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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26

hmm do frankly tell me do you like this track. or not oi just want to be bit different from my other FF's .

Well i like this track,
its very interesting..........
it also amazing that now maan had to be taken care and not geet,
so its nice,
also i must say this is a great turn............in story........
go ahead.....continue soon........
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one dera
do cotninue
i hope geet manages well as maan si super cranky and going tough patient to handle.
bye sumi
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update nadiyya, but how come he is getting angry with our geet for flowers? its unusual na?
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh nooooooooooooooooo big prob but waowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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Posted: 14 years ago
oops!a cliff hanger again.plz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank u for the update, it was great love the way geet is taking of maan.
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice
pla maan ko jaldi se thik karo...
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Posted: 14 years ago

despair 32

Geet : looked at him " ok i will keep it out of room"she was about to go out
Maan: is this the way to tuck in blanket.
Geet: wait i will fix it properly. she made him lay & tuck the blanket neatly .
Maan: hold her hand . "why you cried?"
Geet: i was feeling lonely with out you.
Maan: if i ...
Geet: placed her finger on his lips.
Maan : saw her teary eyes "phir "
Geet: wipe it away. "tell me what would you like to eat?"
Maan: kuch nai
Geet: why ?
Maan: bus
Geet: ok let me keep these flowers out side.& bring juice for you.
Maan: left her hand . "Geet "
Geet: jee
Maan: jaildi aana mein tumhara pecha nahi aa sakta .(come quickly i can't come behind you)
Geet: bus aik min. she quickly walk out
Maan: looked at him self how help less he was . he try to pick up tv remote but could not reach to it. " wah Maan Singh Khurana look at yourself you were planning to take Geet abroad for treatment if she had cancer,now you yourself on bed."
there was knock at door
Jay :peep in"aajo maroga to nahi"
Maan: smiled "nai"
Jay: yar why you are making such a sad face.
Maan: yar tell me how i can smile if Geet reports are positive . i am so help less i can't even pick up the remote.
Jay: oh for your kind information you are not help less it is for few days . secondly bhabhi is not sick.
Maan: what?
Jay: yes she is not sick it was brij act he threaten dr to make fake report .if he will not he will kidnap his daughter who is studying in brij city.
Maan: mouth was still open.
Jay: why you are so shocked?
Maan: now i ..paused as Geet enter with glass of juice.
Geet: sorry Maan i am late.
Maan: looked at her.
Geet: hi bhai
Jay: hi oh looking after your hubby.
Geet: yes i am looking after my hubby. she placed napkin on his shirt.
Maan: looked at her
Geet: drink.
Maan: took a sip.
Geet: kya huwa acha nahi ha.
Maan: push the glass away. "keep it i will take it later i am sleepy."
Jay: looked at his face .why he suddenly changed? "ok i will come later" he walked out.
Geet: Maan
Maan: why you didnot told me that you are not sick.
Geet:i forgot
Maan bit loud how could you forget such important thing?
Geet:Maan it hardly being few hours you have .
Maan: Geet that should be the first news when i open eyes.
Geet: ok baba sorry she hold her ears . maaf kar da.
Maan : hmmm i am sleepy you go from here.
Geet: Maan this is my room too i will not go from here. she sit next to him hold his hand in his.
Maan: Geet i am handicap .
Geet: chup. what ever you are you are mine just mine without thinking she hug him tight in her arms .
Maan: could feel her racing heartbeat. he could smell her scent.
Geet: don't think i have sympathy for you .
Maan: hmmm... rested his head on her chest.
Geet: i just love you like any thing. you are just hurt. with therapy you will be fine
Maan: if i don't
Geet: i have faith in lord & in my love you will. even if you can't for few days i will be with you like your shadow.
Maan hmmm
Geet: hmmm kya
Maan acha
Geet: kissed his eyes. run her fingers in his hairs
Maan:but
Geet: peek at his lips . no but just sleep mera kuchi kuchi kuchi baby.
Maan: what is this kuchi kuchi kuchi looked in her eyes
Geet: pull his cheeks when some one is looking too cute .kissed his cheeks
Maan felt so relax that he forgot his anger slept in her arms . after a while Geet felt he was snoring. she care fully made him lay on pillow. kissed his forehead i will face your this anger Maan ,but i will not stay away from you.
walk out of room.
Dadi: how is he ?
Geet: sleeping
Dadi: phir ghusa tou nai kiya .
Geet: dadi why you are worried ? let him shout on me .
Dadi: beta don't mind
Geet: dadi he is my husband. i really don't mind.
Dadi:Maan bahot paused geet hold her hand
Geet: dadi Maan has done so much for it is now my duty to look after him .
Dadi: kissed her forehead.
Geet: dadi please ask to make Maan's favorite dinner .
Dadi: ok beta.
Geet: dadi will go back in room if he gets up .
Dadi ok beta.
Geet: quickly walk back ...sit near his feet started messaging in circular motion. "i will make you walk again Maan. "

dear readers let recovery Maan slowly, i read comments few of you want Maan should get well soon if he will recover soon the FF will come to an end,now tell me what to do. ... i hope you like this track
there were few readers who use to visit my blog from Japan for you friends we are with you in this hour of pain and sorrow
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Japan tsunami (Sorrow )instrumental by Hasan Shirazi
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice nadiyya, loved reading continuous update from you! keep going, Maan ka gussa bi more na? like his love for Geet!
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Posted: 14 years ago
after a long time im commenting nadz loved it... loved Geet's kuchi....

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