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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 63

she looked pushed him away & ran to sit in the car. He opened the car door for her looking
naughtily at her. She didn't meet his teasing eyes. Meanwhile raj called maan.
Raj - sir who abhi bhi naraz hain kya?
Maan - khud hi baat karlo. He gives the phone to geet
Geet - umm
Raj - why are u not lifting the call? Tum prem se naraz ho lekin why are missing my party. BTW Thanxs for inviting naina. She is looking beautiful in saree
Geet smiled
Raj whispered I am not able to take my eyes off her.

Geet giggled
Raj - tumne saree pehne ko kaha kya
Geet nodded her head
Raj - I am officially dead
Geet - papa-mama se milvane ke baad
Raj - when are u guys reaching here
Geet - I don't want to come there & create a scene. I don't to see his face again in my life
Maan was shocked with her anger.
Geet - raj please doesn't force me & hangs up the call
Maan carefully - why are so angry with him.
Geet - no its not him, its me. I need some time to understand
Maan - understand what?
Geet - things change when people are in relationship, priorities changes.
Aab mujhe hi dehklo, if ever I have to choose between u & my friends I am land up
Chossing u
. he just fell again for those words. She always did this..to him
bina kahe sab kuch kah dena, he just kept looking at her lovingly. She continued
I am blessed u understand my relation with raj, armaan & prem. But I guess prem is unlucky.
Maan - tum itna samjthi ho tho probem kya hain
Geet - it still hurts na
He hugged her tightly & kissed her head.
Geet cried - woh mera phone call ke bina uttha tak nahi tha, but now'
He patted her head softly, pushing her strands behind her ears
She looked up to meet his gaze then gave a weak smile looking at him, she caresed his cheek softly

Maan - sab teehk ho jayega, its just a passing face
Umm
she nodded. She puts up a brave face - waise bhi I don't have time for him now
He narrowed his eyebrows curiously
Geet - I need to keep track of the Maan Singh Khurana now
He smiled delightfully
Geet - pata nahi meri naraz hati aur koi phir aa jayegi proposal leke, aur aap ka kya barosa
Kal tho haat pakadne de diya pata nahi kya kya
he bends forward & kisses her
She flutters her eyes & looks at him..& her cheek turns pink as she closes her eyes kissing him back in the same essence. it was always there soul that kissed..it was deep & passionate driving the into there own world of love & warmth. he slowly kisses her lips again & whispers
Maan - shall we just give the gifts & come back
Geet - ok only the gifts
They drive to the army club & meet up with everyone.
Geet hugs naina & says thanxs for coming. Gives her the gift. She gives the gift to ridz & then to mukti. Mukti opens her mouth to apologize geet stops her by showing her hand & turns to leave.
Prem comes in from & kneels down holding his ears & says sorry
She turns away. Maan holds her from going away from there. She hits his chest don't do this to me. he whispers dehko he is truly sorry. Mujhe nahi dehkna.
Raj & armaan - geet for all time sake yaar
She turns & hugs prem starts crying - I hate you, you are not my friend.
Raj & armaan join in the hug. Maan , ridz, naina & mukti stand there watching them
They continue with party listening to music & snacking.
All of them danced with their respective partners. They had their lunch.
Maan left early back to his office. Armaan ' ridz left to sanjeevini. Geet dragged naina home
to meet mama & papa. Raj nervously follows them.
Geet - mama yeh Dr. Naina hain
Rano - armaan ke saath kaam karthi hain kya?
Geet - nahi mama..Capt Dr. Naina
Rano looked confused
Raj came in looking down
Rano held his ears. raj - aunty please meri puri baat tho suniyan
Rano - mujhe kuch nahi sun na
Geet giggles with naina. Rano holds geets ears too.
Geet - aaah..mera kaan kyun? Snaps away & runs to her room
Rano shouts - tumhare koi letter hain, study table main rakha hain
Geet - ji
Raj introduces naina formally to rano
Raj - uncle se aap hi baat karna please
Rano - itni pyari nahi hoti tho mana kardethi
Naina bends down touches her feet & takes her blessings.
Rano hugs her & presents her a kangan, the one she wore

