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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
NEETHI! Gosh. AWESOME part. I like your writing style. You'd rock if you pick up a FF, or atleast be regular here! 😊

Brb. Im gonna update my inbox and the title! :D

Aww!! Thank you!! I'll just edit my part like you said😃

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544691

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

OMG awesome updates guys! i am defo updating tmrw!! pakka promise! 😛

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Sameena_.Mayur
OMG awesome updates guys! i am defo updating tmrw!! pakka promise! 😛

Yay.. K :D

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Kaheela

@ka7eela

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
@ka7eela: Thanks a lot! It was my first time. I was hoping it comes out at least okayish. My name's Neethi. Lol! Why don't you like Chill_Out?? What your name though I don't mind addressing you as ka7eela only😆

😆my name is kaheela , the number 7 is substitute for an Arabic letter that is not available in English! that sounds different and H is as close as it can get to it, pronunciation wise!

when we sms or write in net! we sometimes use numbers as substitute for Arabic letters that are not available in English, i hope i am making sense

anyways its not that i dont like your nick as chill out , i think its cool, but i feel odd if i address you and say, hey chill out!

if you want me to call you chill out its ok by me!😳 i hope you are catching my drift!

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: ka7eela

😆my name is kaheela , the number 7 is substitute for an Arabic letter that is not available in English! that sounds different and H is as close as it can get to it, pronunciation wise!

when we sms or write in net! we sometimes use numbers as substitute for Arabic letters that are not available in English, i hope i am making sense

anyways its not that i dont like your nick as chill out , i think its cool, but i feel odd if i address you and say, hey chill out!

if you want me to call you chill out its ok by me!😳 i hope you are catching my drift!

OMG! Lol😆

Its ok. You can address me as Neethi or Chill_Out or Tom, Dick, Harry whatever you like. Its nota problem! And ya, I kind of understood what you mean😳

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Sudha

@ssdtvgojan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Hi Friends, Its a lovely concept and a nice idea, I have read the updates of Aks, Kaleela and chillout now only.............Going great.

Looking ahead to read further.............Keep going yaar.

Thanks Aks for the link.

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Akankshaa.

@Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

KEEP THIS ON THE FIRST PAGE! 😃

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544691

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

PART 4

"Welcome to Mt College, Ms Pia Jaiswal."

I turned around to see who was calling my name. It was none other than that guy 'that thought i was sucidal'. Great. My day was just getting better and better. "What are you doing here and how on earth do you know my name!?" I asked.

"The answer to your first question is that I study here and the second is that it's something you'd rather now want to know." He grinned meanly.

I just ignored him and tried to leave, but he blocked my way. "Oh no, Pia, you aren't just going to leave without having a tour of the college are you?

"No thanks, i don't need any tours. I have to meet the principal now, So excuse me."

"You will be excused, but not just as yet."

He grabbed my wrist tightly and pulled me with him.

"What the hell do you think you're doing? Let go of my hand right now!" I was furious at this guy. He's wrecked my day enough already, i'm not gonna let him ruin it more. "I said, let go of my hand. NOW."

He immediately eased his grip, but he was tense.

I was actually surprised at how fast he let go. His speed made it supernatural.

Expressionless, he looked at me straight in the eye, "Go away, right now. If you have to run, then run because they are coming." The power in his voice did something to me. Like i knew it from before, like it was somehow protecting me.

Without wasting another moment, I ran. Where to? I wasn't quite sure myself.

Ok so that was 'part 4', sorry for any mistakes, coz this is the first time i've did something like this. 😃 Can't wait to read the next part!

And please do press the like button. 😊

Edited by -Sameena- - 14 years ago