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Posted: 14 years ago

aww this was beautiful

such a musical expression of love😍

n that stupid sameera still thinks maan loves her......stop dreaming gal
maaneet rocked the party
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it want maaneet confession during premeer wedding plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update, pleasee update soon

it was long time to update yaar but nice!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb yaar...
really enjoyed reading ds update....
d songs wer amazing.... good choice.. 👍🏼
so geet realised her love...
plz do cont soon...
thnx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
r u going to update today i m waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
me too waiting for update....
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Posted: 14 years ago
u r fantastic... n awesome story...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Sorry friends for the late update. nowadays i am busy in my sister wedding preparation.....


Part -27

Maan is looking for Geet'''..

Sameera comes to him'.

Hey MK looking for someone'..

Maan: saw Geet coming''

Maan: smiles and said in a loud tone

No dear if u are here how can i look for someone else

Sameera really''

Maan: yea really baby''

Geet watching all this with a wide mouth open'.. and fuming with anger

Bandar kaisey us parkati kae saath baath kar reha hain' aur kaisey usey baby baby keh reha hain..

Maan is wacthing her reaction and smriks'.

Sameera: MK u know u are really very cut'..

Geet: cute my foot'. Jhoota hain'.. looser, bandar and turned her face''

Maan: is enjoyng the way she was reacting'.

A girl comes to them and start talking to Sameera as she was her friend'.

Maan glided from there'..


Maan comes to Geet'.

What happened Geet u are angry'..

Geet: gussa aur main'. Geet Malhotra ko khabhi gusaa nahi aata'

And she turns to him''.

See I am smiling''

Maan: o yea u are smiling''. I misuderstood u I thought u are furious & jealous to saw me with Sameera'..

Geet: ohhh'.. please'. Mujhko tumhaari usparkati sey koi phark nahi padta us parkati sey hii nhai tum kisi sey bhi baath karo usey main kyun jelous feel kaungi''.. Tumhaari life hain' why will I interfere in it'..

Maan: oh I am soory'

Geet: whatever' and was about to leave'.

Maan holds her hand'. Form his touch she was having tingly feeling in her stomach.. she smiles' and said'. Hey bandar loose my hand'

Maan: surprised as she said bandar to him'' what did u said'?

Geet: turns around Baandaaar' or I have to spell it'.

Maan: smiles'..

Geet: so u know u are a bandar'

Maan: noded in yes with a smile''..(as he remember what Yash said jo Geet sey pyaar karega vo bandar hoga)

Geet: Good for u.. chalo kuch tho hain jis par hum dono key same viwes hain' she smirks'. And leaves'.

Maan: Smiles and realise that he has said that he is a monkey'.

Maan: hey Geet I don't mean that'.

Geet: Yaa' I know and leaves from there'..

Maan smiles to himself and pated on his own head and said mujhko uskey saamney kya ho jata hain'. Vo sabsey alag hain aur shaayad main thabi usey itna pyar karta hun' and smriks'.

Next day '''

Today is mehendi''

Geet is very happy as she knows about her own feelings for Maan but she is still confused that he also loved him or its just an infatuation like for any other girl he had'..

But she is not thinking all that and just enjoying her new feelings and just have a smile on her face''

Geet comes to Ramukaka and ask hin if she can help him '..

Ramukaka: beta today after a long time a I'm seeing this happiness on your face'..

Geet: yes kaka today I am very happy as I am in love'.

Ramukaka: what''

Geet realizd what she is just said'

Geet: yes kaka I love my di'.. today its her mehendi then Haldi and then shaadi and it's a very big occasion for my Di'

Ramukaka is dosent satisfied by this explanation'.

Ramukaka: but beta'

Geet inturrupt what Kaka u are talking there is lots of work to do' just finish it I am coming'.. and she leaves'..

Outside the Kitchen She take a breath of relief'' thank god'' aaj tho kaka ko asb pata chal jaata'.

Geet controle on ur excitement'.. aur agli baar jo bhi bolaagi soch samaj kar boliyoo'and she pated on own head' and leaves'

In kitchen

Ramukaka: kuch tho chupa rahi hain yea'..

Par beta tum mujhsey kuch nahi chupa sakti kyunki main tho pata hii laga lunga'.. Ramukaka sey kabhi kuch nahi chupa'.

Heer is in her room and getting ready for the mehendi ceremony'..

Her phone rings its Prem..

Heer blushes as she saw his name''

And she cut it off'

Prem: what she cuts my call but why now what I did'.

Maan: bhai don't worry I know bhabhi is trying to irritate u but u don't show it to her'.

Prem: what are u saying champ''.. its not possible'.

