MAYUR FF...The Lost Magic.

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#311

sorry for the late reply , i was out of town ..............

amazing yaar !!!!!!!

this part just made me smile more n more ..........

really great ..........

part - 8 .............🤗

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#312

im in love with ur ff..plz add me to pm list..i'll coment in detail later

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#313

mehak wen r u updating the next part??......i am very eager to read it........

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princess_dj

@princess_dj

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Posted: 14 years ago

#314

Please continue soon........... you have spoiled us by updating daily.......😃........... so waiting for the next part

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#315

aww... part 9!

sooo romantic!!!

mayu.. gettin more & more romantic!!

uff... yeh blac & white combi...😍

*ahem ahem..* gettin ready 4 an out & out romantic update!☺️

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#316

👏 very very sweet part mehak..

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#317

OMG ur FF is awwwwwwwwwwwww....just loved it

evrythng starting frm how life changed thm..how she still never doubt tht he loves her....n how he is geting back his nupur

i just loved...gr8 ff...sweet simple..n just waooo

last update mein tu i was continusly smiling....

continue soon

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ChocoLatte

@ChocoLatte

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Posted: 14 years ago

#318

mehak jaldi update kar...n all the best for exams..😛

Edited by Varsha.Arti - 14 years ago

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#319

awwwww mayu just rockssssssssssssss

hope mayur come more close

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Fantasia.

@Fantasia.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#320

ok people..i am really sorry for the delay..i had four exams in three days😭, so i couldn't update, as for now my next exam is next week,😃 and that to creative, the study part is over..so i am back with daily updates inshAllah.😎.ok now i know u all are not intrested in my story.😳.so here u go with part 10:

PART 10:

N..mayank mujhe dekhna band karo and hurry up..

She said this and immediately went outside laughing , leaving mayank in a condition of surprise and awe-ness.

Mayank came outside and she was standing by the side of the car,, playing with her nails, she was looking just like a white flower, blooming in sunshine, her hair were shining, revealing the slightly dark brown shade, which mostly appear as black in the dark, her dress perfectly fitting her, and duppatta slightly flowing due to light breeze, some bangles which she was again and gain moving her hand to hear the sound, and then adjusting her wrist watch in her other hand..and then she realized mayank walking towards her, she consciously stopped all her childish acts..

N..chalen?.

M..hmmm..

nupur was feeling the intense love filled gaze of mayank, but she didn't raise her head, he opened the car locks and nupur sat in hurriedly, not even giving mayank a chance to open the door for her.

Mayank shook his head in disbelief and went and sat on the driving seat..

N..so hum kahan ja rahe hain..

M..nupur pehle ghr se tu bahir nikal jayen..

The watchmen opened the gates and mayank drove out of their drive-way..

M...ab bolo..kahan jana hai..

N..kahin bhi..shopping pe?..

M..shopping!..umm..nupur hum..

N..what?..tum hi ne tu kaha tha k shopping pe chaltey hain, and now u are backing out..not fair..

M..han , main ne bola tha, per nupur tum itna time lagati ho, u cross-check one sari almost 20 times hum..

N..dekho mayank, mujhe shopping pe hi jana hai, kitne dino se merey pass naye catalog aye hoye hain, ,time hi nahi milta tha, ab chaltey hain na..mayank..plz..

He glanced at her while driving and as nupur couldn't refuse his gentle voice, mayank couldn't refuse her innocent pouting..

M..ok..kahan hai ye shop tumhari..

Nupur told him the address, it was a very big sari house.

N..tum bhi chalo.

M..nahi,tum jao, main bahir hi thek hon..

N..are u sure?..

M.haan..

She closed the door and net, but mayank saw that she returned form the door,..mayank lowered his glass,..and was about to speak when she said..

N..don't worry, main jaldi a jaon gi, promise..

She said it and went away and mayank was left admiring her innocence..

It was about an hour and mayank with his cell phone, he was checking his e- mails on the GPRS, he had even started listening to songs of his cell phones, when he saw nupur coming out of the shop ..he started the engine and opened the locks but saw nupur's sad expressions..she sat in quietly..

M..kai hua?..

N..i couldn't decide anything..

M..mtlb?.

