Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 10

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Posted: 14 years ago
#91
awesome update yaar maan can do anything for geet frm trying knitting 2 climbing windows😆
d precap is awesomeeeeeee waitingggggggggg
update sooooonnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OIYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE jaldi see update kar warna 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
U Better do it soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Apologies!!!

Sorry sorry sorry...im back!!

HEre is the next update😆

Maan- Yeh ladki ...kuchh nahi ho sakta iska...how can she leave me like this and sleep??
Aur woh bhi haathi ghode bech kar...
GEEET?😕😭

I think i'd better sleep too then..considering there's nothing else to do..but I'd better get rid of the problem first..

So..maan quietly went through the window and all the way to a quiet stream,took off his shirt and pants...and then jumped into the stream..decided it's better to do at night when no one was around..he didn't want to attract attention all over again..

As he was bathing- he smiled to himself thinking of all of what had happened during HP...it didn't seem that bad..Geet meeting him and everything..
Perhaps he had fallen for her long back...when she stared at him with those beautiful brown eyes of hers..so clear- he could see himself in them...who would have thought so much-
AAAH

Maan had crashed with someone and he pulled the person out, by the neck

Brij- OYEEEEE
Maan- TUM?😲
Brij- OYEEEEE tu yahan kya kar raha hai?? Teri himmat kaise hui??

Maan- CHUP..Tum meri Geet ko utha kar le aaye aur mujhse poochte ho main kya kar raha hoon??
WHAT right do YOU have?

Brij gave a very cruel smile
Brij- woh ab tere saath waapis nahi jayegi
Maan gave a small laugh
Maan- achha..kaun roke ga mujhe?

Brij- poora hoshiyarpur rokega..ab tu dekh Maan Khurana...ab dekhna main kya karta hoon

Maan got out from the stream calmly, wore his clothes and went back..climbing the window after drying himself..extremely cold to the core, he lay down next to his Geet and pulled her close as she snuggled comfortably into his arms

Maan- no one can do anything Geet..no one can separate us

Geet- uhhuuh..hmmm

He smiled and dropping a kiss to her temple he slept.

Geet and maan woke up in the morning to the loud knocking on Geet's door...

They looked at each other and maan crossed his arms over his chest and gave Geet a stern look
She understood there's something wrong so she quietly went and opened the door

Geet's mom- oye Geet tu...
TUM?
Tum yahan kaise aaye?

Maan got up and came to Geet.

Maan- yeh meri biwi hain.
I wasn't going to let her come alone
We have a flight to catch in 2 days and we need to go anyway..so..Geet should better get ready to leave and come because we need to buy a few things too

Geet's mom was as quiet as Geet and equally shocked
Geet's eyes looked at Maan asking what plans? what flight..but he refused to answer


Geet starts to go down and maan accompanies her

Geet- Maan...daarji ki life bachani hai..unhe heart attack se maarna nahi..what are you doing?

Maan- geet..i'll tell u later..just don't ask me right now

Brij was with Daarji..guarding the door...😆

Brij- tu andar nahi jaa sakta

MAan looked at the hand that was on his collar...and plucked it from there, twisted it behind brij's back..and said

Maan- you will stop ME?

Geet laid a hand on maan's arm..
and he let go

They went inside

Daarji- g-g-geet...

Geet- daarji main yahan hoon

Daarji- yeh...yeh yahan..?

Geet- Daarji yeh mere pati hain

Daarji- ek..baat kehna chata tha..marne se pehle..

Geet- daarji aisa na boliye please..

Maan was shocked to see Geet had tears running down her cheeks...as always his heart tugged with pain

He came upto Geet and put his hands on her shoulders for strength

Daarji- kehna chahta tha ki jo tune kiya...usse mere khandaan ka yeh haal ho gaya..sadiyon ki izzat..mitti mein mila di...teri wajah se mera yeh haal ho gaya aur main yahi kahunga ki tujhe kabhi khushi nahi milegi Geet..tune humari zindagi ujaad di..mujhe maut ke mooh mein dhakel diya aur main apni maut ka zimmedaar tujhe therata hoon

Geet was shaking and trembling

Geet- daarji..par main...

