Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
awesome part. loved it.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
lovely update ......can't wait for next one....
Loved the suspense...hopefully Brij will not do anything bad now.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
wow nice one.. cant wait for the lovely reunion... do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

Awesome update Geet!!! MSK climbing stairs😛!! Waiting for the reunion now

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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
loved da updat e
do continue
it was amazing
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update
soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
Okay..so an update before I leave for my trip :)

Geet was shivering as the cool wind blew across her wet cheeks.
Eyes closed, she sat on her old bed- remembering her life in Hoshiyarpur

Folding her hands in front of her, eyes still closed she whispered a prayer

oh babaji..aapne meri zindagi mein aur kya kya likha hai?
Jab bhi khushi ko chhoona chaha koi mushkil aa gayi,
jab khushiyon ko apne paas paaya, toh ghar ki yaad aa gayi
Ab mera ghar, mera parivaar...yahan nahi,Maan ke saath hai..daadima, rajji,vicky- unhone mujhe pyaar diya, main yahan aa toh gayi...par kya main apne ateet se nikal paaungi kabhi?
😕

Maan climbed in and saw her praying.
He saw how her skin glistened like a pearl in the moonlight..but those drops glittering on her skin.
Aah..Geet had been crying.

If they have laid one finger on her, I'm not going to leave them

He tiptoed close to her, and went behind her, gently putting his hands on top of hers-still folded and placed a kiss on her neck

Geet smiled and whispered, eyes still closed
Maan...

Maan turned her around gently and placed tiny kisses on her face- where those tear drops were glistening still

Maan- Geet...

And he gathered her into his arms, where they found each others' heaven

Geet(her voice muffled due to Maan's chest)- MAan...

then Maan resolutely broke away from her

Maan glared angrily at her-Geet..tum, bin bataye yahan aa gayi?
Geet- Aap phone
Maan- kya main phone? haan? Ghar mein koi aur nahi tha jise tum...
Geet- mujhe brij vir ji...
Maan- Kahan hai woh Brij..woh jail se kab chhoota?
Geet- Maan..Daarji ki tabhiyat bohot kharab hai..woh mujhse milna chahte the

Maan laughed a bitter laugh
Maan- itna karne ke baad..unhe tumhari yaad kaise aa gayi geet?

A voice
Geeet...GEEEET

maan- tumhara bhai ullu hai kya? sota hi nahi?
I wonder how he'll feel seeing me here?

Geet- He won't see you here Maan..We'll talk about this later..abhi aap chhup jayie

MAan- Maan singh Lhurana kisi se nahi chhupta!

Geet- Maan...Stop it please.. YOu can do your name boast later..just hide right now..I don't want us to get into trouble. I'll introduce you tomorrow

Maan- Geet...Geet...

She makes him lie on the bed and puts the quilt on him so he's completely hidden.
Then she sits on him and yells back

Geet- ji veerji?
Brij enters the room

Brij- Oye Geet..tu kya kar rahi hai?
Geet- bhagwaan se prarthna, ki daarji thik ho jaaye
Brij- bohot achhe...hmm..yeh awaazein kaha se aa rahi thi?
Geet- Maine kaha na aapse main bol rahi thi..nahi toh kaise...
Brij- thik hai. Geet..koi pareshaani hui is baar..toh jaan lena..

Geet shook a bit..Because Maan was trying to get up..
Brij- Yeh kya tha?

Geet- woh...mujhe thand lag rahi hai na...
and she jumped around a bit...on maan😆😉

Brij leaves after giving her a warning glance and as soon as the door closes, Maan comes out of the covers

Maan- Geet..You are not exactly Cotton you know..
Geet- What were you doing? shaking the entire bed...

Maan(with a gleam in his eye)- oh that was nothing...you want to shake the bed...😉

As he said that he pulled her down on him and kissed her ,surprisingly gently

Her lips were icy cold against his warm ones and he puller her closer and covered them with the quilt so she stops shivering..

Maan broke away from her and said
Maan- Geet...tumhe abhi bhi thand lag rahi hai?

Geet- shh..
and she continued to kiss him..still cold..

Maan- Geet...do you know mera kya haal hua tha?
Geet heard the tremor in his voice and cupped his face with her hand...
Geet- shh..Main yahin hoon...aapko chhod kar nahi jaaungi...hush now..

He hugged her tight and opened the dori of her kurti...effectively removing it..soothingly caressing her bare back...following the moon rays that made it glisten
She arched up and came even closer to him, pressing her body against his,relishing that sweetness that came out of such closeness.
she clutched his shirt and kissed his neck, oh so slowly..both lost in each other, both intent in pleasuring the other

Maan pulled apart and showed Geet her dupatta

Geet- maan?? yeh kya?
MAan made her lie down...she was now only wearing her salwar and he looked at her with a gaze that warmed her from top to bottom

Maan kissed her fingertips and painfully slowly, moved upwards...and then..
He took her hands in his...and with her dupatta still, he looked at her

Maan- do you know Geet..what I can do with this dupatta?
Geet- 😲MAan...noo
Maan- tumne mujhe itna pareshaan kiya..uski sazaa toh milegi na...

Geet- but maan...
Maan- Geet...no buts..and he put the dupatta on her.refused to make direct contact with her skin...but caressed her through the dupatta..making her wild with the need for direct touch..
and he moved out of her hands' reach everytime she tried to touch him..

Geet was breathless and wanted to take off that wretched dupatta that lay between them...but then she decided otherwise..
IF he used her dupatta..she might use her long hair...😳
So, she opened them and moving slightly so they tickled his cheek, she gently moved her head..arousing him even more...

Temporarily having the upper hand, she pushed him down and brought her lips temptingly close to his..but refused to kiss or touch him...

it was her hair, Maan thought-almost in pain...
He shouldn't have taken advantage of the dupatta..he knew his Geet..she'd make him suffer double...

So no matter how much he tried..she always managed to evade him until he gently tugged on her hair, at present dangerously close to his lower abdomen

As soon as he tugged a bit, Geet came closer...he was going mad..unable to move, she had trapped him with her beautiful hair..
As soon as he thought the sweet torture was over ...she got up and told him

Geet- aaj ke liye itna hi..I'm tired..good night my darling hubby

LEaving him utterly perplexed and aroused

MAan-😡 Tum sona chahti ho...abhi sulata hoon...

That's all!
hope you guys..erm..liked it..

love ya!

Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
nice geetu...have a nice trip..... hugs
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88

update dear......👏👏👏

thanks 4 pm me..😃...
really...
keep it up dear..👍🏼.
lov,❤️
Tama
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
omg it took me 3 days to completely read ur ff...i am glad i found it...it was quite intresting...i am shocked that u didnt use devtara character at all in this whole ff other than that 1 time......can u pls add me to ur pm list and update me ....thnks
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
nice nd love it so much, nd the way maaneet cares fr each other is awesum

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