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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

thanks for updating and keeping our words............................. love u........................... now will read it at your blog and will comment later.....................

i love you all.. i will update simply love too there as because of last time problem i really felt so bad i stop writing that FF...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Naddiya part 39 superb................................u r a great writer. pls pls pls continue..........................................😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
thx you are the best ...thx alot
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despair 38

Early next morning
Geet woke up with rain noise as it was making melodious sound as hitting the wooden roof top of the cottage . she try to get up but could not as Maan was hugging her tightly in his arms...whisper " when you love me so much why don't you admit." removed his hairs from his fore head. slight kissed his forehead.. "i will win you will fall in love once again with me." removed his hand from her back placed pillow... covered him properly .walked to washroom to freshen up.
She walk on her toe tip to kitchen made coffee for her grab her canvas paints walk to the veranda she turn back could see Maan sleeping peacefully.


Geet : arranged her canvas and started painting. the sound of breeze & wind chimes made her smile "Maan i will gift you this just for you for the first time" she didnot released for how long she painted . as she was so much absorb. she many time turn back and saw Maan sleeping Geet smiled "my kuchi baby is so relaxed he is asleep."as rain had stopped she just pull her stand in lawn.
It was 9 Maan woke up he search for Geet with closed eyes on bed but could not find her. he quickly open his eyes... he was Geet standing right in front of him with her back towards him .she was busy painting.
her duppata was flowing with wind & her hairs were again & again disturbing her she was fixing it behind her ears again & agian. he took her picture .
Maan: smiled "let me help you.." he grab his crutches try to not to make noise he walk to her ... he placed his hands on her waist ..
Geet: shouted ... Maan
Maan: whisper in her ears" yes i am here"
Geet: you scared life out of me
Maan: oh sorry he kissed her neck...beautiful...looked at the painting


