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Posted: 14 years ago
Ooh the promo for the new ff sounds really intersting and different so yeah if you want to carry on with it I would love to read it 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

This Mahi Moment is solely dedicated to Pushpi.

Today was the last day of her exams and she was going to have exactly 3 weeks off from school. This semester had been a rollercoaster ride for her. She has been sick with flu for a few weeks, her best friend was away on a cruise and on top of that her cousin was getting married in one day. She had already missed her sangeet and mehandi. She and her cousin were very close and she detested the fact that she was not able to attend her sangeet and mehandi functions. In fact she was so mad that she had not talked to her for last 2 days. But today, she could not wait for her last exam to get over because right after the exam she was flying straight to Vancouver to attend the wedding. The rest of her family was already in Vancouver having fun while she was here studying.

3 hours later....

She walked out of her classroom and sighed in relief. She was so happy that her exams were finally over. Her pace increased as she started to walk towards the parking lot. Her inner voice was telling herself, Suhana, you are going to have a blast in these three weeks. Yes she was ...she said to herself.

The weather was pleasant and the sun was shining. Her happiness had no boundaries. Her feet started to pick up even more speed and she started humming the song '

Kahin to.. kahin to.

Hoga woh

Duniya jahan tu mere saaath hain....

Jane na kahan woh duniya hai
Jane na woh hai bhi ya nahi
Jahan meri zindagi mujhse
Inti kafa nahi

While humming the song she was in her own world and did not realize when she had started to twirl. She was looking at the sun, the sky and the beautiful fall trees around her and just when she was about to twirl once again when she bumped into someone with full force. She found herself falling and felt a pair of strong arms grabbing her waist to keep her from falling. She closed her eyes and was about to breathe in relief thinking she was saved...but she had hit this person with such a force that they both went sprawling on the grass. He broke her fall and she landed on him. Her long and straight hair fell on his face and covered it. She could not see his face but could smell his strong cologne.

She was scared and nervous and could not believe that she was lying on top of a guy, a stranger in the middle of her university campus..eeeekkkk. Her heart had started hammering and she realized that his hands were still on her waist. She flipped her hair around and tried to get up and at the same time their eyes met and the time stopped.

To be continued.....

Hasini..I am sorry I am continuing this on your FF....please bear with me until I figure out how this whole FF thing works....I had to write something today.....just so emotional today...n therefore....Pushpi...here you go.........
Pushpi's Mahi Moment - Part 2

She flipped her hair around and tried to get up and at the same time their eyes met and the time stopped.

Both of them were gazing into each other's eyes oblivious of their surroundings. Wait, was she looking into a pair of hazel eyes..she thought or was the sun playing tricks with her eyes. She gazed deeply into his eyes again and noticed the brownish-green appearance again. Hmmm...he definitely did have hazel eyes. Her eyes darted to his face nervously and caught his handsome features and she held her breath. She could not handle being this close to him anymore and tried to get up.

He noticed her nervousness and helped her get up. She bent down and picked up her book which had dropped to the ground. She mumbled, 'Umm'I am sorry, I was not watching where I was going.' He seemed amused at her nervousness and said, 'It is ok, do not worry.' His amusement suddenly changed to concern and he asked her, 'Tumhe lagi to nahin?'. She smiled coyly and said Nahin meih theek houn! She could not understand why she was acting so weird in front of him. Furthermore, she noticed that her eyes were checking out his well built body, handsome face and wait...his wonderful smile. And when he smiled there was a twinkle in his eye. She realized she was getting carried away and told herself, Earth to Suhana! Earth to Suhana! Yeh kya sooch rahi ho? Koi sharam hai ya nahin. Giggling to herself, she murmured to herself....Nahin!

At that same moment she heard him clear his throat'she looked up to him and stammered'.Ok, I will leave now. Thanks once again and sorry. He looked at her once again and said it is ok. She left from there and walked away towards the parking lot.

He turned his head around and watched her go towards the parking lot and kept watching until she drove off in her Honda Accord Coupe. He was still lost in her...in her scent....was it lavender..he asked himself. He smiled and said to himself, she was a real beauty. Her turquoise knee length dress, her straight black hair, and the most important feature were her eyes. They were grayish blue....as soft as feathers. She had felt so light when she fell on him...and he remembered her slim waist and her nervous breath.

Oh God! What is happening to me..he said to himself. Just as he was about to walk away from his thoughts; he some something blue lying in the grass glittering in the sun. He bent down and picked it up..and saw that it was a bookmark. It was not a simple bookmark either...it had a fancy ribbon and there were two dangling hearts attached to the ribbon and they tinkled softly as he moved the ribbon. Wait....there was more to the bookmark...there was something written on it....

'A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step''.written by Confucius. Wasn't he a Chinese philosopher and a thinker ....he said to himself.