N..mayank itni achi achi sariyan hain k main kia baton, such pretty colors and designs, un k pass 10 nayi exclusive sariyan ayi hain, but i just couldn't decide on one..i guess main kal phir aaon gi..ik tu mujhe leni hi hai..

Mayank looked around at other shops on the road,..

M..umm..nupur..wo wali shop main ku nahi jati..display pe dekho kitni achi sariyan hain..

N..nahi, per ye us jaise nahi hain.main..

M..per try tu karo..

Nupur who was a complete shop-o-holic, just needed an invitation,.

N..hmm..ok..bus 10 minute main ati hon..

Mayank knew that 10 minutes meant, almost 40mintes..

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Almost after 40 minutes she returned, again empty handed..

M..kai hua?..yahan bhi kuch pasnd nahi aya?..

N..nahi, us wali shop main itni achi sariyan hain k yahan tu kuch bhi nahi tha..

M..ok..tu ab chalen yahan se..

N..hmm..

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It was almost 7.30, and the darkness had completely fallen

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Mayank was driving when nupur suddenly got ecstatic..

N..McDONALDS!

Mayank put a break on the car as a reflex action, and the whole traffic stopped, he then parked the car in the side.

M..NUPUR!..why do u behave as if pehli baar dekh rahi ho?

N..very funny, chalo McDonalds khate hian..

M..oh plz!..mujhe koi junk nahi khana hai, hum thai cuisine pe chaltey hain..

N..THAI?..OH GOD!..mayank kia tum on chini japani logon k peche par jate ho..itna ajeeb khana hot hia na un ka..urghhhh.

M..nupur behave ur self, agr nahi psnd hai tu at least don't give such expressions, khane wali chezin hain..

N..ok fine, per aj tu hum MCdonalads hi khayen gey..

M..nupur we were supposed to go on a romantic dinner, yahan itna loud music hota hai, i just hate the atmosphere..

N..SO?..itna peppy environment hota hai, its so much fun..

M..haan bilkul, stupid teenagers dates pe aye hotey hain, main..

N...excuse me!..they are so adorable..

M...adorable?..what is so adorable about them?..parhai k dino main dates pe jatey hain, in k parents ko complain kar deni chaiye...i wonder parents itna freedom detey kaise hain..

N..if u re not forgetting, tu hum bhi dates pe jate they..

M..hamari baat aur thi..

N..OH!..hamari baat ayi tu baat aur ho gai..hamari kia baat aur thi?

M..hum bus do dates per gaye they..we were married two months after the day i proposed u, and we both not teenagers, we were 24, and we both were mature, hum 16, 17 saal ki umer main nahi bhair jate they, we were sensible adults..and i don't mind sensible relations,but all these teenagers ruin their lives behind such so-called love..

N..mayank pyar tu kisi bhi umer main ho sakta hai..

M...i agree, per is ka mtlb ye nahi hai k pyar ho gaya hai, tu us age ki jo responsibilities hain ap un se bhag jao..if u really love the person, then guide him on the correct path, dont ruin his or her future just for the sake of ur love,..

N..oh god!..mayank..i wonder hamare bachon ka kia haal karne wale ho tum..

He looked at her and smiled..

M..dont worry..they will be like you..

Nupur turned her face towards him, and he bended towards her..

M..sensible people, who will know the meaning of love, they will convey dreams to their partners, as u did to me..

Nupur's eys started sparkling due to tiny tears, she truend her face away, in an attempt to hide them flowing, this was the most beautiful line mayank had ever said to her.

A man can give his wife the highest degree of regard, when he want's his children to be like her,. Men are very possessive about their children, and if they think they should be like his wife, then it means they consider their wife the best..

Nupur felt so complete and conetnt.

M..excuse me..

Nupru wiped off her tears and looked at him..

N..chalo hum thai..

M..nahi..ab yahin cahlo..

He got out of the car, and nupur followed him inside MCdonalds, he was right, the msuic was so loud

Suddenly she also started feeling the urge of a peaceful quiet enviornment where she could just look at mayank and talk to him.

Mayank was about to go to palce the order on the counter, when nupur held ehr hand..

N..mayank, plz kisi aysi jaga chalety hain jahan bus dono hon.