FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Trust me you want the rewritten part. Its steamy...atleast to me.

Your story is good even without the steaminess too 😊 and i mean that in the best possible way!

But yeah if your making it steamy then who am I to deter you from exercising your creative freedom!😆

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-Aarya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: 6thElement

We dont use the 'D' word in this thread....😉. Lets use another code word incase you need it.

how about "Nooky' Cockney slang for 'D'

.... you mean "nook and cranny"...lol...love it..

as long as it's used correctly with fannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn******************y

you are good.. i like that

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t-mayur-sajan-j

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Posted: 14 years ago

#583

Hey Hasini
Another wonderful update
just loved it
why doesnt Geet want the people to know that her and maan are married? One thing i am confused about is that is she going to SF i thought she said she didnt wanted to go before but how come she is know, maybe i've missed a bit.....
Anyway so they're back in New York just loved the way she wanted to suprise Maan, it was cute and now she has to pacify maan
an awesome and beautiful update👏
so you're back from NY? or still there just wanted to know
waiting for you're next update(no pressure lol)😉😃
jasmin

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#584

Awesome! Fabulous! They are back in NY now.....first day at the office and they had a fight....lolz......it was good! It was nice to see Yash and Meera after so many days....and Dadi's arrangements....I really like that lady! Hmm..she wants her pota and poti....even I had not imagined Maan and Geet in that way.....guess it's because they have a lot to know about each other and properly understand each other and need to stabilize in their relationship first before heading the family way.....me thinks! That office surprise part was cute....lolz. Ah, Geet's retorts to Sasha and her reaction to those girls coming closer to Maan....it was funny....lolz. Uh-oh....she pushed Maan.....chalo now she will have to spend almost half her day manaoofying him.....lolz. It was a fun part.....do continue soon.

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luvraj4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#585

loved the part......geet's surprize was really nice....waiting for more

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Tesha

@Lov26

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Posted: 14 years ago

#586

Trust me you want the rewritten part. Its steamy...atleast to me.

Just started it. Here is a Jhalak.

He crushed my lips at first contact and his hands were moving fast to unbutton my shirt, when that was too time consuming, he just moved onto pull out the shirt that was tucked away inside my trousers. His hand raced back to feel the skin on my back and moved forward to grab me by the narrow of my waist...

That is so not fair Hasini.. Lol.. Not just a Jhalak, we want the whole thing.. 😛

U are tempting us.. Oh boyyy it seems it IS going to be a HOT & SEXY update. Bring it ON Girl.. 😉

Are u updating anytime soon? Not my intention to put any pressure on you, just wanna know.

~Tesha

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: Lov26

Trust me you want the rewritten part. Its steamy...atleast to me.

Just started it. Here is a Jhalak.

I dont think I can update anytime soon...maybe late night. Its only 3rd scene....I had planned 7 of them. I have 4 more to write and amend the 3 rd one.

Now that yo called it SE$%...I think I will rewrite it...Babaji....I cant deal with some words and comments...Guess I'm too shy just with the mention of the word and not the action itself...if you know what I mean...Just like Geet...😉

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Tesha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#588

I dont think I can update anytime soon...maybe late night. Its only 3rd scene....I had planned 7 of them. I have 4 more to write and amend the 3 rd one.

AWWWW so cute- u feeling shy.. hehehe its certain you are going to provide us with a rocking update with all these efforts you are putting in that.

So do not worry too much about it. Am sure what you have already written is perfect. The Jhalak u provided is a proof of that.

Edited by Lov26 - 14 years ago

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#589

Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley Nainon Taley Dhuan Chaley Dhuan Chaley
Raat Bhar Dhuan Chaley Jaanun Na Jaanun Na Jaanun Na Sakhi Ri
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...
Dekhte Hain Tan Mera Man Mein Chubhti Hai Nazar
Honth Sil Jaate Unke Narm Hothon Pe Magar
Ginti Rehti Hoon Maein Apni Karvaton Ke Silsile
Kya Karun Kaise Kahun Raat Kab Kaise Dhaley
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...

Ang Ang Mein Jalti Hain Dard Ki Chingariyaan
Masle Phoolon Ki Mehak Mein Titliyon Ki Kyariyaan
Raat Bhar Bechari Mehndi Pisti Hai Pairon Taley
Kya Karun Kaise Kahun Raat Kab Kaise Dhaley
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: pushpi
I dont know if I should scream out loud or just sigh deeply from delight!! I love my Mahi moment dedication!!

Oh please do continue soon Rachana Di! I cant wait to read more hehe *got butterflies in my tummy*😍

Hey,

I will for sure continue.....but after my exams r done yaar.....cus I do not just want to rush and write it for you. I want it to be special. If I get bored/tired of books n have a few hours.. for sure I will write it...if not den after exams. 17th is the last day.

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