AR OneShot 'Let's Leave On Our Destiny'

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hey Sam.
Lovely one. Pls continue soon..

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repercussion

@repercussion

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

awesome...it was very mature...no force...no compelling...it takes a lot of courage to open up in front of sum1 who make su feel awkwards nd gives u jitters...but the sooting effect Armaan has over Riddhima nd the way he handled the situation was very mature....especially isnce riddhima is still a kid lol! keep writing...or update the last one soon....nd i observed a change in ur writing in this one shot...it's something so subtle i cnt lay a finger on it but it's fr the better..that's all i cn assure u of lol....

have a nice day!

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Yohima

@uhima

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

wow luved it fren my KaSu m missing them so so so mch hey bhagwa thnkx fren i really njoyed ur work good job

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flowers.forever

@flowers.forever

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

i loved it.....awesome concept.....update soon.... (:

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teenorchid

@teenorchid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

will b waiting for the other one..this one was...amazing

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Aishwarya sharma

@Ishia

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

is there any continuation for this

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Sameera

@sameera_12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: kavyaa
awwww dat was such a cute part😃!!! Amy asked ridz about her thoughts on d marriage issue... hayyye sooo sweet!!! & finallly finally finally ridz accepted dat she has no reaosn 2 say no!!! aww she accepted dat she has fallen 4 amy😃!!! sho shweet😃....

& itnaaaaa chotta part after so much of wait😡😭??? itna kyun tadpa rahi hai ya😭???? mujhe pata hai iss wakt tujhpe bahut gussa aa raha hai..... aaghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh😡😡😡
u better rply nai to i wn talk 2 u again😛😈😆.....

Thank you!!! for such a sweet comment!!!!😊

Yeh koi ff to nahi hai k bara ya chota part dun!!! aur mujh pe gussa kis baat ka??? and yeah dekh lo sab se pehle tumhe he reply kar rahi hun!!!

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Sameera

@sameera_12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: arooshee
nice one
ek aur part hai kya??

Thanks dear!!!
and yeah ek aur part bilkul hai😉

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Sameera

@sameera_12

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: repercussion
awesome...it was very mature...no force...no compelling...it takes a lot of courage to open up in front of sum1 who make su feel awkwards nd gives u jitters...but the sooting effect Armaan has over Riddhima nd the way he handled the situation was very mature....especially isnce riddhima is still a kid lol! keep writing...or update the last one soon....nd i observed a change in ur writing in this one shot...it's something so subtle i cnt lay a finger on it but it's fr the better..that's all i cn assure u of lol....
have a nice day!

Thank You ver much for the comment!!!!
I really liked it and if the change is for good then thanks once again😉