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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran

awesome dude...yaar vicky is rocking...

thanks

Originally posted by: zaara2212

loved the update...wonderfully written....tx

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Originally posted by: rsroopali

oh god tht was awesomeeeeeee
bt precap is full of shoutings or blushings

thanks hun..let's see😉

Originally posted by: mrk_1

loved it yaar..awsome updates...continue soon...

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Originally posted by: cutee987

loved it thanks for pm.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 123pritha

hi

i am a new reader
loved ur FF😃
wonderful work👏
please add me to your pm list

thanks hun..glad u liked it..i added u to my list
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Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

awesome update...!!!

pls update soon...!!!

precap is very kool...can't wait for next update...!!!

thanks hun
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks

Originally posted by: princess163

love it

pls add me to ur pm list

thanks,,u have been added

Originally posted by: heermeher

that was truly magical moments luv the way they understand eachother

thanks hun

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

that was sooo sweet!

vicky is such a flirt!
continue soon!

thanks..

Originally posted by: GeetHSP

Aw what a cute update. Please update soon!😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

lovely update... vicky's cool.. continue soon

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Originally posted by: jazzerette

Wonderful update...loved their silent and vocal communication.

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Originally posted by: spvd

lovely part......................
love their understanding and the family moments....................
cont soon................

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Originally posted by: preethia

loved the update...............loved the cute romantic moment they share and also the way they understand each other......................cant wait for the next update...................thnks for the pm

thanks hun :) ..glad u are liking it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Awhhh awesome update
loved it
amazing part
Haha vicky is such a flirt..lolx
loved maaneet scenes
continue soon
Thank u

thanks hun..glad u are liking it

Originally posted by: maneetian80

Nice update :) Please update soon👍🏼

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Hi i justed finieshd reading your FF and loved it pl add me on your pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Tishuu

awwww thanks soooooo much Chiklet - guess wat??? hehehehe I'm working on an update - and guess wat...it's for OSJ 😆

yayyyy Chiklet does a happy dance.....can't wait for it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGG...the same stalker track is going on in GHSP..blank calls are the only similarity for now...i wonder wat other ideas are gonna match..LOLLLLLL...i just had to share that DEV is not the stalker..i already have the story planned and i know who the bad guy is....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Recap: She entwined her hands with his and enjoyed the soft sensation of his long fingers running lightly through her thick hair. Soon, they had fallen into a deep yet innocent sleep almost like babies with their bodies' close and their hands entwined.

Chapter 10

Maan slowly opened his eyes and was about to stretch when he saw that his hand was still in Geet's and geet still resting on his chest. He quickly oriented himself and realized that he must have fallen asleep while he was waiting for her to fall into a deep sleep before he snuck out. He looked at her angelic smiling face, he wanted that beautiful smile to remain forever as much he wanted to wake to the same sight every morning till he died. Her thick and long hair was open and he wanted to run his fingers through them like he had last night. But he knew he had to get out of here before she woke up and panicked. She was going to for sure. He shifted himself so he could put her head on a pillow. He struggled with only one hand as the other was still held by Geet. Somehow he managed. He then started working on freeing his hand. Gently he removed each of her fingers slowly. He started sliding off the bed when he felt his wrist being held

"Leaving so soon?" Maan turned around to see a Geet with twinkling eyes and a grin on her mouth. "Your awake?" Geet nodded "I woke as soon as I felt the pillow. It was too soft in comparison to your hard chest. "Oh sorry Geet, if I had known you would uncomfortable, I would have placed you on a pillow." Geet smiled, "No, I woke up because your solid chest was too comfortable and the pillow just doesn't have the same feel.", she said lovingly as she snuggled back into his embrace and placed her head on his solid chest. Maan just smiled at her words and kissed her temple. "Well, I better get going before Dadi ma starts looking for me or she comes here.", he said and chuckled. In response Geet giggled and said, " Now that would be funny." Maan gave are-you-crazy look so she added, "Just joking Maan. I think we are going through a phase of role reversal. Any other time, Dadi ma walking in would have been my line. I guess my himmat is increasing nowadays" They both sat up and slide off the bed. Maan chuckled softly and said, "I guess it is but I haven't had the chance to fully test it." When Geet started blushing, he continued, "I will see you at the office, I have a early meeting but Raju will be here for you when you are ready". Geet nodded and started walking towards her closet. Maan pulled her back from her waist. "Where do you think you are going?", he asked. "To change." She said confused. "Without giving me a hug. How am I going to get through the time apart from you unless I have the feeling of holding you in my heart." Geet couldn't help but smile at his cute words. "Oh how could I be so forgetful, I am sorry.", she said in humor. They came close, geet wrapped her arms his shoulders and maan around her waist with a small smile on both their faces.

"Oh no Geet look there, Dadi is here!", Maan said. Geet quickly panicked and whipped her head around to see. Just then she felt a loud kiss on her cheek. She turned around to see Maan laughed and strolling out the door. "Miss me", he said playfully. Geet put her hand on her cheek with a smile and blushed.

