Originally posted by: Starry_night
I really liked your new username.....it's cool!
Lovely update! Amazing! Loved how Maan was looking after her and was worried for her. Glad that it's not something serious that Geet is suffering from.....I am having a craving for chocolate after reading that Dairy Milk bit.....will have to wait till tomorrow morning to get that particular one.....lolz. Dadima is really nice.....good to see her concern for Geet. Ah, the whole window sitting part was great....guess I won't ever have enough of it.....lolz. Awww.....Geet loves him so much.....she, despite not being well herself was ready to go out in the rain and play rugby just to make him feel better.....me loves their love! Loved it how she evoked him to play with her......their game and little rain romance.....too good! He kissed her just to relieve her of her pain.....that's actually very cute of him....lolz. Hmm....office arguements......even am sure that we are in for a lot of fun moments in the office......especially with their nok-jhoks and the fact that they can hardly keep their hands off each other.....lolz.
About the candle part, it was a turn-off in the show.....really did not expect it to go that way.....but I loved it here.....it was so couple like.....just the way it should be for two people who are so much in love.....it need not necessarily be intimate but some cozy moments are fine.
Hope you are having a great time in NY....it's your favourite afterall....
Thanks Starry night for the long comment. I have been biting off chocolate since last night. He He!
I was reading an article on chocolate and how to eat it when I saw another that compared the endorphins produced when Kissing and eating chocolate. Couldnt resist myself from putting it into the scene and it could have ended up as Jake's scene 😉. Actually the truth is I wrote up a lot of stuff that was not planned for this update. It all happened after I came down to NY.
Trust me starry night I could have gotten a whole lot cuter, but I already feel Maan's machoness in the FF was fading. So I had to bring back that using the last scene where he sort of manhandles her.
Which of course he has never done in the FF. Manhandle is probably too strong a word. Sorry Maan.
Yeah office arguments is something I have been thinking off, but I really doubt my ability to write it. I will starting soon, so that I have time to edit it properly.
@ Rachana: I think in person, I'm so lost to even identify Mahi moments. So nothing to talk about there for I will not even know it happened. So Dumb!
@ Sharmake: Thanks for your comments. You also make it a point to leave me something to read.
@ Punjabi Princess: Thanks. For all the time I stayed indoors today, I will make up for it tomm. Office work came up and so I stayed back without going to Central park. Will hang out late night in the city.
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