Geet: what beautiful?
Maan: you
Geet: Maan
Maan: open her hair clip"yes"
Geet: you ..her hairs covered her face. .she try to grab it
Maan: smiled ..kissed her head
Geet: aap ko muhje ko taang karan ka alawa kuch aur aata ha
Maan: no he pull her more closed..
Geet:why dont you freshen up ?
Maan: why?smell her hairs
Geet: because you have to exercise
Maan: but i want to do romance.
Geet: Maan
Maan:Geet
Geet: let me finish this
Maan: jee nai i will finish this. he grab brush from her hand
Geet: you are a kid..you will spoil it
Maan: you teach me.
Geet ok she hold his hand. Maan placed his chin on her shoulder .with the help of Geet he added few stokes
Maan: wow Geet see i can do
Geet: smiled "mera baby i am doing it she she kissed his cheek...
Maan: do you kiss your other student too.. looked in her eyes
Geet: no only my this special student. with Maan hand in hers she gave last touches to the painting.
Maan: tell me what else i do?like a kid he said
Geet:Maan it is finished
Maan: why you didnot woke me when you started this.
Geet: because you need rest
Maan: made baby face
Geet: grab brush from his hand. smiled "mera kuchi kuchi baby sad ha "
Maan: yes
Geet cup his face "promise next time i will make with you"
Maan : pull her more closed kissed her.. "promised whisper "
Geet: shyly "koi dekhe laga"
Maan: no one will come here . & if anyone will come the gate keeper will call us "
Geet: oh so you have khuli choti to do masti
Maan: yes ...
Geet: aap bhi na
Maan: ha mein bhi you have just spoiled me completely..
Geet: smiled chala undar ...
Maan: Geet i will ask Veer to send car so you can go & buy grocery .
Geet: is he here?
Maan yes
Geet: you will come with me right?
Maan: Geet i can't again & again climb
Geet: but
Maan: you go with driver.
Geet: but you will be alone ..while fixing hot water for him
Maan: am i kid
Geet: but if you need anything
Maan: Geet it will just take hour
Geet: i can't leave you alone.bus.you take shower.
she walked out.
Maan: pagal.
Geet: made breakfast "Maan are you ready "
Maan :didnot reply
Geet: Maan do you need help ?
Maan: who was wearing his shirt smiled ... "yes Geet bari prob mein hoon"
Geet: left the breakfast on table went to room "what happen" looked at him dressed up
Maan: smiled kuch nai just teasing you
Geet: aap bhi na Maan
Maan: give me cell.
Geet; passed him he hold her hand .."ab kya "
Maan: "i love when you show concern"
Geet: pagal ha aap she help him to walk to living room.
Maan: Geet i texted Veer to send car
Geet: Maan i am not going
Maan :Geet kuch nai hoga muhje ko.
Geet: but i am not going that is final. you have your breakfast & get ready for your therapy .
Maan: but where is ? paused
Geet: waved dvd.." dr gave me this i will play this & you will follow it"
Maan : but while taking his breakfast.
Geet: no if or but finish it.. she played the dvd . sat near his feet . with the help of dvd she was rubbing his muscles .Maan couldn't take his eyes of her face she was applying medicine circulate her hand.
Maan: from where you learn it?
Geet: ammi was in coma after accident. i saw nurse doing it .
Maan: bas karo
Geet: why?
Maan: you will get tired
Geet: i will not...
Maan: grab her hand "don't do it , i don't like"
Geet: Maan please we are so far from city , here i can't search Dr to help you i have to do it.
Maan: Geet it is useless
Geet: why?
Maan: there is only 10 % chance .
Geet: those 10% chance is 100 for me.
Maan: Geet i did search there is hardly few people who were cured .
Geet: you will be just trust in me & have faith in lord
Maan: pagal ho tum...they heard car voice ..
Geet: yahan kon aaya ha she fixed her duppata."walk to the door ..
Veer: Maan
Maan: geet open veer ha
Geet: hi
Veer: hi gave her a bouquet
Geet: thx
Maan: hi Veer i asked you to send driver.
Veer: oh driver is on leave that why i came myself, & i had to show Adi the cottage.
Geet: is Adi here
Veer; yes he is,he said Dadi send him
Maan: where is he? he made bad face.
Veer: he was taking snap ,he is out side
Geet: Maan i think you & Veer bhai sit i & Adi will go & get grocery
Maan: bit his lips in anger Veer bhai... But how he will know the way?
Geet: i noticed while coming from Airport i can take him.
Maan: Veer why don't you take her?
Veer: sure
Geet: no thx bhai you site here & discuses your project i will go with Adi. can i have your car key.she placed Maan files & laptop in front of him
Veer: sure.
Maan: wanted to bang his head but he could not help it .just whisper "Geet you have nice luck"
Geet waved him & went out.
ADI: bhabi were are you going
Geet: i am going with you to get grocery .. take this key & driver.
ADI: but i
Geet: chup you reached here in perfect time
ADI: why?
Geet: Maan your sir was asking me to go with Veer
ADI: looked at her
Geet: your boss is out of his mind now days , by the way what are you doing here?
ADI: dadi asked me to stay here till sir is not fine
Geet: looked out thinking"Maan i will not let you succeed in pushing me away from you ... what you think i can't read your mind ,or your intention . ladies six sense is more sharp then guys i got what is cooking in your mind.." she smiled.
to be cont. comment if you want more...

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Posted: 14 years ago

despair 39

Geet was busy shopping when someone knocked at her shoulder .
Tina Dutta
Ichcha :if i am not wrong your are Geet Handa.
Geet: lchcha you here .... hug her
lchcha See my eyes can never betray me .
Geet: but you are wrong i am no more Geet Handa i am Geet Maan Singh Khurana.
lchcha: oye kab kaisa
Geet: first tell me what are you doing here
lchcha: yar Geet i live here with my husband.
Geet: are you married
lchcha:yes . geet hug are again.
lchcha & Geet are college friends.
Geet: where is your husband?
lchcha: Veer is gone to meet his guest.
Geet: started laughing...
lchcha: whats wrong with you?
Geet: lchcha i need your time
lchcha: i am free.
Geet: wait 1 min. she walk to car
Adi: you done shopping.
Geet: yes she placed the bags ."you go to cottage tell Maan i found my friend i will be back in hour . stay there till i come back"
Adi: but
Geet: i am save you don't worry.
Adi:ok ..Adi bit confused as he knew Maan will be angry when he will find Geet is all alone. he drive back...


