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Posted: 14 years ago
lool maan is on a mission to make geet fall in love with him. She is so confused by his behaviour😆.
lool he even ate her chilli dessert. 😆Geet you have finally met your match, you might as well accept defeat.😆😆😆😆
Love how at the end geet says yes to maan that she will come to his house without realising it. 😆
loved maan's dialogue that he would drink poison if she gave it to him.😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
hahah superb update

geet is very much confused!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Update soon plzzz
Waiting For it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
plz jaldi update kro next part i cant wait ok
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part-24

A new morning''''

Geet and all other are having breakfast''

Geet: Paa can I join u in the office '.. I really getting bored in home all the day doing nothing'.

Mr. Malhotra: yaa beta but Heer told me that u have to your PG so what about that'.

Geet: Yea Paa I already had enquired about that, the admission are statrting from next month

So I thaought for that period can I join u in the office'..as I will also get experience'..

Mr.Malhotra: ok beta as u want.. I always with u in ur every decision'.

Geet: thanks Paa can I join from today only'.

Mr. Malhotra: ok go and change you have only 10 minutes'.

Geet: thanks Paa I'll be ready in five minutes'..

In Khurana Menssion'..

Mr. khurana: so Maan how was your dinner last night'.

Maan: owesome Dad''

Mr. khurana: that I know I can see on ur face seems that u had enjoyed more then enyone else'.

Maan: why'did u saying this'.

Mr.Khurana: avaiyai'.he smiles and leaves '..

Maan is there like what happend to him''

Maan lets talk to Miss. Hitler''..

Maan call Heer picks it up''

Heer: heloo'.

Maan: hey bhabi whats up'..

Heer: Nothing champ getting bored''

Maan: why despite of that chatter box u are getting bored '.

Heer: no actually she is not in the home'.

Maan: why where she gone'.

Heer: actually she joined Paa in the office so that why she is not with me''

Maan: but how all the sudden'.

Heer: even I also don't know today morning she told to Paa'..

Maan: ok bhabi I have some important I'll call u later'..

Heer: ok bye''.

Maan why all the sudden she joins the office' is she trying to avoide me'..( he smirks)

Maan tries to call her on her cell Phone but she din't picked up'.

Next day Maan wents to malhotra office'. But Geet is not there'..

It is about 2 weeks Geet and Maan had not met at once'.

Maan tries a lot but he can't met her'.

In these 2 weeks Geet thought about Maan but she ignores' and fixed up herself with work'. As she don't wont to think about him'

On the otherhand Maan was curious to meet her'. and tried every possible way to met her' but they dint'.

There are only 1 week left in Heer & Prem wedding'..

In khurana menssion'..

Prem called Maan: Hey champ what are u doing'..

Maan: noting bhai'' aaj kal tho main devdas ban gaya hun'.

Prem: kyun phir koi fighting hoo gayi kya tum dono kii'..

Maan: bhi ladaayi hooti tho koi baath hii nahi thi aapko pata hain 2week sey main ussey milney kii koshish kar reha hun '.. par vo mujhe avoid kar rahi hain'.

Prem: hey champ I think u have lost ur charm'..Girls are avoiding Maan Singh Khurana.. you have to do something bro'.

Maan: yea' really bhi'. Anyways u tell me is there anything important'..

Prem: haan vo actually main Heer key saath shooping karney jaa reha hun' par yaar tujhkoo pata hain uskey saath shooping karna'. Tho yaar tu chal naa thodi mujhe bhi company mil jayigi'.

Maan: ok bhai chalo kisi koo tho meri zaaroorat hain' vo nahi tho aap hi sahi'

Malhotra Menssion '

In Geet's room

Heer: Geet Please don't go naa'. We'll go for shopping'.

Geet: please di'. I have to go Di today I have a presentation'.

Heer: Paa will handle that'. I'll talk to him'..

Geet: I had made the presentaion so if I'll present it 'then it will be more clear to the investors''

Heer: Please Geet'' Please'..

Geet: ok by the way go with your would be husband or is he don't want to go with u''

Heer: hey chutki don't say that' you know he really want to come but Dad gave him some important work'.. so he can't come'..and I'am alone'. Please lets go na''

Geet: ok di reach there '..as I finished my presentation I'll join you'

Heer: promise'

Geet: haan dii pakka promise'..and she leaves

Heer soory chutki mainey tujhsey jhoot bola'.. Pata nahi par main kuch dino sey dekh rahi hun tu vo phele vaali Geet nahi hain'.. shaayad tera mood bhi thoda fresh hoo jaaye''

In the shopping mall Heer, Prem & Maan are shopping'..

