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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

hey twinni me here..!! finally you've updated hmph??
am glad!! 😊
and keep ur story at this pace...its beautiful,natural n have some logic..!!
and these r my fav dialogues in this UD
Great, you are gona fall in love with our DD just like all of us.
hayye pinky tumhare muh me ghee shakkar..!!
"Oh well I was window shopping and thought this building looked really nice. So came in to buy it and what are you doing here?"
🤣
Geet puttar tumhara toh jawab nahi!! well done...!!
So thanx 4 Updating..loved it!! totally..!! update soon..!!😉

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

It was fab

Pms n Silly me wat names😆😆

Their meet reminded me of the epi

Liked it

Maan was running frm her but God got her in frnt of him only

It was fab her retort to him n the way she said shopping was fab😆😆

Bechara Adi gaya

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kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#163

@sangi1588 - hey sangs thank you🤗

@-shamima- , @creddy, @shah10, @mrk_1, @sakadafi - Thank you for your comments guys and appreciated your support.😃

Edited by kia_s - 14 years ago

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kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

@jazz - thank you😃, glad u liked PMs walli and her silly me dialogues😆

@gagsy - thank you 😃

@xxxyyyzzz - thank you😃

@phoenixgirl - Thank you and appreciate your comments 😃

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kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: shivangi783
Hi Kia😊

Beautiful update.
Geet-Pinky talks were really good.
The way Pinky told her about sasha and her tasha(😛) was too good🤣🤣
I find geet-pinky bond better here than the one in the serial.
Maan was fighting with his thoughts about Geet since the past two months. Was happy to be back at KC after two months but little did he know that he's going to meet the same girl whose thoughts had been haunting him since long.
Liked their KC meeting😊
And yes, as always love to read the quote before the beginning of the chapter😊
Next update jaldi please😳
This is for you

hey shivangi

thanks for all your comments and review. i loved it and thank you for your support🤗

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kia_s

@kia_s

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: --Shika--
hey twinni me here..!! finally you've updated hmph??
am glad!! 😊
and keep ur story at this pace...its beautiful,natural n have some logic..!!
and these r my fav dialogues in this UD
Great, you are gona fall in love with our DD just like all of us.
hayye pinky tumhare muh me ghee shakkar..!!
"Oh well I was window shopping and thought this building looked really nice. So came in to buy it and what are you doing here?"
🤣
Geet puttar tumhara toh jawab nahi!! well done...!!
So thanx 4 Updating..loved it!! totally..!! update soon..!!😉

hey twinni,

cant say thank u but still appreciate your comments, reviews and support🤗and thanks ki bachi u stop saying thanks😆

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kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: -afsha-
It was fab
Pms n Silly me wat names😆😆

Their meet reminded me of the epi

Liked it

Maan was running frm her but God got her in frnt of him only

It was fab her retort to him n the way she said shopping was fab😆😆

Bechara Adi gaya