FF: Geet in an alternate world UPD CH10/P37

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-Sangs-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#141

Kia 🤗 sorry dear..was busy today ..had hell loads of appointment..*sigh*

anyways...loved the update..Maan 😍 no need to tell about that part..😆 i also liked that she finished her diploma..i really liked that, u wanted her to be more educated..👍🏼 now i guess the fun begins😳

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#142

Hey kia...haven't caught up with your FF since Dad was at home ....I love you the direction of your story....and since you have left us at a cliff-hanger I am eagerly awaiting the next.

Oh haan....PM list mein add karlo sakhi😊

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kia_s

@kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#143

@sangs - no problem🤗, thanks heaps for your comments and sure the fun begins. CLash of the Titans😉

@jazzy - thank you🤗, sure will add u to the PM list😃

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sommie

@s-o-m-m-i-e

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Posted: 14 years ago

#144

hey kia!!!!very well written👍🏼👍🏼.....awesome yar👏👏...plz do update soon....dying to read next part😳

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kia_s

@kia_s

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Posted: 14 years ago

#145

@sommie - thank you, will update soon😃

@phoenixgirl - Thank you😃

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Shruti Jain

@smj1977.shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#146

nice😊

breaking the bans😉

really liked it😛

keep going👏

"water should always flow freely, once it gathers it stinks"😊

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516645

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Posted: 14 years ago

#147

First of all...Mein tumpe bahut gussa hun!!😡
why because....tumne mujhe iss FF ke baare mein pehle nahi bataya!!
Chal koi baat nahi...
coming to your story..
i really love your story coz u r writing the story with some logic,which are missing in the original serial.
Be it is Geet's higher education r u may call it course or Pinky being older to Geet (pinky is already working where as Geet is a student..so it is obvious that Geet is younger than pinky ).
And the story....hmm...I am glad that it started from hoshiyarpur...so you r making the story clearer from the beginning...
And coming to Miscarriage, well before explaining what i felt...i would like to tell u what i said before i started to read ur FF..i said i will complete it in 15min...right? well i couldnot...u know why? it's bcoz i was shell-shocked and could not move further from the MC scene..!! the way you described was truly heart wrenching..!! And i could not control my tears..!! Everyone will have their own way of writing...and u r blessed!! Coz u write in such a way that touches one's heart!! Am really proud to have a frnd like u..!
PS:Update next part soon!!plz...😛
love
shika

Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago

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kia_s

@kia_s

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#148

@shika - Thank you so much🤗

your words trully mean a lot, especially for a beginner writter like me. and am proud to have a friend like you too. As i said earlier, i strongly believe not everyone might like a certain story line or a writters style thats y i never advertised my FF much. But am glad you liked this despite the MC line.

Appreciate your comments, lov ya