Geet: walk in to the store lchcha was doing some shopping.
lchcha :now tell what is the problem?
Geet: told everything from start how she met Maan, what all happen .
lchcha: now what you want me to do?
Geet:i want to make him realized that he can't share me .i am must in his life.
lchcha i don't get .
Geet: ok don't might but i will tell you truth . your husband is Maan's old friend . yesterday they met in Delhi ,Maan don't know that he is married ,he she paused .
lchcha : oh i got so he want you both.
Geet: yes
lchcha :but now what to do?
Geet: i need Veer bhai help . we will show him the way he want to see.
lchcha:but it will effect his health.he will lose more hope.
Geet: he will get jealous i am sure he will try to get well .
lchcha:soch lo you are taking risk
Geet: don't worry i will monitor him.
lchcha: Geet since when you got so smart.
Geet: with teary eyes to get back my husband i have to do this. she looked at watch...it is being an hour & half he must be worried i better go.
lchcha: wait Veer is coming to pick me we will drop you
Geet: cup her face , you should stay off Maan sight for sometime.
lchcha: don't you worry i will get down Veer will drop you to the Cottage.
Geet: thanks.
lchcha: any thing for you.


At cottage.
Maan:saw Adi coming with bags.."ADI where is Geet?"
ADI: smiled she said i go home & she will come by her self.
Maan: you left her alone
ADI: he he he Sir there are so many people in market she was not alone. she said how long Veer sir will wait i should go back.
Maan: just closed his Laptop :pagal he woh..
Veer: if you don't mind i will go
Maan:just hold his head.
ADI: hide his smile.."Sir why don't we discuses about project"
Maan: ADI
ADI: what Sir ?
Maan: you should not left her alone.
ADI sir she is not there were people there. he he he
Maan: stop it ADI
Veer: i think i should better leave i will come some other time.
Maan: didnot reply.
ADI: Yes Geet ma'am was saying same for how long you will wait.
Veer: Maan don't worry i will find her this is a small town.
Maan:didnot reply he was trying Geet number ,but again & again it was saying out of reach..
Veer: ADI
ADI: yes
Veer:near gate there is a cottage you stay there.
ADI: ok sir
Veer: left
ADI: Sir
Maan: will you leave me alone.
ADI: sir she met her friend that why she asked me to
Maan: why you didnot told me that before?
ADI: Sorry SIr i forgot.. he was feeling sorry for Maan.
Maan: i know my Geet is not that careless. was just looking out he was just looking at the road.
ADI: Sir you talk to Dadi she was worried .
Maan: ADI please will you be silent for some time.
ADI: grab files walk to Veranda he sit on stairs ..
Maan: yeh larki bhi na... as he was waiting it seem 1 min was not passing. "ADI why waiting is so long?"
ADI: " SIr i never waited for anyone.
Maan: I am feeling it is being ages , or the time has stuck .... it was about 1:45 mins no sign of Geet.
Maan"ADI you go & find her i think Veer could not find her"
ADI: but sir she asked me to stay with you,till she is back.
Maan: am i your boss or she ?
ADI: both.
Maan: do as i say?
ADI was about to go they saw Geet coming with Veer she was smiling.
Maan: whisper" yahan meri jaan nikle ha aur yeh " he saw Geet waving Veer .she was very happy.
Geet: ADi why are you standing here .. she saw Maan his face has different colors ... she hide her smile.
ADI: Maan sir was worried ,
Geet: ok ok i will see you go & rest. come for lunch.
ADI:" i had enough of scolding i don't want more" he picked up his bag walk down.
Geet: walk in Maan was sitting.. she hug him kissed his cheek .. "how is mu kuchi kuchi?"
Maan: do you have any idea how much you scared me?
Geet: what happen?
Maan: this 1hour 45 mins were like hell.why your cell was off..
Geet: charging finished .she put it to charge..
Maan: what you were doing?
Geet: placed her paints & more canvas ... "actually i am very choice i took time to select all this."
Maan: pull her she with jerk in his lap.." if you do this next time i will..."
Geet: blink her eyes .."what you will?"
Maan: was about to kiss her .. her cell ring..
Geet; aik min.. she walk to the other side of room. "hi Veer"
lchcha : Geet tum bahot batameez ho.
Geet: thx Veer: bit loud.
Maan: bit shocked how frankly she was talking he looked at her then try to focus on his Laptop.."i wanted that why i am jealous".
Geet: it was pleasure meeting you..
lchcha: Geet tum bhi na,
Geet: smiled talk to you later ..cut..
She murmur song Maan was just looking at her.she was keeping things in cupboard & singing.
Maan: you look very happy?
Geet: yup i am ... she walk to him
Maan: why?
Geet: what do you mean why? i am happily married ,i have a loving husband ,that why.
Maan: hmmm
Geet: are you annoyed ? placed her head on his knee.
Maan: who am i to be?
Geet; hold her ears i am sorry next time it will not happen.
Maan smiled ..
Geet: hold his hand in her's I love you.
Maan: hmmm
Geet: what kya i love you ka ans hmmm hota ha?
Maan ha na
Geet: ha na
Maan: I love you too.
Geet: smiled that is like my hubby...
Maan: you have totally gone mad since you have come here.
Geet: smiled moosam ka aasar ha ... her cell rang again...
Maan: irritated ....
Geet: aik min.
lchcha: Geet you both are invited for dinner tonight.
Geet: but ...
Maan: who is it ?
Geet: Veer inviting us on dinner.
Maan: looked at his cell"why he didnot called me why he is calling her ...he thought "Geet say YES...
Ichcha: she heard Maan.. "you are too much Geet "
Geet: had a laughter ok see you at night..
Maan: totally shocked at her laughter... looked at her in surprise.


