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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 12


"Hey, lost soul! Where did you disappear of to??" I heard Misha asked. I looked up from my coffee mug and replied, "Nothing. I'm just feeling a little low." "Low!! Dude, Fresher's is coming! You can't feel low!!" Misha exclaimed. "I don't know Mish. Maybe I'm just exhausted. Today was after all the first day and I'm so not used to such an environment," I sighed. The truth was, I was still a little disturbed about the whole 'oil' episode. Firstly, there was something about that Abhay guy which was kind of exerting some sort of a power, a weird kind of pressure on me. Secondly, that oil was meant for me. But why? What would Raj gain out of making me slip? "Hmmm...well, hurry up with your coffee in that case so that you get a kick. We're going shopping today!!" Misha snapped me out for a second time. "Shopping?? No Mish, I'm really not upto it...." I started to protest. "Come on, yaar, Pia! Don't be a party pooper!! Please!! And come to my place for dinner too so that we can chat and get to know each other better!! Please Pia!! Pretty please! With 10000 cherries on top! Mom and dad are also not in town! It'll be just you, me and Birdie!" Misha jumped up and down enthusiastically. I did not have the heart to disappoint her so I agreed.
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"Mish, I really can't buy this! Its way too expensive!" I cried staring at myself in the mirror, or rather at the dress I was wearing. It was a rouge coloured mini dress with the thinnest spaghetti sleeves I've ever seen and exposed half my back. "Plus," I continued, "I can't carry off such revealing stuff." "Pia, you know thats your problem. You are so pretty and you have a nice figure and lovely complexion. You have immense potential to look hot but you just don't use it," Misha said. I sighed, "But its expensive also, Mish..." "Come on, yaar, Pia. Its the Fresher's and this month is ending! You said you'll get your mom's savings next month. Adjust a little for a week. This is once in a lifetime! And if you're apprehensive, then I'll pay a part of it and you can return it with interest when you get your money," Misha said, "Come on, babes. I know your condition but you have to dress like the others. You'll feel awfully out of place if you don't and even if you don't care, doesn't matter, thats the dress code you have to follow! I'll also be wearing a dress. Eww!!!" "Ok, Mish. If you say so. I'll go without chocolates for a week," I winked. Misha gave me a satisfied smile and we both left for her place.

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We entered the Dobrial's lobby and in front of me, I saw a life-size family potrait of Misha and Panchi with a pretty lady and the man whose face I was seeing after 8 years......




P.S. People please give me a feedback regarding the last line. If you don't want Mr. D to be Pia's father here, then I'll edit it.
Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Neethi, lovely update! 👍🏼

Mr D being Misha's father is okay, I guess. I trust every updater to handle it maturely. 😊

And the rest of the part - TOTALLY MISHA AND PIA-ish. Loved it. 😳

I'm gonna PM and ask Tahani if she wants to update next, k ? 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

Neethi, lovely update! 👍🏼


Mr D being Misha's father is okay, I guess. I trust every updater to handle it maturely. 😊

And the rest of the part - TOTALLY MISHA AND PIA-ish. Loved it. 😳

I'm gonna PM and ask Tahani if she wants to update next, k ? 😊


Thanks! Cool! I suggest PM everyone who liked the topic too. They may be interested. You should make a PM list :)

P.S. I think I'll mostly write about Pia and Mish only. They're the simplest! I doubt I'll be any good at 'takker' or 'romance'. Those are tougher to write!😳
Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Thanks! Cool! I suggest PM everyone who liked the topic too. They may be interested. You should make a PM list :)

P.S. I think I'll mostly write about Pia and Mish only. They're the simplest! I doubt I'll be any good at 'takker' or 'romance'. Those are tougher to write!😳


Haha, I know I should. But the problem is, different people 'like' and 'comment' at different parts, at different times. I used to PM people who wanted me to PM them when we wrote the 3rd and the 4th part. But they no longer comment, or even 'like'. 😕

Im gonna PM Tahani, and Ka7eela. You, me, and those two basically keep this thread alive. 😊

And.. You must explore the romance angle, atleast once, yaar. And takraar too. Pleasee. 😳
Edited by Akanksha0701 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha0701


Haha, I know I should. But the problem is, different people 'like' and 'comment' at different parts, at different times. I used to PM people who wanted me to PM them when we wrote the 3rd and the 4th part. But they no longer comment, or even 'like'. 😕

Im gonna PM Tahani, and Ka7eela. You, me, and those two basically keep this thread alive. 😊

And.. You must explore the romance angle, atleast once, yaar. And takraar too. Pleasee. 😳


Ok. I'll try for 'takker' next and I'll continue 'romance' once it blossoms. I was suggesting PM everyone who liked the idea but if no one's interested then its ok. I think It'll just be the four of us. Our personal thread and our personal PKYEK😳
Sad! Would've been fun to have 10-15 people updating but oh well, never mind. I'm sure we four will also rock together😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chill_Out


Ok. I'll try for 'takker' next and I'll continue 'romance' once it blossoms. I was suggesting PM everyone who liked the idea but if no one's interested then its ok. I think It'll just be the four of us. Our personal thread and our personal PKYEK😳
Sad! Would've been fun to have 10-15 people updating but oh well, never mind. I'm sure we four will also rock together😳


It would be fun if 10-15 people comment. But it's interesting to have our own PYKEK, isn't it? ;]

Tahani is updating right now. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha0701


It would be fun if 10-15 people comment. But it's interesting to have our own PYKEK, isn't it? ;]

Tahani is updating right now. 😊

Oh cool! I'll wait then. Otherwise I was about to go sleep :)
And ya, I would've liked it if people would've appreciated our work. Its my first time so it would've been encouraging but oh well, never mind. I have you guys!🤗

P.S. Congrats. this was the 100th reply😉
Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Oh cool! I'll wait then. Otherwise I was about to go sleep :)
And ya, I would've liked it if people would've appreciated our work. Its my first time so it would've been encouraging but oh well, never mind. I have you guys!🤗

P.S. Congrats. this was the 100th reply😉


Awww. Neethi, you are a AMAZING writer, I can assure you that. You have an AMAZING writing style which makes me envious. Don't ever underestimate yourself, okay? 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akanksha0701


Awww. Neethi, you are a AMAZING writer, I can assure you that. You have an AMAZING writing style which makes me envious. Don't ever underestimate yourself, okay? 😊


Aww!!! You're so super-duper sweet!! Thank you sooooooooo much!! I wuv you!!🤗
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As i saw the painting a tear rolled down my eyes
"kya huan"misha questioned
"nothing excuse me i walked out"
Flash back-pia was very small then only faded memorys were left but mishas dad mr dobrial is the person who left pias mom all alone with pia and he left and made a happy family here and her best friend is her sister all these thoughts were too much for her she had tears running down her eyes she tried to stop them but they kept coming.
"what happened are you okay are you trying to be white lady wondering outside at night"misha looked in a surprised way
"nothing"i wiped my tears and went inside with misha
misha forced me to have a drink with the glass i went to a corner and thought that i will not say anything i mean mr dobrial will not reconise me and neither will anyone else so i decided everyone was at advantage by this decision.
i thought i will not make misha feel suspisious and go and join the pack
"awww pia you look gorgous"i turned around and jerked
misha's mum and mr dobrial were there i still had not got round the fact that he had his own family and misha was his daughter.
"thankyou aunty"
"learn misha learn this is how you behave with other people not scare them"aunty looked annoyed in mishas direction
"maaa stop comparing me with other people im not one of those bimbo girls"
"ahem"i coughed
Then mr dobrial talked to me i did not know what to do shall i talk i was trying to hold my tears back..........

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