaha ja rehe ho?

Geet:- je main oh, mere college mein oh function hain so.

Maan smiles and said but U told ur house that u'll be come soon.

Geet looks at maan and said no it's not me , it's u who told them about our arrival time before departure.

Maan stares at her and said hmmm. Then to himself now I'm sure y granny choose her for me.

Geet turns and find him smiling then said y r u smiling like this?

Maan:- nothing, so now,

Geet:- what now, anyway, I'll manage but I want to talk to u.

Maan:- ok tell me or ask me.

Geet:- not now if u have little time then come back to my college.

Maan:-ok.may I ask u one question?

Geet:- hmmm.

Maan:-I heard u complete ur graduation then u r going college .

Geet cuts him and said yes I complete my graduation so, but I'm going there for farewell party. Nothing much.

Maan smiles ok.

Geet murmur bahur muskura raha hain, mujhe kya , par mujhe isse baat bhi toh karna hoga. Then to maan I'm sorry oh actuallyI'm just feared about our marriage no means engagement.

Maan smiles and said it's ok. I can understand but now ur college is here and we will talk about it later. Go and enjoy the function.I'll come after 1 and half hour.

Geet:-ok.I'll be at auditorium.

Maan nodded and then goes from there.

Geet:- hmmm, bara jaldi hain, kaha jana tha, thora ruk ke bhi toh ja saktha tha. Nehi , then geet mimic his voice I'll be come after1 and half hour and hmmmm kaise hain pata nehi, baba je sab accha karna.

Pinky:- geeeeeeeeeeet,

Geet close her ears sadi pinky don't shout.

Pinky push her slowly and said who is that guy?

Geet roll her eyes and said maan.

Pinky:- wow , nice name.

Geet:- kya nice name chal . function start hone wala hain.

Pinky:- tu kyuon jal rehi hain, mein agar maan ki tarif karu toh, kitna handsome hain dekha.

Geet feels restless and said pinky, agar tujhe chalna hain toh chal.

Pinky:- itna gussa oh bhi kis liye kahi iye tere boy friend toh nehi .

Geet slightly blushed and said chup kar, , chal abhi., kuch bhi bol rehi hain.

Here, maan reached at that place and look at the home. He knock the door and an old women open the door.

Maan:-Mr singh hain ?

That woman nodded and said yes. Come in.

Maan entered the room and stand there.That woman said sit here.I'll call him.

Maan nodded and sit there . after some time , mr singh came there and said yes mr. Khurana.

Maan:- mein aapse oh land ke baarein mein kuch baat karma chathe hain,

Mr Singh:- yea.already prepare the paper. U'll need to sign the paper.

Maan:- but I want to check the document then. If u don't mind then can I have another copy of the paper.

Mr. Singh:-oh sure. U can take ur time.

Maan:-ok,I'll be reply u day after tomorrow.

Mr. singh:- ok.

Maan get up and said nice to meet. Thanks.

Mr.Singh:-ok.Same here.

Maan leaving the home and then look at his watch and it's only passed 40 mins after he leave geet.

He smiles and goes back to her college and going towards the auditorium .

Some of girls looking at maan and said he is handsome , dashing, wow,

A girl came and said he is with geet hand in the morning.

Girl2:-geet handa but y? geet handa already graduated na then .

Girl3:- forget it.

Maan enter the auditorium hall and ask a boy where is geet?

He pointed the direction.Maan smiles and goes towards that direction.

Another boy asked that boy who is he ?what is his relation with geet?

A girl came and said no idea but today morning he came and dropped geet here.

A boy:-hmmm.

Here, geet is really enjoyed the function when pinky scream hay.dekh tere boy friend aagya.

Geet:- what and turn to see maan there and said aap itna jaldi.

Maan smiles and said sit besides her and said yes , work is done almost. So, came here.

Geet smiles and said thanks .

After some time maan feels bored cause he don't want to see function or never saw any function in his college life also.

Geet turns and saw him and understand it.

