Maneet FF- A Lifetime of Gratitude- 3 updt-pg 37 - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
so whts the new
mystery now
who have come to mansion
to meet geet
nic story goin on b/w
raji and vicky
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
So is it Brijjy boy or Daarji or her daddy ji?????
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Okay sorry for delays

here is the next update!!
what happened that made Geet call Vicky

Geet opened the door to the brother who tried to kill her- Brij

Brij- ek minute Geet. Darwaza band karne se pehle meri baat sun lo

Geet with tears streaming from her eyes continues to struggle but Brij being Brij slips in

Brij- Geet..Daarji bohot beemar hain.
Tujhse milna chahte hain

Geet looks up shocked feeling pangs of regret, hurt and a love she thought didn't exist

Geet- main aapka vishwaas kyun karu?

Brij- kyun ki Geet..main sachh keh raha hoon. Chahti ho toh ghar mein phone karke pooch lo

Geet- toh aap yahan?

Brij- daarji ko teri yaad aa rahi hai..aur pata nahi woh ek aur din dekhein bhi ya nahi.
Ek baar milna chahte hain aur mujhe lene ko bheja

Geet- agar main nahi aayi to?

Brij- Geet...mujhe majboor matt karna.

Geet told him she'll be back.
She tried calling Maan who didn't pick up.
She called Vicky and Rajji to come

Brij- Geet..waqt nahi hai..jaldi karo.

Geet said okay and quickly went with him

About 20 minutes later, Rajji and Vicky pulled into the drive way and hurried inside..looking for Geet
She was of course, no where to be found.
Rajji started crying..
Vicky tried geet's cell phone but it was on silent and his calls went unanswered

They decided to go to Maan
Vicky rushed inside Maan's cabin where he was working

Maan- Vicky..Yeh kya matlab hua- ? KYa hua ?

Vicky- Bhai..Bhabhi..bhabhi

Maan got up as a cold fist started to choke him..

Maan- KYa hua Geet ko?

Vicky- she's not home. Not picking up cell phone.

Maan decided to call her to check..btu no replies
Geet now had more than 20 missed calls and 15 text messages
Maan was worried..seriously worried..With hands shaking, and head dizzy.. he decided he'd wait for some more time and then go search for her

He sat back down with his hands covering his face...shaking with uncontrollable terror

Vicky came to him and put his hands on his brother's
Vicky- bhai..we'll find her..don't worry.
she called us and we left immediately but by the time we reached she was not there..

Maan started moaning in a very low tone..Geet..tum kahan ho?

Geet reached hoshiyarpur when it was dark.
Within 20 minutes of reaching, she was back in front of the doors she had to almost die to get out of.
She was never coming back, she had promised herself..and yet..here she was

Where was she? where was she?
Rajji- Jeeju...she'll be fine na?

And she burst out crying and Vicky hugged her and led her away from Maan who needed to be alone and not asked questions that were running with the speed of light in his head..leaving it reeling

No one in the family dared to utter a word or meet her eye
Of course..how could they after all that had happened?

She went quietly to Daarji and held his hand.
How utterly selfish they all were..no one cared about her here and she felt a sudden longing for home...for maan.
But she sat there allowing daarji to look at her...while she wondered how maan was doing without her

So this is how hell feels like?
He needed her back..he needed her back in his arms and he didn't know what to do?
Nothing could assuage what he was going through except her sweet smile, her big brown eyes and her arms around his neck...and yet..he was alone

He banged his fist on the table and his phone rang

Maan- hello
Geet- maan..
Maan- GEET?? tum kahan ho? kya hua? tum thik toh ho? main abhi lene aata hoon..Jaanti ho kitna pareshaan tha..ek baar toh bata deti...
Geet- Maan..main thik hoon. aapko call kiya tha. you didn't pick up. I'm at Hoshiyarpur, Brij vir ji lene aaye. Daarji is very unwell. I couldn't not go.

Maan was seething in anger but was also relieved she was safe.
Maan- main abhi aata hoon.
Geet- maan...jaldi aayiye...mujhe aapki bohot yaad aa rahi hai..aur ek darr bhi lag raha hai

Maan put everything in his next lines
Maan- Listen to me, Geet Maan Singh Khurana- I love you and nothing matters more than your safety and happiness. I'll be there when you wake up.
Ab jaake so jaao

Geet- maan..I love you too.jaldi aayiga

Maan felt weak with relief and decided to leave..realized she probably hadn't taken any clothes and packed for her..and left home after telling Vicky where he was going.

HE drove very fast and was under Geet's room window at about 3 am.

With a smirk on his face, he climbed- taking a pair of fresh clothes for both of them.

To be continued....
😳

Precap- reunion



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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
wow i thought brij was lying and he was going to kill geet but really loved tht maan is going to meet geet frm her room's window ohhh sooooo filmy
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
loved it .... do continue sooon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
llov loved ur update yaar soo gud
cant w8 4r da nxt update
plz update soonxx!:):)
maan's gnna do smething naughty cant w8 w8 w8!plz update soonxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
The Maan Singh Khurana climbing through windows 🤣 🤣 🤣......cannot wait 🤣

Awesome update Geet 🤗

Jhan



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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Jhan- its not like he's not done this before na..🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
geet sweety u luv cliff hangers i guess.........last tym u left us guessing abt who that man was n now u leave us waiting for reunion.......jokes apart........ loved the update........👏

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