Geet ran to her study & checked the letter & started screaming loud
She immediately called maan & started jumping. Maan was in a meeting
Geet - maan u won't believe it
Maan - meeting main hoon jaldi bolo
Geet - aise nahi main bahut excited hoon, aise bolongi tho pura maza inkal jayega
Call me when u are free.
She hung up & ran to the kitchen
Maan had never heard her sound so delighted. She was on top of the world.
She flashed the letter to raj & lifted her collar
Raj - SSB interview
She jumped & hugged him, rano & naina
Raj - interview kab hain?
Geet - next month
Naina - kanha hain
Geet - bangalore
She called armaan & told him. Then she called prem & told him. She called papaji & told him
She could not wait any longer & went to maan's office. He was just stepping out of his conference
room. She ran & hugged him in front of the clients. Maan held her back softly said clients' hain.
He walked with her to the cabin. She showed him the interview letter & sat on his lap
Maan - geet office hain, samne chair main betho
Geet - aapka hi office hain na
Maan gives a stern look she makes a baby face & snatches the letter & goes to the couch
Maan sighs & sits next to her on the couch - dihkavo na kya letter please
Geet - nahi
He snatches the letter & reads it in one go - WOW' have u prepared for all this. Maine suna hain there are special training programs for army selection procedures. I heard they are different from the usual interviews. He looked really excited kanha hain, then reads again Bangalore.. thats cool I will come with you. Wait when is it. she calls pari
maan - book 2 flight tickets to Bangalore on 22nd on next month for me & Geet
pari - return
maan - looks at the interview card keep it after 6 days
geet keeps looking at him, he looked more happy than she was.
geet hugs him - u will come with me
maan - umm, I am really excited
geet - u don't mind
maan - that's ur dream job, even though I feel u should work with me
geet - yanha no ways
maan - I feel u will not be happy joining services
she gets upset. He cups her face its just my view I am happy with whatever you do.
Geet - sure na.. you don't mind.
Maan kisses her forehead no ways'

precap
trip to bangalore

-NEXT PART 64-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments. Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res!:)
Yay I'm first to comment..lol
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Awww.....Awesome update muskkii
Loved it...
Yay prem and geet are reunited..
😛
Aww...loved the group hug..hehe
Loving maaneet moments..😳
Hehe Loved how she hug him in front of the clients..
Yay maaneet to bangalore..
Cant wait
Update soon!!!:)
Continue soon..lol

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome......love it.
geet n maan rocks.
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
yupieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee TM updated yayy anyways lovely update hayeeeeeeee maneet der convo wowwwwwww n good good prem-geet reunited awesomeeeeee n den wowwwwww maneet to banglore trip n geet got SSB wowww coool loved it cant wait for banglore trip now
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part....
i totally love all your FF's
they are always sooo cute and no evil villians or anything....
thats what i love to read..
it takes the stress away
Thank you sooo much for the lovely FF's
cant wait for you to continue the other 2....
by the way it Geet planning to join the Army just like Raj or What....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Muskan, nice part yaar. tuu to bahut aache likthe ho.
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Posted: 14 years ago


UPDATE


But yaar itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa tarpaya na karo. pahle hi geet me NT aur os k BRO and anvesha in ki wajha se bura haal ho jata he upr se tum itnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa intzar karwa k update karti ho main bore ho jati hoon.
jaldi update kiya karo.


in todays update

maneet and raj naina

Geet giggled
Raj - tumne saree pehne ko kaha kya
Geet nodded her head
Raj - I am officially dead
Geet - papa-mama se milvane ke baad

She puts up a brave face - waise bhi I don't have time for him now
He narrowed his eyebrows curiously
Geet - I need to keep track of the Maan Singh Khurana now
He smiled delightfully
Geet - pata nahi meri naraz hati aur koi phir aa jayegi proposal leke, aur aap ka kya barosa
Kal tho haat pakadne de diya pata nahi kya kya


Prem comes in from & kneels down holding his ears & says sorry
She turns away. Maan holds her from going away from there. She hits his chest don't do this to me. he whispers dehko he is truly sorry. Mujhe nahi dehkna.
Raj & armaan - geet for all time sake yaar
She turns & hugs prem starts crying - I hate you, you are not my friend.


She could not wait any longer & went to maan's office. He was just stepping out of his conference
room. She ran & hugged him in front of the clients. Maan held her back softly said clients' hain.
He walked with her to the cabin. She showed him the interview letter & sat on his lap
Maan - geet office hain, samne chair main betho
Geet - aapka hi office hain na
Maan gives a stern look she makes a baby face

maan - book 2 flight tickets to Bangalore on 22nd on next month for me & Geet
pari - return
maan - looks at the interview card keep it after 6 days
geet keeps looking at him, he looked more happy than she was.
geet hugs him - u will come with me
maan - umm, I am really excited
geet - u don't mind
maan - that's ur dream job, even though I feel u should work with me
geet - yanha no ways
maan - I feel u will not be happy joining services
she gets upset. He cups her face its just my view I am happy with whatever you do.
Geet - sure na.. you don't mind.
Maan kisses her forehead no ways…




waiting for next

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Posted: 14 years ago
aww thts so sweet of maan Finally Geet and prem are talkin again
Continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the part where Geet forgives prem!
loved the bonding b/w maan-geet............
pls update soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely lovely.maan and geet rocks what to say waiting for your next update.

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