to be cont...thx for commenting here.love you all.. should i end this in next part..do tell me i will do as you all will say... don't forget to comment....






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despair 40

I never thought this FF will have 40 parts thanks for your support .
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Geet: Maan what would you like to have for lunch.
Maan: nothing i am not hungry.
Geet: why? looked at him
Maan: bus try to concentrated on his work.
Geet: am i a bad cook?
Maan: when i said that?
Geet: kya baat ha you didn't like some thing.
Maan: took a deep breath ...Why you felt like that?
Geet: you are acting strange..
Maan: nothing happen i was just thing regarding project.
Geet: you can share with me may be i help you
Maan: smiled ...
Geet: you will have lunch right...
Maan: ok baba jaan kaha jao gai.
Geet: smiled .. Sorry kuchi kuchi... pull his cheeks
Maan: hold her hand what is this kuchi kuchi Geet.
Geet: i use to do this to rano my younger sis when she use to look cute .. tears come in her eyes .. now you are my every relation that why i am doing this to you..
Maan: wipe her tears any time you can do..
Geet: mind tou nai karta ?
Maan: no my cuto pie... kissed her fingers ..
Geet: did you call Dadi?
Maan: no
Geet: why?
Maan: i forgot , i was so tense when you ..paused
Geet: lets call her now.
Maan: Geet do you know how to make biryani
Geet: yes
Maan: ok make that...
Geet: sure boss..she went to kitchen
Maan: noticed she was sms some one every time she received a message she use to smile.
Geet: just looked at Maan he was more looking at her then to his files..."koi kam ha kya"
Maan: no
Geet: ok
Maan: in one meeting she liked Veer so much if she will meet him few more times surly she will agree.
Geet: looked at Maan sms lchcha : he is cooking something in his mind
lchcha: reply "don't tease him"
Geet: kuch kuch hota ha yar.... :) ..
again & again Geet cell was vibrating.Maan just twist & turn on couch.
Maan: why i am caring i my self wanted that? he again open his files.
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Geet: sing's
halchal hui zara shor hua
dil chor hua teri aur hua
aise chali jab hawa to tease Maan pass by him covered his face with her duppata ..
Maan: Geet
Geet; ishq hua hi hua
ishq hua hi hua Maan pagal hogai ho...
Geet: ishq hua ..
Maan kis se
Geet: ha koi , she brought plate sit next to him..."ahhh Maan"


