FF: New York times with Maan and Geet Thread 2 - Page 51

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Maan:"45 more mts Geet. Ab kaisa hain?".

Geet:"Bahuth dard ho raha hain Maan"

I didn't even want to venture in that area for something kept telling me that I was the reason she was suffering. There was something that I had overlooked or had overdone'or perhaps underdone which had caused her this pain. My head was breaking into a million pieces, trying to figure out what it could be.

The 45 mts was the worst to pass. We landed and the car was ready to take us directly to the hospital. Daadima was going to meet us there with food for both of us. It was already 2.00 PM and she had not eaten anything. She couldn't swallow for her ear canal ached everytime she moved her jaw.

Originally posted by: Water.

Some r annoyed with Geet just because she is able to express her insecurites...whereas Maan keeps blaming himself in his thoughts....and is not able to express...though Geet is able to read his fear in his eyes...

I feel now I am rambling...😕

Originally posted by: 6thElement

There used to be this 5 rupees one, rectangular thin one'that is the one that I want. Maa hamesha dhukhan se wahi leke aate the'please.."

I was moved by the way she craved for such simple things. I felt like to a teenager for I wanted to impress her.

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Maan:"Kya hua'kyon has rahi ho'your mood swings are something I really have to watch out for"

I knew what he meant. The last couple of days had been quite a ride with my emotions running high. It had just been 4 days since our marriage and we had not had any real fun. I wondered what I could do for he had been in a state of panic ever since my ear infection started and prior to that he was handling me and my mood swings as well. Bechara Maan.

The rain started and it was a gentle sprinkle outside. He was watching rugby on his laptop and kept to himself even though we were seated close at the window seating. The power went out and his laptop shut down for the battery didn't work. It was purely functioning on the outlet power. He was pretty put off and it was understandable as his wife and his laptop, his second wife technically were both sick and out. I had an internal chuckle. I really wanted to do something for him to cure him of his boredom and I didn't want to let him down like his second wife. Something came up to my mind and my usual self would never do it, but for all that he had endured I wanted to now. I had given him a memorable valentine' day, but this day was no less special for me not to plan something nice for him.

I got up and wanted to make it inviting for him too. I went to his closet and picked up his white kurta that was now written off as mine and walked to change. He followed and stopped at the changing room.

<Maan's monologue>

It was the craziest thing I would sign up for, but she was doing it for me. She didn't have to dress up in that kurta, nor did she have to give me those...I was impressed for she was thinking about me even when her pain was blocking her mind from food and sleep. I gave in.

😛

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Potential Mahi moment 1:

(I have never written anything like this in my life, forget like this...I have never written in life)

Hasini...this is written only for you, forgive me for any mistakes

You (Hasini) are walking really in dtwon NY with shopping bags in your hand and someone bumps into you. It is not your fault, as it was the person's fault...who was not looking...and was in a rush. Your bags fall on the ground and a few items spill out of your shopping bags. You bend down and start picking up your items...

Person: I am so sorry, I was in a rush and was not looking where I was going, here let me help you...the person bends down to grab the same item (Victoria secret...) as the one you are trying to get...your right hand has reached the tissue wrapped Victoria secret item and the person has also grabbed the item but instead he feels your hand under his hand instead of the item...a shiver is felt by both of you...and suddenly you both jerk and look up at the same time... banging your heads ....

You: Owwww...and with your left hand start rubbing your eye....in the meantime both your hands are still together....

You open your eye and are amazed to see you a gorgeous hazel eyed handsome hunk (brown) looking at you very intently with his eyes full of concern.

Hunk: softly speaking....are you ok....I am so sorry...here let me take a look...he removes his hand from yours and brings both of his hands just over your left eye.

In the meantime.....you are still looking at his face, his soft eyes, his innocent face...and are lost in thought.....your feel some pain in your eye...but seeing his eyes you are just lost in them

You suddenly come to your senses as you feel a soft, warm blow of air in your eye....and his voice asking you....how does it feel now. Are you in any pain?

You stammer.....umm ...oh....yes.

He continues blowing in your eye....you realize that his face is very close to your face and in your heart is beating miles a minute. But you love the soft and warm blow of air in your eye and it is soothing you and taking the pain away.

In order to balance yourself, your hand reaches to hold him by his arm subconsciously.

He once again asks you...is it still hurting....and you look into his eyes and stammer ....I am ok.

His face relaxes and he continues to look at you and you at him. He says once again very softly.....'I am sorry'. You both break your trance and you notice your hand on his arm and remove it very quickly. He smiles at you and picks up all your items and helps you get up.

Hunk: Here let me help you carry these bags..

You reply, no it is ok...I can manage.....I was just about to take a cab.

Hunk: I do not mean to be rude but are you sure...you will manage?

You reply, yes thank you...and please do not worry..

Hunk: Ok...I will walk you to the cab....

You both walk to the cab with was waiting just a few feet away...

He helps you put the bags in the trunk and says....btw I am Arjun..it was nice to meet you and once again I apologize for what happened.

You smile and say...I am Hasini..and it is ok...do not worry.

You sit in the cab and look out of the window and see him standing on the curb waving a bye to you.

You smile and wave back...thinking about the whole incident...and murmur...to yourself...'Arjun'.....wondering if you will ever see those eyes again...

Hunk: Hasini...she has such a beautiful smile and I loved her eyes. They were so round and huge.. but I saw a lot of pain in her eyes. Was it just because of our heads banging or was it something else? I wonder if I will ever see her again....and walks away.

--End--

Rachana

Edited by Water. - 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 6thElement

Thank goodness...somebody caught it and made Maan a mere mortal. This is all I wanted to hear and that was the objective of that part.

A big THANK YOU....

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Oh I thought Maan's insecurities were always out there...She rejected him...like 2-3 times?

In the whole story he has been pacing himself so as to not scare her off...only at 1 or 2 places has he broken down and lost control...There was no question of Maan not being a mere mortal- he has this very earthy quality about him throughout this story...

He is insecure and his insecurities are tied to Geet..whereas Geet's are more related to her past..I don't know if I am making sense anymore..

I seem to have offended everyone with my one comment about why Geet wasn't willing to look forward instead of dwelling on the past. I am sorry Hasini, the intention was not to hijack your thread or offend anyone.