Heer is in the cosmetic section '

And Prem and Maan are in a Salwaar section'

Actually Peam want to bay some thing for Heer so he came up with Maan as Heer din't know about ''.

Prem saw some suits and like one and said to salesgirl to pack it ..

Prem comes to Maan and said I know champ you are very eger to meet her'

I have an idea'.

Maan what bhai'.

Prem: u go and buy a dress for her and gift it to her as girls loved gifts'.

Maan: are u sure bhai did she accept it'.

Prem: Did she love u'..

Maan to himself: pyaar' bachpan main tho karthi thi par ab '.

Prem: if she loves u she difinately accept it'..

Prem dragged him to a and saw some dresses'

In cosmetic shop Geet reached and helping Heer ''

Geet: dii aap kab sey yahan par hain'

Heer: 2 hours'..

Geet: di Doo ghante sey'.. aap ney mujhko phone kyun nahi kiya'.

Heer: hey chill chutki ' Prem tha mere saath'..

Geet: what Jijiju is here but u told me that he is not coming'.

Heer: haan but the meeting is postpond so he joins me'

Geet: tho apney mujko kyun bulaya pata hain main apna saara kaam chod kar aayi hun'

Heer: hey Geet now you are not in the office so no office talks'..

Geet: but di'

Heer: its my wedding and u can not do this much for me'.

Geet: ok di as u say'. she smiles''

Geet di par jiju khan hain'.

Heer: oh let me check''..

Back to Maan & perm'..

Maan: bhai yaahan kuch aacha hii nahi hain'

Suddenly Prem phone rings'

Prem: hey baby' what happen'..

Heer: where are u?

Prem: outside the cosmetic shop'.actually I met my old friend

Heer: ok' we are coming'

As prem is about to ask as who is with her'.she cuts the phone'.

Prem: hey champ tu dekhleey main jaata hun nahi tho Heer mujhkoo maar dalegi'

Maan: ok bhai.. I'll manage''.

Prem leaves from there''

Maan is now confused what to buy for Geet'.

As he going he saw a suit and likes it for geet'.

Maan: that's it'..

Maan goes up to salesgirls and ask her to pack it'.

In cosmetic shop Heer has finished her shopping and Prem comes to him and saw Geet with her'..

Prem: oh Geet u are here'..

Geet: yea jiju di told me so I have to come'..

Heer: ok lets go to Accessories Section'..

Geet: Di u go I have to go washroom I'll join u '.

Heer: ok but come fast'..

Geet leaves from there and Heer & Prem headed to Accessories Section

Heer & Prem enters the Accessories Section and Prem phone rings''

Prem: haan champ tera kaam hoo gaya'

Maan: haan bhi'.. app loog kahan hain'

Prem: hum Accessories Section main hain' tu bhi yahi aa jaa''

Maan: ok bhai coming''..

As maan is coming towards the Accessories Section and Geet is going towards Washroom'

Maan and Geet Bumps but Geet ignores and leaves but Maan saw her but as he ralize he turns back Geet is not there'.. she enters the washroom''

Maan to himself: hey dude tu pagal hoo gay hain'. Vo yahan kaisi hoo sakti hain'. Agar hooti tho Bahbhi ko yaa bhai koo pata hii hota naa'. He ignores and headed to Accessories Section'''

Back to Heer & Prem:

Heer: Maan kahan reh gaya'.

Prem: vo actually kya hua kii vo naa sameera key liye Dress le reha tha'.. aata hii hoga usikaa phone tha'.

Heer:ok'.

Maan comes there: hey guys whats happing''

Heer: tho kya liya hain'

Maan: Salwar suite''.

Heer: Par jahan tak main Sameera ko janti hun vo Indian dresses kam pasand karti hain'..

Maan: Sameera '.in a questioned tone

Prem: Hey mainey Heer ko bata diya hain'.

Maan: Haan haan vo actually bhabhi par mujhe vo Indian dresses main jayada pasand hain'..

Heer: ok ' but I thing tumko usey kuch western dena chahiye'..

Maan to himself: agar western dungaa tho ulta mujhe hii sunaa degi' phir sey suru ho gayeigi'. Chi chi main aisi dress phenugi'..he smirks

Prem: oye kya sooch reha hain'.

Maan: kuch nahi bhi bas dress change karney kii sooch reha tha'.. par sooch reha hun next time western dress de dunga'.. is baar isi sey kaam chala leta hun'.

Geet comes there and saw Maan there'.. and she hides'.

Geet to himself: yea yahan kya ker raha hain' Hey god please save me'.

Geet is hiding behind a counter as she can saw him but tey can not see him'.