He held the bookmark and started walking silently listening to the two hearts tinkling against each other...

He suddenly stopped and looked around him. Everything around him seemed fresh and lively, the grass, the trees the birds..and the little stream that ran behind the park. He looked up at the sky and saw that the sun had just come out from behind the clouds. He read the quote again..and thought to himself....To keep her from falling..he had walked forward towards her, he had taken a step towards her...and even when she fell..they had fallen on the ground together and his arms were around her waist as if they were protecting her.
He looked at the sun again which had not come out of the clouds..with a new realization, a new journey, a new destination'.he did not believe in love or anything but he could not be stop himself from being surprised at the events that took place in the last 20 minutes. Could she be'the one? His one step towards her and their journey together'.
To be continued.......
Edited by Water. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Rachana Di 🤗
Thank you for everything! Your good wishes and this update...oh I so needed this update!!! I loved it....the two hearts twinkling against each other, the lavender scent (which is one of my favs btw)
Awesome! I really needed a smile! Reading this and Hasini's update definitely made for a good break. Now time to hit the books again for tomorrows finals.
Hasini 🤗 That was for the good wishes and your update too! Lets try chat abt the update or I'll just post something up laterz
Talk to you both soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Hasini..I am sorry I am continuing this on your FF....please bear with me until I figure out how this whole FF thing works....I had to write something today.....just so emotional today...n therefore....Pushpi...here you go.........



Dont worry. Keep posting. 👍🏼You guys own this anyways...else this thread won't cross so many pages.
I don't have any issues...I posted my mahi moments here too right. 😳

In fact a shout to all....Please post Mahi moments...it will be fun to read. Its a jolly good season, so please come out with your writing skills. It keeps me going. Hope you all can discover the writer in you too.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



Dont worry. Keep posting. 👍🏼You guys own this anyways...else this thread won't cross so many pages.
I don't have any issues...I posted my mahi moments here too right. 😳

In fact a shout to all....Please post Mahi moments...it will be fun to read. Its a jolly good season, so please come out with your writing skills. It keeps me going. Hope you all can discover the writer in you too.

You're too kind Hasini
For now, I just hope to rationally think and write my practical exam. As long as my writing skills are well rewarded there, life is sane ;-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hasini, today you have put me in a difficult situation....

Overall, I really liked the update- they both want to take the relationship forward..I loved how she got back at Sasha- that woman has had it coming to her for quite some time!

But what did not work for me was that scrap book- I understand that you wanted to show that he has a past which may not necessarily be as simple as Geet thought- but a scrap book- thats just downright cheap and vain, which your Maan never was! It just sounds too peacockish for my liking...or for me to be able to associate with Maan.

I really want to know, why you chose that as a way to let Geet know that Maan has been around (which I am guessing is what the intent was)? I agree that with the premise that there is no such thing as a perfect man or a perfect woman...I just do not agree with the execution here...

<No offence intended>

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Hasini, today you have put me in a difficult situation....


Overall, I really liked the update- they both want to take the relationship forward..I loved how she got back at Sasha- that woman has had it coming to her for quite some time!

But what did not work for me was that scrap book- I understand that you wanted to show that he has a past which may not necessarily be as simple as Geet thought- but a scrap book- thats just downright cheap and vain, which your Maan never was! It just sounds too peacockish for my liking...or for me to be able to associate with Maan.

I really want to know, why you chose that as a way to let Geet know that Maan has been around (which I am guessing is what the intent was)? I agree that with the premise that there is no such thing as a perfect man or a perfect woman...I just do not agree with the execution here...

<No offence intended>



Girl did you make my day or what? I love it when I get comments like this. Thank you first of all for writing it.

I have just one sentence for you..."Its not a scrap book". I didnt mention what it was or what it read in the first page...😉 Its supposed to be in the next update.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



Girl did you make my day or what? I love it when I get comments like this. Thank you first of all for writing it.

I have just one sentence for you..."Its not a scrap book". I didnt mention what it was or what it read in the first page...😉 Its supposed to be in the next update.



waiting for the next update sweety !!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement



Dont worry. Keep posting. 👍🏼You guys own this anyways...else this thread won't cross so many pages.
I don't have any issues...I posted my mahi moments here too right. 😳

In fact a shout to all....Please post Mahi moments...it will be fun to read. Its a jolly good season, so please come out with your writing skills. It keeps me going. Hope you all can discover the writer in you too.


Watch out for mine...then...I'm not creative as you are...it's the moments that I capture and penned it down. You know them.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sabne kaha Dosti ek Dard hai,
Humne kaha Dard kabool hai,
Subne kaha is Dard ke saath Jee na Paogay,
Humne kaha uski ore teri Dosti ki saath Marna kabool hai.

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