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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Ayesha_LuvSaJan
Radhi first of all great FF
loved ur Idea..
my Sammy he is so happy in his life..😎
but my Gunjan she is not happy.. 😭bcox of that idiot Bui..
loved ur FF continue soon..
waiting for ur next part!

thx a lot....

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Babaji Ka Thullu

@BabajiKaThullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey frndzzzzzzzzzzzzz M Radhi .....
here is d first part plzzz ignore my silly mistakes........... n njoy it....

hope u like my first part......

part 1

In Mumbaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

A boy was standing with a bag near an empty college n reading board EXCEL COLLEGE.....
b:ye samrat ne yaha kyu bulaya haiii yes he was mayankkkkkkkk.......
n entered in college n went to canteen but it was empty..
he sat on the chair n put his bag on the table took out a book n stated his reading....
they after 5 minutes a sports car came over speeded but another car took over it n enterd
first in parking of Excel college..... both car stopped,,,
frm the sprots car a girl came out angrilyyyy
G:dodooooooooooooooooooooooooo.................. ye she was dia...
frm another car dodo came out n scared....
U:sry dids muje laga hum race race khel rahe haii to mene over take kar liya.....
D:dodo n hit him with his purse.....
then chako n anny came out of the car..... n frm dodo's car benji came out.....
D:a chale angrily...
B:but dia but she went .... then they reached canteen saw mayank was reading...
U:ye yaha kya kar raha haii college me to vacations haii na lagta haii college ki isko itni
aadat ho gayi haiii ki wo vacations me bhi apne khud ke class attend karne college aata hoga
n giggleddddd but mayank glared at him....
they sat bedise mayank....
B:hey mayank tum yaha... college to bandh hai na i mean vacations haiii...
M:ye me tumse bhi puch sakta hu na???
D:well mayank hume to yaha sammy ne bulaya haiii uska call aaya tha ....
M:muje bhi samrat ka call aya tha...
A:ha par hum log to har roj club me milte haii Raat ko fir sam ne bume yaha kyu bulaya...
U:aur pata haiii aisa meri life me pehli baar hua haiii ki me canteen me bethe hu aur kuch
kha nahi raha hu.........
D:dodo....
B:uday mere bhai tune to record hi tod diya yar...kalke news paper me ayega uday canteen
me hone ke bawjud kuch kha nahi raha hauiii well done...
M:ab aap dono apni bakwas bandh karoge....
U:nupur na sach hi kehti haii ye na sadu ka sadu hi rahega...but stopped as he saw angree
face of mayank.....
A voice came frm back
N:kisi ne muje yaad kiya????
uday stood upn went to her huged her....
U:ha nupur mene yaad kiya kyunki wo ye sadu.. but...
N:Uday bhaiya pehle muje ye batao aap aur dia muje chhod kar kyu aa gaye???
D:wo nupur tum so rahi thi to..
N:koi baat nahiiii wese mayank tum yaha ??? tume bhi samrat ka call aya tha kya????
n sat beside his anoter side....
M:pehle tum apni aavaj nichi karo ....angrily... aur samrat kya sirf tum logo ka dost
haii wo muje nahi bula sakta kya????
N:sry mayank wo tum book padh rahe the to mene socha library bandh hogi to tum yaha bethe
ho.... n lughed....
M:nupur me yaha tumhari bakwas sunane nahi aaya hu ok...
N:sadu kahi ha me bhi yaha tumhari bakwas sun ne nahi aayi hu.. wo to muje sam ne bulaya haii
is liye aayi hu.... wese dia uday bhaiya sam to hume roj club me milta haii na to fir aaj
yaha kyu??? aur college to bandh haii aur college start hone me abhi ek week baki haiii
U:wese sheena aur sam abhi tak kyu nahi aaye......
B:oh god udayyy tune kiska name le liya yarrrr sheenaaahh patjhad ka mahinaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
N:by god benji tune bilkul sach bbat boli bbut ye samrat haiiii kaha....