Geet main kya karun kya karun'.. suddenly her phone rings'

Geet: hello' di

Heer: tu kahan hain'.

Geet: di main vaspas jaa rahi hun Paa kaa call aya tha vo mujhe bula rahe hain its urgent'.

Heer: what chutki.. as she said Maan is what Geet

Heer: tu vapas aa tuney bola tha kii tu mere saath rahegii''

Maan: iska matlab mainey Geet ko hii deka tha that was not any illusion'

Geet: Dii soory but I have to go'

As she is going from there maan saw her but he pretend not to see her'and start coming towards the same counter'

Geet: saw him coming toward her'. and she again hides'

Geeet: nahi nahi'.. pleases nahi

Heer: kya hua tu nahi nahi kyun bol rahi hai..

Geet: vo actually I thought u force me so I saying no '

Heer: ok if u want to go u can go then I'll not talk to u'.

Geet: dii'.. and as she looking for Maan she can't see Maan anywere'.

Geet: abruptly cut the phone'. And as she turned Maan is right behind her'..

Geet: murmured : hey bagwaan'..

Geet: tum yahan kya kar rehe hoo'. In an angry tone.

Maan: actually ye question mera hona chahiye'..

Geet: mera earring kho gaya hain main usi koo doond rahi hun''

Maan: par tumhaarey dono earrings tho tumhaary pass hain'

Geet: kyun mere paas aur earrings nahi hoo sakte kya'.

Maan: hoo tho sakte hain par maiey kisi koo ajtak do earrings ek saath peheney nahi dekha naa..

Geet: kyun koi rule hain kii ek saath do earrings nahi phene sakte'' she gets up

Maan: (also gets up) nahi rule tho nahi hain'. Haan tum tho phen bhi sakti hoo'' actually tum kuch bhi kar sakti hoo'. Tum baaki ladkiyoon sey aalag joo hoo''.

Geet: haan kam sey kam main unn parkatiyoun kii thera tho nahi huun jinkey tum peeche peeche baagte hooo''..

Maan: hey'.. Geet inturupt in between haaan. Haan pata hain yahi bolo gey naa kii tum unkey peechey nahi vo tumharey peeche baagtii hain'. Ooh please yea bhut sada hua joke hain..

Heer and Prem notice them ' fighting'.and came up to them'..

Heer: Chutki tu yahan par tu tho jaa rahii thi naa'.

Geet: haan di jaa rahi thi par Paa kaa phone aaya aur mana kar diya isliye main vapas aa gayi'.

Maan: is listing her and chuckling' on her excuse'..

Heer: good for u''' now come-on lets go..

Geet: haan dii' chalo..

Prem: oye champ tu har waqt issey ladta kyun rehtaa hain''

Maan: murmur' bhai yea ladayi thodi naa hain yea bas mera pyaar hain'

Prem: what'?

Maan: kuch nahi bhai main nahi ladta hamesha yea hii shuru karti hain''

Prem: yaar jitnaa time tu issey ladney main waste karta hain naa iss time main tu sameera key saath kuch quality time spend kar sakta hain.

Maan: (wit a look of not sameera again bhai) : just nod his head

Heer is looking some earings and like one ..

Heer: Chutki phen key dika naa kisa lagta hain'..

Geet: Dii main kyun aap khud try kun nahi kar rehe'

Heer: Joo chees tujhpar aachi lagi vo mujhpar bhi achhi lagti hai chal phen key dikha'

Heer gives the earing to Geet and she wear it' Maan is just looking her Geet is looking at mirror but she also saw maan from them as he is behind her' Maan nodded his head in No'.

Heer: yea aacha nahi lag reha'

Geet: di yea aacha hain yahi ley loo naa'.

Maan smiles..

Heer: tu chup kar tujhko kuch nahi pata..

She then gave her another pair of earing she also try that one' but Maan also nodded his head in No..

Geet saw this & immediately said di yea tho aacha hain yea lee loo'..

Heer: no no Geet yea tho first one sey bhi bura hain'.

Geet: but di..

Heer then give her another one but Maan againg gave a sign of no''

Geet turns back as she is now really frustrated with him'. And said jab tumko itna hii pata hain tho tum hii dii kii help kyun nahi karte'. And turns his face to other side'.

Heer: kya hua chutki tu kisko bool rahi hain'.

Geet: dii iss looser sey'.

Heer: par vo tho yahan dekh bhi nahi reha''

Geet: par di'.. and she stops'.

Heer: chutki tu bhi naa hamesha ussey ladney key bhaaney dhoonti hain'..

Geet: dosen't say anything'.