But daarji had died

Maan took Geet away as the family crowded around Daarji...
she kept turning back but he wanted her to be away when brij was occupied but as they went outside..there was a crowd that started attacking her with their cruel words all over again...


Geet felt her past rise in front of her like a huge wave that couldn't be extinguished but maan was there this time. maan simply sqeezed her hand and looked at her with a slight smile..the expression in his eyes giving her the strength

HEad held up high...she shouted for silence
All were quiet..waiting to see what this dissenter wanted to say...

Geet- MAin Geet hoon. Geet Maan Singh Khurana. IS ghar ne mujhe apna kabhi samjha hi nahi.
is gaaon ne..mujhe apna kabhi nahi samjha...yahan HAR ladki sirf dene ke liye paida kari jaati hai...khaandaan ki izzat sabse zaroori-beti ke liye pyaar se badhkar.
My own brother tried to kill me. with orders from my grandfather- but kisi ne kuch nahi bola.
Inhone mujhe marne se bachaya...ek ajnabee mere liye mere parivaar se zaada fikr karta tha.

Main jab aayi-toh maine socha..shayad ab..shayad unhe ehsaas ho apni galti ka...shayad meri yaad aati ho..magar..unhone mujh par apni galti ka ilzaam laga diya- ki sab kuchh meri galti hai.

Aaj main yahan ek baat kehna chahti hoon..har us ladki ko jo mere jaisi hai

whenever something goes against your conscience..do NOT accept it and fight against conformity if you think it is not right.

Today I'm an educated independent woman, married to the man of my dreams-because I followed my path. I believed in my self...I didn't want to do anything but for that 1 spark of life in me- i was willing to give up everything.

A small girl came upto her at this point

Girl- didi..mujhe kitaabein padne ka shaunk hai

Maan looked at Geet..
Geet smiled
Geet- I am going to build a school here open for everyone.aap sabki permission se😳

Brij- idhar tere daarji guzar gaye hain aur yeh yahan itraa rahi hai..
yahi sanskar the is ladki ke?kya yahi chahte hain aap sab?

Geet- don't you want to live with a mind open..free?

people were confused but except a few..slowly they all agreed to Geet's idea of opening a school.

Maan and Geet smiled to each other and
MAan- hum thode dino mein waapis aa kar planning karte hin and then construction. yeh designing Geet karegi.Uski zameen par.

With that they left amidst cheers and joy
Geet's hands were shaking and her eyes were filled with tears...Maan started driving and once outside the village..maan stopped the car and kissed the woman he was proud to say was his wife

😳

That's all for today :)


Edited by geet.a - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey..... it was surprizing.... i really didnt think darjee would actually die... whatever he told geet😡 still stuck at the purkhon ki issat.... had hoti hai yaar.... good he's dead he deserved it.... 😊... plz dont mind me saying so but really there waas something missing i dont know what but something was missing for me .... nevertheless the update was really nice.... so a school.... luved the idea n her confidence.... 😃 brimaan interraction was really nice....😊 i changed my comment.... didnt know you were were gonna edit.....😊
Edited by aiyana - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
d update is short yaar bt luved d way maan is sooooo coolyyyyyy talking 2 brij
n continue sooooooooonnnnnnn
bt d way geet fought with her thoughts n made a decision 2 make a school in hp was superbbb
Edited by rsroopali - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
GUYS- haha im still editing
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
aiyana- YUP because BRIJ had something in mind🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Hi geetu...update soon..... waise i wont b available tonight as well.... relatives at home.... just logged on n saw that u r about to update....waiting for ur update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99

Hi,

i am a new reader of your ff and m in love with it totally!
read all the previous parts in one go!
Pls add me to your pm list!
And do continue soon.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gou di- Read now :)

Done
it ain't romantic...but perhaps...you'll like it :)

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