A voice came

SABR KARO NUPSI SABR KA FAL HAMESHA SAMRAT HOTA HAIIIII..........

every1 turneddddddddd yes he was our samrat with a januable smile..................
he came with a basket balll.... n was spiiniing it on his finguerrr.....
S:hiii guys.....
All:hey samrat......
he came n sat...
M:tumne hume yaha kyu bulaya samrat college to ek week baad start hone wala haii????????
N:ha samrat hum to pub me milte haii na ???/
D:aur sammy yu achanak meeting bulayi???
uday was about to say...but...
S:ek minute guysss me pehle boldu fir sawal karna
M:ha samrat plzz jaldi bolo muje classes ke liye jaana haii...
N:kya mayank tum vacations me bhi classes jate ho????? by god mayank tum bilkul bhi bookworm
ho aur boring bhi... vacations me koi padhta haii kya???
U:aur nahi to kya hum to college start hone ke baad bhi nahi padhte....
every1 laughed except mayank
S:sry dude but ab meri baar suno... me morena ja raha hu...
all:::kya?????????????????????///
S:haa aur wo bhi aaj...ab suno
me aaj morena ja raha hu meri dadi ki tabiyat thodi kharab ho gayi thi ...aur..
M:kya dadi ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi????? socked....
n also every1 socked tosee mayank reaction... mayank looked at every 1
N:mayank tum to aise chilla rahe ho jaise samrat tumhari dadi ki baareme baat kar raha ho
M:shut up nupur.. samrat muje sab batao...
S:relax dude ab dadi thik haiii waha koi ladki haii jo unka khayal rakh rahi haii...
mene socha ki college start hone me abhi ek week baki haiii to dadi se milke aata hu..
wese bhi college ka last year haii aur fir me UK chala jaunga....
U:kya sam hum bhi sath chalte haii..
S:nahi uday me jaldi ja kar wapas aa jaunga na.. college start hone se pehle...
D:ha aur aane ke baad wahi dhamal masti prank aur this time fresherssssssss
B:yahhhh ryt diaaa ........
S:ok ab me chalta hu muje packing bhi karni haiii
evey1 became sad
S:aap log sad kyu ho me waha hamesha ke liye rehne nahi jaa raha hu...
B:but sam tere bagair hum
N:ha sam tumhare bagair maza nahi aayega
S:nupur tum bhi ...???? chill guys sirf me hi nahi hu aap sab to ho yaha
U:but sam
S:plzz guys sad mat ho ok samjo me yu gaya aur yu aaya me chalta hu
N:sam tuje jane ki badi jaldi haiii waha shaadi ker liye koi ladki dhundh ke rakhi haii kya???
M:kya shaadi????
N:by god mayank tum to aise socked ho jaise mene humari shaadi ki baat kar di ho...
M:oh plzz nupur.....muje na tum me koi intrest nahi haiii
N:par muje to haiii......
S:guys aap log apni ramayan baad me continue karna thik haii..
N:ab to muje pakka yakin haii ki jarur waha koi haiii...
B:nahi nahi nupur sam apne hi pairo par kulhadi kyu marega kyu sam ??? n gave hi five
S:shut up guys....
N:to baat kya haiii haa??? teasing him....
S:wo kya haii na nupur me mumbai ki babs se mil kar thoda bore ho gaya hu to socha kyu na
thoda change ho jaye.... n laughed........
U:matlab gaav ki chhori...
S:aur emne sheena ko bhi bol diya haii ke me ek week tak nahi mil pauga .... wo abhi
out of town haii
D:thnk god out of town haii...
S:accha me chalta hu bbye
D:bbye sammy dadi ko hamari taraf se khabar puch lena
S:ok bbye

then he bid bbye to every 1....
M(in mind):dadi ki tabiyat kharab thi??? hope sab thik ho n every1 went frm there...

In Morenaaaaaaaaa....................

A beautiful girl was cutting vegetablessssss..... she wore a beautiful salwar suit n spects
she was very simple but looking amazing.......n heard scream og her bui.....
gunjannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.....................
gunjan scared dat nw wat she did wrong........she immidietly went to her bui's room
G:ji bui...
B:yaha aa kabse bula rahi hu tuje kaha mar gayi thi tu??? kam chor
G:bui wo me khana...
B:chup kar muje kuch nahi sunna aur ye kamra abhi ke abhi saaf kar.....
G:ji bui...
B:aur haa.... baad me 1 ghante ke andar saara khana taiyar rakhana me bahar ja rahi hu
G:ji bui...
B:ji buiiiiiiiii kaam chor.. chal jald saaf kar....

