FF: Geet in an alternate world UPD CH10/P37

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

You did proper justice to it...and the best part was it was raw and totally devoid of any gloss...just the way it should be...atleast in my opinion. Like a beautiful piece of modern architecture....no trimmings and straight elemental lines. And this is going to be a foundation for a more complex building that is coming up in future. So far both Geet and Maan are only being initiated into the complexity of the emotional roller-coaster they are about to go on.

Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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-Sangs-

@-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

As usual brilliant piece of work...loved it ..enjoyed it...this is just the beginning .. waiting for more to come...😳

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Geet Malhotra

@SapphireFlames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

Absolute justice has been done her majesty! 😆

it was super- awesome. and why did u have to leave it like that. DOORBELL! 😭

jaldi se update soon. 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

here i come to prepare a report on ur work yet again...firstly i would like to say few words...i loved ur update!

okay now i'll start my usual bak-bak

in the show,we saw this beautiful sequence....by the time we got to know maan started feeling for geet...those days were beautiful(sigh!)...coming back..i always wondered what geet might have felt during n after the dance!

she was grateful to him after the dance okay...but what about during the dance?

he was lost in his passion..we can understand but what about her?

you've cleared all my doubts very beautifully with your wonderfully...i felt as if i was reading geet's personal dairy...it came out so naturally that all i could do is this : 👏

Her every emotion is apt.

and her feelings and the way u described left me speechless...

am in love with ur FF!!

plz plz do update soon!!

love

shika

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

awsome...cant wait for the nxt part.

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#266

nice update..............thnks for the pm.............

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

Great update! Very well written penning down Geet's thoughts of the party.

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divareena

@divareena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

I hate sasha for all the pain and trouble she is causing for geet.

Maan is too angry to realise how he is upsetting geet but at the same time he is attracted to her.

I am he realised that geet is too innocent to lie and says sorry to her.👏👏👏

lovely update👏👏👏👏

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gangesegb

@gangesegb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

awsome updates.......read it in one go.....do cont

nd add me 2 pm

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kia_s

@kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#270

@trishap, @shah10, @preethia, @sakadafi - Thank a lot you guys😃

@jazzerette - jazzy thank you, really appreciate your comments. 😃

@sangs - Thanks heaps😃

@geet105 - thanks a lot for your comments, 😃

@shika - hey my twinni, thanks for your analysis and comments 😃

@divareena - Thanks a lot for your comments😃

@gangesgb - Thanks, you are added to my pm list now😃

Edited by kia_s - 14 years ago