FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: 6thElement

I took the word from the soap, but the way he said

"tum bilkul woh lagte ho....Mishti"

That was a snatcher from here...

Once again the lap scene ending with a phone is also taken by CV's. So I dont know how to rewrite it.

Hai...Babaji...mera 3 gante waste ho gaya hai...ab mujhe phir se yeh sb likna padega...why not make it hotter then? ok...let me do that.

Update will only come in the night to my knowledge.

Hasini

u... simply rock... you are the best.est.... :)

we must chat .... make it hot ... hotter and go for it...

can't wait for tonight....

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#572

i'll even suggest the title for your next update............

"THE DEED"......

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Nishttha Nath

@EimenEnchanted

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#573

Hey! I'm a new reader..you are an awesome writer! I love the way you name the chapters..and relate them to the story.. :)
waiting for another beautiful update !

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#574

Lovely update.

So they are back to New York😊

Loved the flower-coffee part a lot.

Maan a bit offended by Geet for pushing him away. Lets see how she manofies her hubby😊

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#575

wowwwwwwww awesome update luved it
geet is totalllllllyyyyyyy confused

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568124

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: night13
i'll even suggest the title for your next update............

"THE DEED"......

We dont use the 'D' word in this thread....😉. Lets use another code word incase you need it.

how about "Nooky' Cockney slang for 'D'

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#577

Hey

Dont rewrite...just post what you had written...I am sure its going to be much better than the show in any case!

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: rsroopali
wowwwwwwww awesome update luved it
geet is totalllllllyyyyyyy confused

Ok...you gotta explain why she is confused?

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: 6thElement

We dont use the 'D' word in this thread....😉. Lets use another code word incase you need it.

how about "Nooky' Cockney slang for 'D'

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: -pixie-
Hey

Dont rewrite...just post what you had written...I am sure its going to be much better than the show in any case!

Trust me you want the rewritten part. Its steamy...atleast to me.

Just started it. Here is a Jhalak.

He crushed my lips at first contact and his hands were moving fast to unbutton my shirt, when that was too time consuming, he just moved onto pull out the shirt that was tucked away inside my trousers. His hand raced back to feel the skin on my back and moved forward to grab me by the narrow of my waist...

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago