FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#661

Originally posted by: pushpi
You're too kind Hasini
For now, I just hope to rationally think and write my practical exam. As long as my writing skills are well rewarded there, life is sane ;-)

Good luck pushpi, you shall be rewarded.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#662

waiting for your next update of NY times. Also liking your new ff. please continue.

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#663

Hasini,

a suggestion yaar.. you could have opened a new thread for the new FF and Promo and you can add the link in your signature.. so the comments won't get mixed up..

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#664

Originally posted by: febinyusuff
Hasini,

a suggestion yaar.. you could have opened a new thread for the new FF and Promo and you can add the link in your signature.. so the comments won't get mixed up..

I wanted to do that in a separate thread, but you know what I was a little apprehensive about posting out to everyone.
The reason is very much the background of the story. What if people take offense to Geet's profession? and hence wanted to get the opinion first from where my NY Times family hangs out.
I know you guys will be kind to me.😃

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febinyusuff

@febinyusuff

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Posted: 14 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I wanted to do that in a separate thread, but you know what I was a little apprehensive about posting out to everyone.
The reason is very much the background of the story. What if people take offense to Geet's profession? and hence wanted to get the opinion first from where my NY Times family hangs out.
I know you guys will be kind to me.😃

Yaar .. don't worry.. I really think .. this FF will be close to reality.. and I am waiting for you start with it.. Geet's profession.. umm.. yeah .. but you donno how people takes it unless you start writing it.. As I told you earlier, everything lies in the way it's been told.. If you remember "Eleven Minutes" by Paulo Coelho ..based around a young prostitute named Maria. it's a widely accepted one and is one of my favoruites. And if you are using the same style of narration ( from Geet and Maan's perspective) I think this one can be one of your best !!!

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Water

@Water.

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I wanted to do that in a separate thread, but you know what I was a little apprehensive about posting out to everyone.
The reason is very much the background of the story. What if people take offense to Geet's profession? and hence wanted to get the opinion first from where my NY Times family hangs out.
I know you guys will be kind to me.😃

No, ppl r not going to take any offence.

Don worry about it.

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#667

...waiting eagerly to find out if Little Miss Subshine finds her Mr. Perfect.... ???

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punjabi.princes

@punjabi.princes

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#668

looking forward to your new FF.. interesting concept

there is another FF (We always have a choice) with a similar concept of her being a prostitute, but the writing style of that is much different from yours. lol and it is accepted by everyone too. so no one will take offence on that issue/topic.

You should start that soon too. Your an awesome writer so no matter what topic you write about, it will be great!

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priza

@priza

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Posted: 14 years ago

#669

hey I am really disappointed with Maan now....I am not eve sure if I understood it correctly....can you please reply to my PM

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#670

Hasini...

Phool aur Kaante....

I love Maan in this one....his inner child has appeared in this update....

When he said...'Vuf....aur mujhe laga ki tum mere baahon mein aana chati thi....that was so sweet....I could literally sense his inner self here.....with no masks....no shadows nothing...

But as soon as it came out....once again...his insecurities...and doubt had taken over...for instance...when he said....'Lagta hai..it's a sign...that I'm hurting you one way or the other'....

Lolz...when he made the comment about Yash.....'What's the point in moving in and taking the other room?' hehehe......when you wrote that line...it felt as if all the burdens had been lifted off his shoulder @ that particular point in time....

I loved Geet for the flowers....."To new beginnings....Love...Your wife Geet'...really touching...

Poor Maan...is questioning himself again....if his love deserved reciprocation from her......Awwww Maan.....

Thx.