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Megha

@IndigoBlues

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

awesome!!! 😃 i mean seriously..so typical of abhay to save pia and then act like nothing happened...😆

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
awesome!!! 😃 i mean seriously..so typical of abhay to save pia and then act like nothing happened...😆

vahi to n he specially looks un intersted when he saves pia😆

highly cliched scene but phir bhi loved to write it hee hee

so who's next??

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Neetz

@.Jane..

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Dolly, awesome update!! The chandelier part was amazing!👏

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
Dolly, awesome update!! The chandelier part was amazing!👏

but it was cliched too god why am i thinking soo much abt its being c***ched no idea😆

who's next???

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Lekha Ishwar

@-Destiny-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

can i continue ????? have a new year update in mind

Edited by -Destiny- - 14 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

@Dolly: I won't deny that its cliched it is. But it depends on how the cliche is handled. If its handled well, then it hardly matters, cliche or not, the charm is still there. You handled the cliche well and hence, it still had its charm.

@Lekha: Yaar, tum log poochhte kyun ho?? This is an open thread am I right, Akanksha? You don't need to ask! Just res and let everyone know you're updating so that no one else starts!

Btw, dolly and lekha, please check out my OS since you guys are also into writing. Its a very old one and may not hold significance now, but I still want you guys too read it and comment😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1572487/abhiya-os-stop-being-difficult

Actually PM me the comments. No sense in bringing it to the first page again. I'll really appreciate if you can take time out😳

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago