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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

It was love at 1st sight for Maan 😆Yeahh

He is really stupid😆😆 LOL Okay Now When Did Maan Singh Khurana become Stupid?😆
1st he shuld hav spoken became frnds wit her than shuld hav done all ths but nahi Then He Is Stupid🤣 Hmmm Wait And See Wat Happens😉
Dadi was really eager to meet Geet but plan failed
Atlast Geet got her victory but nt for much tym i thk because Maan saw her
She hav guts but Victoryyyy But Not For Long..Ooopss I'm Giving It Away!😆
Love her
Update soon plz n longer updates plz Yeah Will Update Soon And Try To Make It Longer😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

Aawwh, no problem Sadie Smile Well it was supposed to be poor Geet
but you know she escaped... Poor Maan he excitidly went to call Dadima and
look 😆 Yeah, I'm waiting for the next update Tongue Omg, half 3? Lmao!
Hmm- there was no improvements though 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! 🤗 You're Sooooooooo Swwweeeeeeeeet!!!! Just Like Your Name!😛
Lol I Woke Up Now! Sorryyy I Won't Be Able To Update Like Noww...But I'm Staying Up Late Again So I'll Finish My Chapter And Then Post It When You Wake Up Tomorrow😆 I Know I'm Talking Crap! I'm Staying Up Like An Owl!🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
add me to ur PM list plz. i loved ur FF :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved ur ff.......... plzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku

Awhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! 🤗 You're Sooooooooo Swwweeeeeeeeet!!!! Just Like Your Name!😛

Lol I Woke Up Now! Sorryyy I Won't Be Able To Update Like Noww...But I'm Staying Up Late Again So I'll Finish My Chapter And Then Post It When You Wake Up Tomorrow😆 I Know I'm Talking Crap! I'm Staying Up Like An Owl!🤣



Thankyouuu Sadie ⭐️
Aaawwh, no problem- Update when you can. But please update jaldi. 😆
Hey, hey- you never updated. 😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay! So So Soooo Sorrry For The Delay!
I've Manyyy Reasons For Why I've Not Updated But I'll Just Shut Up For Now 😆
Okay I'm In A Rush At The Moments So I Might Not Be Able To PM Everyone
Next Chapter Is Coming Up In Few Minutes
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Posted: 14 years ago
Going Straight Onto The Chapter No More Bak-Bak From Me😆
P.s I Won't Be Sending PM's Just Yet I'm In A Rush...

Next Chapter Enjoy😳

Chapter 5

Maan ran thinking she had done something but stopped when he saw Ramu Kaka, one of the servants, shaking in fear since he had broken the vase which he was holding a moment ago.
"S..Soo'Soorr..Soorrryyy..S..s'Sii.Sii'Sirr'" was all he could say.
"Ramu Kaka! Clean all this up before I lose my temper!" shouted Maan.
He was relieved it wasn't anything to do with her, but still he couldn't take any risks. He rushed outside thinking everything will be fine but Nahi! He looked at his car, which was now a broken car. The window had been smashed brutally and the glass was all over the floor. He was right, this girl will make him go crazy! He ran to the security guard and shouted "Where did that girl go?!"
Security Guard: S..Sir'That way *Pointing towards the direction*
Maan: WHY DIDN'T YOU STOP HER?!
Security Guard: Sir I just arrived now and all I saw was a broken window and a girl running that way'
Maan: FINE! Let me handle her first, then I'll see you!
The man gulped as Maan ran from there. "Just Wait Till I Get You!" he shouted as he ran to find her.




Geet had a slight hint of where she was at the moment so she ran the way his car had come from, her house would be that way.
She ran as fast as she could and kept looking back in case he was following her. To her relief, he wasn't, Just yet!
"Oh God!!! Why does everything happen to me for?!!" she shouted while running.
Since she was looking back most of the times, she didn't realize where she was heading to. Suddenly, she bumped into someone or something. Geet went flying back! About few feet away from whatever she bumped into.
"Oh Teri..!" she shouted as she stopped herself from falling on the ground.
She looked up to find a group of weird looking guys. She stood there in fury and shouted "Idiot! Dekh Ke Nahi Chal Sakte?!!"
The Guy whom she had bumped into was the only one to speak.
"Ahhh Madam! What are you saying? You're the one who bumped into me.." said the man looking at her from head to toe *Eghhh Checking her out inni*. Geet gave him a glare.
"Ohh Madam Ko Ghussa Agaya!" he laughed and the rest joined him *Boss Ke Chamchas Phu*.
"Why don't you come with us?" he continued.
Geet stood where she was but they kept moving forward. Eventually she had to take few steps back.
"Are you scared?" he asked mockingly.
Geet walked backwards and suddenly laughed a little. More like mocked them with her laugh.
"You think, I'm gonna go begging you to leave me? Like Bachaaoo Mujhe kuch mat karna wagera wagera'well You're wrong mister!" she said it with attitude.
"If you think, I'm gonna cry well you're stupid to think that. Just because I'm a girl doesn't mean I can't do anything" she continued.
The guys just laughed at her thinking she won't really do anything, she's just trying to act big and all.
"Oh Yeah? Well lets see how you can run away from 6 Good looking guys like us!" said the main guy.
"What did you say? GOOD LOOKING?" She started to laugh loud. They all stopped coming towards her and she stopped walking back.
"I'm..Sorry'But Good Looking?" she broke into laughter.
"You're Wrong Dude! Go and look at yourselves in the mirror! You look like pumpkins crushed in an elevator!"she again started laughing as she had just cracked a joke without thinking.
"Wow Geet You're Too Good!" she said to herself, still laughing.
The main guy got angry and in an instant, he caught her left hand tightly. Geet stopped laughing and gave him the You're-So-Dead Look.
"Haath Chor" she said.
"Nahi toh kya?" he said
"Bohot bol rahi thi! Now what's happened to you?" he continued.
"Maine kaha Haath Chor!" she repeated.
"And if I don't?" he said.
Geet had enough! She lifted her right leg and BOOM!
She kicked him alright. The guy stumbled back and was in shock.
"Who wants a piece of me?!!" she shouted as the rest of them gathered around her in a circle.
So this is how it was, Geet in the middle, and the 5 guys surrounding her with the 6th main guy in front of her.
"Wow! One Kick wasn't enough?" she said.
"Shut Up! Now we'll show you who's who!" said the main guy, still holding his stomach. Moments later he stopped holding his stomach.
He came forward and again tried to hold her by hand, this time she PUNCHED HIM! *Muahahahah My Geet Is My Imagination!! Go Geet Go Geet Go Geet!🤣* She punched him on his cheekbone and instantly held her hand as it hurt her badly.
The rest of the guys stood where they were, looking at her take the life out of their boss.
Two of the other guys came forward, one on each side of the main guy's.
"Oye! If You wanna fight, then one by one! Lets see how Manly you are!" she challenged.
The main guy, was holding his cheek and a tear came out of his eye. He stepped back for some time and signalled the one on the left to continue.
The second guy competing with Geet stood in front of her and was about to touch her shoulders when she gave him a tight slap across his cheeks. His face was on the other side and with that, Geet kicked him in the '.so hard he screamed in agony.
"Ewww I can't believe I kicked you there!'.Does it hurt?"she said and asked in mockery.
"Aghhh!!!!!" he screamed.
"Next!" she shouted.
Despite getting beaten up by a girl, they still stood there getting beaten up one by one.
The third guy came forward, ready to be thrashed when suddenly Geet's eyes opened wide and her mouth flung open.
"Haila!! Akshay Kumar ke stunts karte karte I totally forgot Maan Singh Thurana's After Me!!" she said loudly as she saw Maan coming towards her.
She made a small run but the guys had surrounded her!
"Go Away! Let Me Go!" she shouted but they wouldn't move.
It was hopeless to be telling them! She again started with her stunts and slapped the two other guys together. Both held their cheeks in pain. That left two to fight before Maan caught her. At the moment Maan was far far away but Geet had noticed him. *Sharp Eyesight 😆*
"Now Be good boys and let me go! Or else that dude over there, will kill me!" she threatened.
All the guys looked at her and looked at her, and looked at her.
"Oh for crying out loud! I won't fight if you save me from that guy there!" she said, finally giving up.
"Sure?" said the main guy.
"Yeah!!!" she shouted.
"Okay Madam, But next time pleasee don't beat us again!" he said scared.
"Fine!" she said.
"Aha Maan Singh Thurrana! Now we'll see how you can take 6 guys all at once!" she thought.
All the guys gathered around, leaving Geet behind.
"Hmm'I Won't run just yet. I'll run after he's beaten up by 6 Guys!" she said excitedly.
Maan was few feet away from the Goons when he stopped.
He looked at them, panting, and then looked further back to see Geet standing in the middle of the road, smiling evilly, arms folded.
"Oh, so she's hired These Goons to beat me up" he thought. "Well sorry to disappoint you miss but Maan Singh Khurana never loses against a bunch of weird looking guys!" he continued and smirked.
The main guy stood in front of Maan, forcing Maan to remove his intense gaze Off Geet. Maan looked at the guy and instantly grabbed his collar. The guy became furious.
"Don't you dare mess with me" hissed Maan.
"Warna Kya?" said the guy.
"Do you know who I am? Maan Singh Khurana! Do you hear me? MAAN Singh Khurana. And that girl over there is MY WIFE" He replied with rage.
The guy shuddered in fear as he let go of him. "Agar the wife is that hard'imagine him!" he thought.
"Sorry..Sir..Galati Hogayi.." was all he could say.
"Who actually, you're wife beated us up and then told us to beat you up as well." he continued.
Maan could not believe his ears. SHE Beated up these guys?! How is that?
"And..Sirr we were only here because she's told us that if we don't beat you up, she'll beat us up instead.." said the guy.
"Then Hit me." Said Maan.
"Whaat?" he asked.
"I Said beat me up! But remember, keep hitting me gently or else!" he warned.
"But sir..how do we beat you gently?" he asked.
"Oh for god's sake! Just pretend to beat me up and make it look like as if you're hitting me really hard." Maan Ordered.

"Huh? What the heck? Are they fighting or just talking?" said Geet to herself.
Suddenly, she saw Maan falling on the floor.
"Haila! First Punch?! Good Job Pumpkins!" she said loud.
Maan gave him a glare.
"So'sorr'Sorryy Sir" said the guy, petrified.
"Now lemme punch you!" said Maan, as he got up and kicked him in the stomach.
"Arghhh!!!" shouted the man, clearly in pain.
"Now Run!" ordered Maan.
The whole gang ran from there without looking and reached to Geet.
"Madam! Hume Maaf Karo!!" they all said it together and ran from there as fast as they could.
"Oyee!!!! Suno Toh!" she shouted, waving at them.
She realized her plan had flopped. So she made a run for it but before she could even take a step, someone held her tightly by the waist with both hands. Geet froze at her spot and dared not to breathe forget moving.
"You can breathe at least" laughed Maan.
Geet tried to take his arms off him but he wouldn't budge. Instead, he twisted her around so that she was facing him, still holding her with one hand now. She pushed him but he held her even tighter with his left hand.
"Why don't you just let me go?!!" she shouted, punching him on his chest.
Maan didn't say anything. Instead, he started opening his tie with his right hand. Geet stood there shocked.
"Oh God what is he gonna do?!" she thought.
He removed his tie and in an instant, caught both of her hands. He held her both hands and wrapped the tie tightly.
"What?!" she shouted, trying to take back her hands.
"Be a good girl and don't move!" he ordered, wrapping the tie as securely as possible.
She moved and moved but it didn't help.
Finally he managed to tie her up.
"Okay now can I go?!" she asked, taking steps back.
He didn't say anything, instead he lifted her up on his shoulder and headed towards his house, again!
"What the!!! Put me down!!" she demanded.
Maan: No!
Geet: I'll beat you up like I did to those guys!
Maan: Ha! Shut Up!
Geet: What do you want?! Put me down!!
Maan: How many times do I have to tell you NO!
Geet punched him on his back with both her hands since they were tied together, but it didn't help.
She moved her legs to kick him on his face, but he held her legs together as well, with his hands.
"Hold still You ninja!" he shouted.
"Warna kya?!!" she shouted back.
He stopped walking.
"Uh Oh" she murmured.

Okay I Could have continued but i'm in a rush. Do tell me how it was and the Pm's...Sorryy😳


EDIT--

DAMNNN!!!! Geet was an idiot!!! And I Was A Bigger Idiot!!!🤣

Edited by ..Sadiie.. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
yahhh frst 1 to comment
superb update loved it
ohhh😍 wats gnna appen nxt ? cant w8
plzz update soonxx!!!:):):)
Edited by Ameena4Eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Its a FAB update, i love geet being a ninja hahaha it was jkes. cnt wait for the next one. well done!!

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