Meera parked her car in the jail parking lot at 9:55 am. She didn't want to be late when she only had one hour to spend with him. She waited for every two weeks to pass as quickly as possible so she could see Dev. Maan had it arranged with the jailor so she could meet him every two weeks, which was the shortest time span between visits that the jailor would allow. She sighed and wished she could see him more often but yet she was thankful. She smiled as she got out at the thought of seeing the love of her life. She ran her own words she had said to Vicky last night, "I believe that love is the most forgiving emotion which has the power to accept your better half with their mistakes and flaws." She loved Dev so much that his past of mistakes couldn't even attempt to outweigh her love. She walked in and the jailor nodded at the constable to take Meera into the private where Dev was waiting. The constable opened the door, waited for her to step inside. She smiled at him before entering and the door was shut.

Dev was already on his feet and engulfed her into an intimate hug as soon the door shut. "Oh baby, I missed you so much .", he said with a sadness in his voice. "I missed you too Dev, I miss you every second of each day.", she said in response. After a few moments, Meera stepped back and they held their hands together as they walked to the chairs. Meera was about to sit on the chair opposite of Dev when he suddenly pulled her into his lap. Meera started to object when his words stopped her, "I get to see only once every two weeks, while you are here; I want to hold you." Meera smiled and rested her back against his chest. They both sighed and they finally got what they were dying for: each other. "So, tell me about the outside world, what did I miss in the two weeks?" He sounded cheerful but she could easily detect the sorrow in his eyes. Every visit, he tried to act as normal as possible, talking about anything and everything. As if they were having casual conversation any other place other than the jail. So Meera tried to the same as him. "Oh, Dadi ma called me home last night for dinner and I had the pleasure of meeting my future brother-in-law Vicky." Dev laughed and said, "I am sure that went well, I know he is a flirt but let me tell you that he is harmless." "I know, he claimed the same thing." Dev smiled but his smile died off and Meera could tell why. She squeezed his hand reassuringly and said, "Don't worry Dev, Vicky won't find anything out. We will make sure." "I know, Bro said the same but I haven't seen my little boy in more than five years and now even with him here, I have to hide myself from him." Meera hugged him to comfort him. "I am sorry, i wish things could be different." They sat in each other's arms for a long silence until they would hear footsteps.

Maan finished getting ready for work. Today he had to call Dev to have him and Vicky talk. He just hoped everything would go well. Dev was already hurting but he wouldn't be able to bear it if Vicky got hurt because of Dev. He picked up the phone to call him. He walked down the stairs while they put Dev through. "Hello Bro?" "Hello Dev, how are you? You are really busy nowadays for your brothers." Maan watched as Vicky's face lit up hearing Dev's name. "I am fine bro. How are you? Is Vicky there?", Dev replied. " I am good. There is someone here who is anxious to talk to you.", Maan said and handed Vicky the phone. "Hey, What's up DB? Long time no see eh", Vicky said as he flashed a full grin( DB= dev bro..lol..i don't know but this Vicky sure loves short nicknames..LOL) Dev smiled as he heard his little boy's voice. He missed him so much and now even more with him so close to him he couldn't see him. Dev felt tears choking up his throat but he tried to control his slipping emotions as he heard the voice of his baby brother. "Hey my little boy, how are you?" "I am good, really good. We are having so fun with everyone, especially with my soon to be sister-in-law. I still can't believe she made BB fall in love with her. But I really miss you and maybe even NT bhahi. Our family would be complete if you were here." Vicky went on and on about anything and everything. Dev closed his eyes and silent tears fell onto his eyes. How could he tell his brother that he wanted to be them so badly? "I know buddy, I miss you all too but I can't be there no matter how much I want to be.", Dev said sadly. Vicky sighed and said, "I know DB. But please try your best to come here. You wouldn't want to miss the grand Khurana wedding." Dev smiled and said, " I know buddy, I am going to try my best." Dev felt his emotions to rushing back so he knew as much as he wanted to talk to his brother; he needed to end this conversation before he broke down. "Listen buddy, I gotta run. There is a important meeting I have to go to.", Dev said. "Ok DB. You take care and say hi to NT bhahi for me." "ya sure. Love you buddy."

Dev walked back to the private room with the constable. Meera saw Dev walk in with a lost look. He stared at her for long time. Worried, Meera walked up to him and placed a hand on his shoulder. Dev suddenly realized that he was back in the room with Meera. "Dev, are you okay baby?", she asked worriedly. Dev just threw himself in her embrace and cried his heart out.

Precap: a love letter for geet??????????

SO HOW WAS IT??? GEET'S REACTION TO WAKING UP NEXT TO MAAN NOT WAT U EXCEPTED 😲

AND WAT DEV AND MEERA

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Edited by maankigeet4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the Maaneet moments ofcourse....

Somehow....I have never been in favor of forgiving Dev very easily....but the way you have portrayed it..doesn't bother me much...if with love of Meera Dev can redeem...then I am all for it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was real magical moments

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