FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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pushpi

@pushpi

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: Water.

Hey,

I will for sure continue.....but after my exams r done yaar.....cus I do not just want to rush and write it for you. I want it to be special. If I get bored/tired of books n have a few hours.. for sure I will write it...if not den after exams. 17th is the last day.

Hey,

Yeah after your finals sounds good. Today was my first day of finals and its not been a good start :-{ I'm hoping the remainder of the week will go happy.

All the best Di

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: Water.
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley Nainon Taley Dhuan Chaley Dhuan Chaley
Raat Bhar Dhuan Chaley Jaanun Na Jaanun Na Jaanun Na Sakhi Ri
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...
Dekhte Hain Tan Mera Man Mein Chubhti Hai Nazar
Honth Sil Jaate Unke Narm Hothon Pe Magar
Ginti Rehti Hoon Maein Apni Karvaton Ke Silsile
Kya Karun Kaise Kahun Raat Kab Kaise Dhaley
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...

Ang Ang Mein Jalti Hain Dard Ki Chingariyaan
Masle Phoolon Ki Mehak Mein Titliyon Ki Kyariyaan
Raat Bhar Bechari Mehndi Pisti Hai Pairon Taley
Kya Karun Kaise Kahun Raat Kab Kaise Dhaley
Jiya Jaley Jaan Jaley...

What is this song dedication for the Jhalak or to me?

@ ALL Please read

I'm on the flight back to SF....YAAY! Who am I kidding right? NY is alrite...but nothing can beat home sweet home.

So after the NY trip I have a coupe of ideas floating around. I thought I will post the Intro for each one of them and have voting done to see which one to continue first. They will more be like short stories and not like this one (this is a mega soap) where we are standing at what part 58 now? I think this one will easily hit 80 - 90....looking at the script.

Anyways will go home and post today's update while I continue writing in the flight.

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: 6thElement

What is this song dedication for the Jhalak or to me?

@ ALL Please read

I'm on the flight back to SF....YAAY! Who am I kidding right? NY is alrite...but nothing can beat home sweet home.

So after the NY trip I have a coupe of ideas floating around. I thought I will post the Intro for each one of them and have voting done to see which one to continue first. They will more be like short stories and not like this one (this is a mega soap) where we are standing at what part 58 now? I think this one will easily hit 80 - 90....looking at the script.

Anyways will go home and post today's update while I continue writing in the flight.

Jhalak!!!!! Have a safe flight Hasini.

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#594

Promo 1: Simply Surreal.

She walked through rose petals laid as a walkway for her to get to this room everyday. Her saree was tied to reveal more of her than what it was meant to do. It was a netted white saree with cheap red and silver zari that adorned it, her jewels were mere rip offs from movies that sold for hundreds at chadni chowk. She spoke 7 languages but show her a sentence from those 7 languages and she would not tell one from another. She catered to customers from all walks of life and to her they were mere bees flocking to a flower for honey. Once morning light hit their room floors, they all vanished like smoke for she was Chandni and only lasted for the night. They were mere illusions in her life to tell her that men existed, but none to show what else they were capable for...

She couldn't be chandni always could she?...there was a Geet inside her somewhere waiting to come out...to be loved and cherished...and above all to be owned forever.

Only heir to Khurana khandan, he had everything at his disposal. Far from the ways of a business man, he ruled Delhi in every way. He had nothing to lose except his Daadima, whom he moved around every couple of months to make sure she would never be his opponent's target. Maan Singh Khurana was known to all of Delhi's mafia as MK...but to Daadima he was Maan, for she didnt know his way of life and he had kept it that way for the last 3 years. 29 and well educated from UK, he slipped into organized crime after his only sister was shot down in a gundown between two of Delhi's hot heads. He had lost all rationale after that one night. Vengeance and anger ruled his life. He kept out of politics, brothels, drugs and liquor areas, but nothing else got past without MK's approval.

MK was being moved around for the Basu's had a hit on him that day. The night was silent and his merc was being closely followed. Bam! a loud noise jerked the arena. The rocket launcher from the gali had got his car and he was hit badly. The shrapnel had pierced his chest and shoulders. Dev was in the other car and got to MK in no time. They moved MK to the ambassador and drove a couple of yards and then once again moved him back to another jeep for cover.

The jeep raced the streets of Delhi to get to Chandni's Rooftop. It was one of the many brothels that the Basu's owned and that was the last place anyone would expect MK to be that night. This was the backup plan dictated to Dev from MK himself and man was he damn good at playing Scotland yard or what?

She was with another man, when Dev knocked the door. She scurried to grab the cheap sheets on her bed to get to the door.

Her eyes wide in shock, she received a wounded man carried by 2 other and Dev himself.

Little did she know that it was going to be that last night she had waited for...her Day had just arrived.

Will this one night change their life to give them their share of love?

Ok....tell me what do you want me to do? Seriously MK as bad ass was driving me crazy all this while. I had to write it down. I got pretty good story line racing in my mind and I have jotted down a couple of scenes already. Definitely not a long one...but to me it seemed interesting. Should I start this or what?

Its a pretty common story line, but if you trust me, I will keep it close to reality as much as possible. Also since its a run-of-the-mill start (not sure) let me know if this has been written by someone else. I honestly don't follow FF in this forum.

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#595

Hansini what your wrote? or did U copy somebody's FF..i am confuse..
Waiting for your Update..
Have a safe trip to SFO..

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: pop77
Hansini what your wrote? or did U copy somebody's FF..i am confuse..
Waiting for your Update..
Have a safe trip to SFO..

Wow...Wow....hold your horses...

What do you mean I copied someone's FF?

This is a promo...I think I have clearly written that this is something my original but a little commercial sounding in the promo...

Wanted to know if something like this is already out there...

Gosh

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Shaheda

@Newdime

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: 6thElement

What is this song dedication for the Jhalak or to me?

@ ALL Please read
I'm on the flight back to SF....YAAY! Who am I kidding right? NY is alrite...but nothing can beat home sweet home.
So after the NY trip I have a coupe of ideas floating around. I thought I will post the Intro for each one of them and have voting done to see which one to continue first. They will more be like short stories and not like this one (this is a mega soap) where we are standing at what part 58 now? I think this one will easily hit 80 - 90....looking at the script.

Anyways will go home and post today's update while I continue writing in the flight.

Anything will be fine from you. Could you go the round figure plz...100 plz since you will go to 90 so please create the mark of the century. ☺️

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Wow...Wow....hold your horses...
What do you mean I copied someone's FF?

This is a promo...I think I have clearly written that this is something my original but a little commercial sounding in the promo...
Wanted to know if something like this is already out there...

Gosh

Oh then i miss something here..

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: Newdime

Anything will be fine from you. Could you go the round figure plz...100 plz since you will go to 90 so please create the mark of the century. ☺️

Oi did you forget my obsession with numbers?. I will of course make it till 100...and then an epilogue to end it as if this is a story....just a script 😉

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#600

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Wow...Wow....hold your horses...
What do you mean I copied someone's FF?

This is a promo...I think I have clearly written that this is something my original but a little commercial sounding in the promo...
Wanted to know if something like this is already out there...

Gosh

...interesting... so the story is about love.. with solicits and the payment would be "love"...hmmmm...surely original...

why make maan a racketeer.???.

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