Geet to pinky , mine aur maan wapas ja rehe hain, I'll meet u tomorrow.

Pinky:-oye , iye toh tere fav drama hain,

Geet:- yes, but mama told me to come early today. So.

Piny:- real reason bolna, kuch aur hain.

Geet :- chup kar , bye.

Pinky:-ok bye but oye mujhe introduce toh kara.

Geet:-ok, kal karaungi bye.

Geet to maan:- chaliye,

Maan:- but this drama is not finished yet.

Geet:- ha, but We have to back soon. Chailye.

Maan:-ok. Both left the auditorium and maan sit in the jeep and said let's go.

Geet:- hmmm.

Maan start the jeep and said let's go.

Both almost near to their home when geet said rukiye rukiye. Mine shiv mandir jana chathi hoon. Pls.

Maan:-par aab mandir toh bandh ho agye hoga, dopeher ke 1.30 baaj gaye.

Geet:-uff, aap jeep rokiye then mere sath aaiye mein kuch dikhati hoon aapko.

Maan stops the jeep and both goes towards Shiv Mandir.

Maan and geet enter the mandir and sat there in front of Idol and maan said aab batao.

Geet:- aaj na iha ek shaadi hain.

Maan:- par mujeh toh pata tha tumhe shaadi karma pasand nehi hain.

Geet:- bilkul galat. Pehele baat iye shaadi dekhne ki baat hain , doosri baat , meine shaadi se I just want to take some time cause I want to continue my study.I want to be an independent.

Maan:- but u can continue ur studies further after ur marriage also. I'll be very happy if u…..

Geet's eyes wide and said what, r u directly said that .

Maan:- yes , listen my dad and granny want to see my marriage but I refused and send away every girl but u r different from other but one thing is I need some time also.I want ur friendship.If we know about each other but I'll not force to marry u , in every relation is based on friendship. We need to trust each other h, have faith on each but first we need to know each other. Our engagement date is fixed, it's tomorrow.

Geet just see him and said but I have many confusion.regarding my study, our engagement. And more u don't like any one but y r liking me and want to marry me.

Maan:- I like ur confidence .

Geet:- just because of it.

Maan:- no.

Geet:- then.

Maan:- look,I .. forget it.

Geet:- u don't have any reason or just want to accept ur parents order.

Maan:- 50-50

Geet:-iye 50-50 kya hain. Just tell me the actual reason.

Maan:- I don't know and murmur I cannot tell u the actual reason.

Geet:- u r mad?

Maan :- geeeettt.

Geet :- y ru shouting at me. Shaadi hua nehi aur shouting start.

Maan:- oh toh shaadi ke baat pati hi shout karta hain.

Geet nodded in yes.

Maan:- wrong.oh patni hain jo shout karti hain.

Geet:- kya , galat baat hain aapne dekha , kaise aap shout kya.

Maan:-tumne mujhe majbur kya/

Geet:- oh accha, itna agar problem hain humse toh shaadi kyuon karne chathe ho?

Maan:- tumne suna nehi ,iye dilli ke laddo hain , jo khaye oh pastaye aur jo na khaye oh bhi pastaye. Toh khake hi pastana bhala.

Geet rolled her eyes and leave the place.

Maan:- are ruko, suno toh sahi.

Geet:- no.I'll not .I'm going from u.

Maan :- look geet .

Geet:- no way.

Maan:- look in front of geet, there is a ri…… but geet slips and falls on the river and said aaaaaaaaah.

Maan laughed and said kabhi kabhi doosre ke baat sunna accha hota hain.

Geet:- help me.

Maan came near the river and placed his hand said hold it. But geet pull him and came out from the river and said this is for u mr.khurana.

Precap:- rano scolded geet.But maan handle the situation. Maan discussed geet about her education.

Maan feels something for geet but still geet is not happy about marriage. she likes maan as a friend but about marriage is still confuse.

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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
just luved d update
maan so openly accepted geets view of studying further after marriage
luv happens through frndship
hope in maaneets case it is d same

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