Maan: ask me bhai I had done PHD in girls' except one he murmer.. and smriks

Prem: yes u are but why is she doing this..

Maan: bhi its normal' it means that she still loves u'

Prem: I know she loves me and I also loves her'.. so to show my I have do the same'..

Maan: chukles bhai aap bhi naa don't do this nhai tho shaadi honey sey phele hii apka divorse ho jayega''

Prem: so what I'll do ''.

Maan: just do as I say''..

Prem: thanks champ agar tu nahi hota tho mera kya hota'

Maan: haan vo tho hain'.

Mrs Juneja & Mrs. Khurana are getting ready for the mehendi ceremony''

Mrs. Khurana: di u are very lucky that u are going to have Heer as ur bahu'

Mrs. Juneja: yaa.. I know' I likes her from her childhood I never told u but I always saw heer as my Bahu' and always want her to be with Prem'.. they look so good together'..

Mrs. Khurana: yes Did and Geet she is so cute so inocent but very mature she always care about everyone and sometimes I fell that she is our daughter when she cares about us. & Geet and Mr. Khurana have a great bonding. Geet and Heer are so different but both having good sanskaar and they now how deal any situation'.

Mrs. Juneja: yes u are right'. And I am very lucky that I am having Heer as my Bhau' and if have one more son so I will definatetly marry Geet with him''

Mrs. Juneja what u thinks about Geet and Maan'

Mrs.Khurana: don't even think about Di u know how they both always fight and if will not stop them they will murder each other' both laughs''..

But I love if Geet will be my bhau because she is only one who can handle my hubby and my Son'..

Mr. Juneja: that's u are saying right'' Mr. Khurana is so much afraid of her' and always do as she said'.

Mrs. Khurana: yes I don't even thought that Mr. Khurana can obey any ones order but Geet make its happen'..

Mrs. Juneja: Yea she is really a hitller I must say'. Both laughs'.

Back to Malhotra Menssion''

Geet is wearing a salwar suit of bright clour and really complementing her skin tone'..

Wearing long earinga Her hair was let down and a few strands of her bangs were falling across her face and the happiness on her face doubled her beauty. In one word she is looking awaesome'.

Heer Hey Geet today u are looking very beautiful. Geet blushes and said thaks Di'

Mrs. Malhotra calls Geet

Geet: aayi Maa' and she leaves

Ramukaka was in his own thoughts '

Heer notice him''..

Heer: kya hua kaka

Kaka: I think Geet humseye kuch chupa rahi hain

Heer: par aap ko aisa kyun lagreha hain''

Kaka: kyunki and he stops'. Kuch nahi'..

Heer:kaka app aisa kyun bol rehe hoo'.

Kaka: vo actually mujhe aaj Geet subha sey kuch badli badli lag rahi hain''

Heer: acha vo '. Vo isliye kyun ki aaj usney makeup kiya hain''

Kaka: (self talk) vahi tho aaj sey phele Geet ney khabi bhi makeup nahi kya par aaj aisa kya hain'.

Heer: Kaka there is nothing to worry '. Agar aisa kuch hota tho vo mujhe zaaroor bathati''

Ramukaka: haan beta..

Heer: acha kaka main aati hun'..

Ramukaka: nahi mujhe pata hain kuch naa kuch tho hain'.. I have to keep my eyes on her''

In Juneja's Menssion:

Maan is lost in Geet's thoughts'

Prem is Getting ready for the Mehendi Ceremony'..

Peam Hey chap bata naa tera kya plan hain''

Maan dosent listen to him'

Prem turns back as he din't reply'..

Prem gose to him and shakes him Maan comes out from the trance

Maan: what haapen bhai''

Prem: that I have to ask u what happened to u where were u lost'

Maan: nowhere bhai just thoughts about some plans'.

Prem: oh so u get any'..

Maan: yes bhai'.

Prem: what'?

Maan: that I will tell you when we reached Malhotra menssion'..

Prem: but why not know'.

Maan(self talk): ab aapko kaisi baathoo koi plan hii nahi han'..

Sorry for the short update but iam busy so i can update only this much... but i promise that i will update next part as soon as i can and tat will be long one...


part-28

Edited by geeta.muskan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanx for the update and i will e waiting for the next part gud luck foor ur sis wedding
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww soo cute
😃😃😃But i hope you dont create any problems between them because o Sameer or the fact that Maan was the one who broke Geet's heart in childhood
Please aisa kuch math karna.
Voh kitne ache lag rahe hai...please isse spoil mat karna.
😭
Oh and i jsut read the comment before me...i didnt know it was your sisters wedding
Good luck 😊
have fun and then update😛😊
Edited by cue1 - 14 years ago

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