she was sweeping the room n cleaned room hurrillly n went to the kitnchen n prepared all food
then washed all clothes then she went to her room a small room
she cleaned it n went to shergill villa.... A lady was sitting in chair...
G:dadi
D:aa gayi beta mene tujhe kitni baar kaha haii ki tu meri chinta chhid de me thik hu
G:me janti hu dadi aap thik haii me kya aise milne nahi aa sakti kya???
D:kyu nahi beta tera hi to ghar haii aa beth yaha...
she sat beside her ....
G:aap ne dawai li???
D:ha beta le li
D:wo muje tuje kuch batana tha
G:kya dadi???
D:mera pota aane wala haii.... samrat mujse milne...
G:hmmm aap un sab ko bahut miss karti haii na???
D:haa bahut aur me apne pote ko kitne saal baad dekhungi aaj me bahut khush hu....
G:ha jab apna koi hota haii to khushi to milti hi haii na dadi... n became sad n a tear
fell frm her eyes....
D:gunjan meri taraf dekh.... she looked at dadi
D:me janti hu beta ki tujpe kya beet rahi haii par tu chinta mat kar me janti hu bahut
jald tuje khushi milegi beta..
G:dadi plzzz aise sapne mat dikhaiye jo kabhi pure nahi ho sakte....
D:tu aisa mat soch beta..
G:to kya karu dadu aaj tak muje khushi naseeb nahi huyi na parivaar nashib hua...
aur aap muje aise sapne ke piche bhagne ko bol rahi ho jo kabhi mere nahi ho sakte...
D:me janti hu tuje duniya ki saari khushi milegi chahe tu kuch bhi kehle...
aur tere saare dukh saare dard saari taklif mit jayegi....
G:dadi mene sape dekhna chhod diye haii kyunki aaj tak sab mujse chhut gaya ma bauji har
khushi.. sab kuch... aur mene apni zindgi me jee na sikh liya haii dadi... chahe muje jo bhi
mile muje koi fark nahi padega...
D:gunjan tu mana kyu nahi kar deti me teri bui se baat karti hu....
G:nahi dadi mere parivar me bui badi haii me aisa nahi kar sakti aur jo ladka unho ne
mere liye dhundha hoga wo sahi hi hoga....
D:kya sahi hoga gunjan wo ladka 2 baccho ka baap haiii aur uske bacche teri umar ke haii
terepita ki ummar ka hoga.... tu aise ladke se shaadi karegi???
G:meri kismat me yahi likha haii dadi....
D:tu apni kismat khud kyu nahi likhti...
G:aap janti haii me aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti mujme itni himmat nahi haiii... jo takdir
ka fesla hoga wo muje manjur haiiii..... then she wiped her tears...
G:accha dadi me chalti hubui aati hu hogi...
D:thik haii beta.... gunjan went out......
D:hey bhagwan aur kitne imtihan lega is ladki ke kya tuje thodi bhi taras nahi aati is ladki
par????? kyu kar raha haii is ke sath aise ek ke baad ek itni muskile??? kyu uski zindgi
maut se bhi kharab kar raha haii??? thodi rahem kar is bacchi par... isne kya bigada haii
kisi ka ... bigada kya kabhi kisi ka bura socha bhi nahi haii... n cried 4 sumtimes....
god listend her........................................................................

precap
sajan's first meetingggg........

i hope you like it....
if u like it do comment plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
m waiting 4 ur comment......😲

Love
Radhi...😉

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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Swati

@SwaNia_2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Loved the update.Poor Gunji......but waiting for sajan's first meeting.Thanks for the PM.

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368758

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

🤗Radhi wonderful start.❤️...Loved all characters....Gunjan was so sweet....I loved the conversation between Gunjan & Dadi..😃.It was so real and cute....Can't wait for SaJan meeting..😍.Please continue soon....Thanks for the pm..

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SoniRita

@SoniRita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Hiiii radhi dii wat a lovely start loved da gang scene in starting hehe mayur always fight lol n hehe benji saying abt sheeena loved it lol n hehe uday-benji tooo funny n den gang pulling legs of Sammy as Sammy is all in hurry to go to morena lol jst toooo good n den aww gunji poor her ufff hateeee dat bui bt loveee da daadi-gunji talk aww daadi is so niceeee she praying for gunji awww can't wait for sajan meet Now do continue soon

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Palak

@mohit_rockstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

awesum update yful startin..bui is so badd...anyways waitin 4 sajan's meeetin

thanks 4 d pm

do cont soon

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Hey Radhi.. Part 1 was awesome..
Luv da conversation of gang.. Haha lol.. Nupur and Uday are really funny..
And luv da conversation of Gunjan and Dadi..
Wow waiting for next part.. SaJan meeting..lovely..
Continue soon..

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Ayesha

@..-Ayesshhaa-..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hey Radhi.. Awesome part.. Luv da conversation of gang.. Lol.. Nupur is so funny.. And my poor Gunjan.. I hate Bui..
Waiting for ur next part.. SaJan meeting.. Continue soon..