Heer: now again gives a earring and this time Maan raised his eyebrows in Yes and give her a thums up''

Geet: Dii yea tho bilkul hii nahi leena''.

Heer: kyun par yea tho aachey lag rahe hain'..

Geet: par dii mujhko pasand nahi hain'..

Heer: tu cchup kar tujhko kuch nahi pata hain' and she buy that pair of earrings'.

Maan chuckle' and leaves from there'.

Geet: kya karun main iss looser kaa'' why is he trying to irritate me'..

Geet: I have to ask him'. Then she remembers the dinner night as Maan comes close to her and she is rooted there like a staue'..

Geet: nahi akele main nahi'' apr phir kaisey'

Geet: main isko jitnaa ho sakey avoide karti hun'. Hey bagwaan please meri help karna'.. Hey bagwaan main iska kya karun yea tho mere peeche hii pad gaya hain'.

During the shopping Maan is behind her nonstop and guide her what to buy or what not to buy'.. But Geet always buy that one which he din't like' once happened that Geet likes a dress and mana also likes it but Geet dosent buy that one as she wants to do totally opposite of him'

After the Shopping all are went to a nearby resturent having their lunch'..

Geet is trying to avoid him but is continuously'. Annoying her'.

Geet is now very much irritated from him'..

As Heer and Prem having their usual talks suddenly Maan phone rings'' he gets up and takes the call'..

Geet: hey bhagwaan iska kuch jaaroori kaam aa jaaye aur isko jaaana padey''

As maan was busy on the call '. Heer and Prem saw their college frieds and and said to Geet that they are just coming'..

Geet: ok Dii but come fast'.

Heer: ok'.

Geet is now alone there'.. and praying god that make Maan busy with the call as she is praying God by closing her eyes'..

Maan comes there'. And said mere bare main hii sooch rahi thi naa'.

Geet: open her eyes and said nahi main tumhaarey baarey main kyun soochungii'. Mere paas aur bhi bhaut saare kaam hain'.

Maan: ooh really '.. he comes near her she start breathing fast'. Main kuch dino sey notice kar reha hun tum mujhko avoide karney kii koshis kar rahi hoo'..

Geet: Main main '.. main (she starts stammering) main kahan tumko avoid kar rahi hun'.

Maan: aacha tum mujhko avoid nahi kar rahi hoo he come more closer'(Geet start breathing more faster) and still stammering and said na..naa.. nahi.. maan Smriks'.. Geet stands up and go from there and comes outside'. Maan also follows her and holds her hand and make her stand on the support of a wall' Geet is stand rooted their with a wide mouth open as what is he doing Maan comes close to her Geet againg start breathing faster' and she closed her eyes her mouth is still open

Maan: smirks: tum mujhsey darti hoo kya'. Geet din;t say anything

Maan: aach usdin dinner par hum dono kii baath adoori reh gayi thi naa '. Tum mujhsey keh rahi thi kii main tumhaarey saath kuch kar kyun nahi reha hun'. Geet opens her eyes Maan comes more closer and he is holding geets both hand with his' Geet heart beats are faster and faster and faster she is feeling like 100 watts current in her body she is shivering literally' Maan comes more closer and said apna muuh tho bandh karloo nahi tho Maakhi chali jaayigi he chuckle'. and he leves from there .

Geet mouth is still wide open' she snaps back and close her mouth'.. and leaves from there'..

Heer and Prem comes back and not seen Geet there'. They asked Maan about Geet'..

Maan: I don't know'' I'am on the phone I thought u three are together'.

Heer is now really worried and she calls Geet and ask her where she is She told that she went home as she is not feeling well'

Heer:is like what happened to her suddenly '.

Heer: ok u go home and take full rest'.. I'am also coming'.

Heer: told Maan and Prem that she went home as she is not feeing well'..

Maan: smirks' and said'..ok'..

In the home geet is thinking what happened to me when he come close why I am still rooted over there why I can't say anything to him'.. she ignore this feeling and said' I'ts normal meri jagah aur koi aaur bhi ladki hooti tho saayad vo bhi aisey hii react karti'.. agar mere paas iss tereh koi aur bhi ladkaa aatha tho shaayd main thab bhi aisa hii react karti main dar gayi thi saayad isliye and said'. come-on Geet now don't think about all that and forget all that'


Part-25

Edited by geeta.muskan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
res
really good ud
bechari geet how is she supposed to ignore him when celebrations are about to start
Edited by sushups - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

beautiful update

loved the way maan is irritating geet😆
maan's flirting is so adorable😳😳😳
keep writing
Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update yaar just loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks for theupdate...and hope Maan and Geet fall in love again
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome yaar..loved it ..please do continue soon,,

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