Maan: kon
Geet: placed a spoon in his mouth ..."acha bacha baat nahii karta khana khata huai"
Maan: couldnot stop him self he just smiled ...
Geet: you look cute when you smile.
Maan: i am noticing you are totally changed.
Geet: Yeh Mausam Ka Jaadu Hai Mitwa
Maan: check her fore head Geet i thought i married a serious lady.
Geet; you are wrong Maan i was the most mischief studied of my class.
Maan: i can see ,since you are alone with me you are just teasing me.
Geet: smiled ok i will not tease you again. made sad face.
Maan : Geet
Geet; while making him eat. jee
Maan: who you were sms?
Geet; looked at him is that must to tell?
Maan: no
Geet: then leave it.
Maan: ok ...
Geet; by they way you are very miser?
Maan: why?
Geet; you ate whole plate but never praised , how i made it?
Maan: it is tasty
Geet: just tasty
Maan: ok very tasty ...
Geet: let me check i think i didnot made nice..
Maan: trust me it is very very tasty..
Geet: smiled .... my gift .... open her hand infront of him
Maan: "gift "
Geet: yes when ever i use to cook at my home my papa use to give me gift...now you... she just choked...
Maan: hug her he took plate from her pull her more closed ... "what gift you want tell me "
Geet: promise
Maan: yes
Geet: soch la
Maan soch leya made her head rest at his chest run his finger in her hairs ... you just ask.
Geet: pyar kara ...played with his shirt button
Maan: what shocked at her boldness
Geet: yes do what i asked you ...you said you will...
Maan: looked at her ...
Geet: see you didnot she try to get up ..he pull her back to him
Maan: madam what you think of Maan Singh Khurana..?
Geet: "a miser" made sad face
Maan:pull her closed kissed her ... at fore head...
Geet: looked at him pat his fore head. theek ha i am going to take shower .. you are just to miser... she quickly got up...
Maan: smiled he just let her go "wait i all tell you "
Geet: was just lost she was relaxing she didnot heard when he enter
Maan: sit he kissed her closed eyes



Geet: aap she quickly open her eyes
Maan: placed his finger on her lips shhhhh .kissed on other...eyes.. rub his nose with her....
Geet; just lost her heart beat... she couldn't even open eyes as she felt shy... he kissed her cheek. whisper ...
Maan: baad mein baqi (rest later )... splash water from tub at her face...
Geet: open her eyes .. Maan was going out ... winked at her...
Geet; took a deep breath... uff why i asked him all my fault, he will just tease me now.. she was still feeling goosebumps ... she smiled at his naughtiness... "how i forget to look?" she quickly took shower dress up .. it she went out..
Maan was laying on bed...he placed his hand on his eyes
Geet; kya huwa aap ko.. she check
Maan: sona do i am sleepy.
Geet: but Veer ask us to come by 5.
Maan: you go i want to sleep..
Geet: but it doesn't look nice
Maan: please Geet you go.
Geet; smiled she got he is just again sad. she covered him with blanket. kissed his fore head .."Ok you sleep i will go" she walked out
Maan: she will really go ?..he sit but again lay down in anger....


to be cont....do comment....waiting.
do tell she should go or not.......?
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome....................👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
he wanted her to go and he himself is getting worried abt it now..............cant wait to watch his face when he knows veer is married..........but geet is also teasing him so much
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U R BACK...........SO GUD 2 C UR UPDATES.................LOVELY UPDATES.......GEET SUD TEASE MAAN.....I M LOVIN IT..............
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Posted: 14 years ago

i commented on ur blog here im also doing.....

great updates

do continue and all the best for ur future writes.

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